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Hey guys sorry for late post again.........but here is the next part hope you guys will enjoy it........
PART 13

Vrinda very frustrated leaves and comes to her room. She looks into the mirror " I m not looking like an alien wat the hell he thinks of himself khud ko bara handsome samjta hai. Mein abuss se kabhi bat nahi karun gi. Idiot….." saying this she enters into washroom.

Yug: Its more than an hour Vrinda left this place lagta hai naraz ho gai hai. Oh God so stupid of me na ab phir sorry bolna pary ga which is very hard for me.

As he is thinking all this Vrinda comes downstairs. She had changed her clothes and had taken a bath while water droplets still dripping down her long hair. Yug wasn't able to stop himself from watching her. As she glances at Yug she turns her face way showing that she is very upset with wat Yug said. She comes to the kitchen and finds Pooja busy wid her mom she smiles to herself " lagta hai maa ko impress karny ka plan start ho gia hai."

Vrinda: Hi Pooja tum kab ain?

Pooja: mujhe tou kafi time ho gia hai yahan aiy huy woh Neel se notes leny thy aur socha tum se bhi mil lon gi par madam ki ankh hi nahi khul rahi thi.

Vrinda: ohhhh tou maa se kah dia hota woh mujhe jaga datin par tum ne tou mera pocha hi nahi q kisi khas kam se ai ho.

Vrinda winks at Pooja while she sternly looks at her. At the same time Yug enters the kitchen.

Yug: Aunty jee aur madat karun aap ki coz yahan pay tou koi hai hi nahi jo aap ki help kary….hai na…….

Radhika: Thanx beta tum ne pehly hii meri itni help ki woh bhi boht hai.

Yug: acha aunty ab hum chalty hain Neel ka tou kuch pata hi nahi chala but han Vrinda plz Neel ko keh dena k kal mein uss se college mein milon ga.

Vrinda: Ok.

Radhika: ary Yug aisy kaisy jaa sakty ho tum thori dair aur ruk jao na tum dono k sath itna maza araha tha.

Yug: nahi aunty dair ho rahi hai phir kabhi ajain ge.

Radhika: thek hai jaisy tumhari marzi.

Yug: ok aunty take care bye.

Radhika: bye.

Yug and Pooja leave while Vrinda is left with Radhika in kitchen.

Radhika: Boht hi achy bachy hain Yug aur Pooja. Chalo ab mujhe pori tasali hogai hai k mery bachon ki dosti achy logon k sath hai. Kitny kismet waly hon gay jin ko Yug jaisa damad aur Pooja jaisi bahu mil gi.

Next day at college:

Yug, Vrinda, Pooja, Neel, Ghithika and Sharad are sitting on one table. Yug looks at Vrinda below his eyebrows and notices that she is still quite angry. Yug thinks to himself "lagta hai ab tak naraz hai isliy tou kuch bol nahi rahi." Suddenly he thinks of a plan.

Yug: hey Sharad look at that girl she is amazing na……

Sharad: which one.

Yug: that maroon one.

Sharad: cmon Yug we can't see her as she is having her back towards us…..

While saying this Sharad gives a glance to Ghithika who is furiously looking at her.

" ohhhhh mar gai kisi larki ko tou ab dekhna bhi paap hai. Baap re baap….."

Yug: Sharad jo peche se itni sundar dekh sakti hai who actually kitni sundar ho gi nahi……

Saying this Yug gives a devilish look to Vrinda who is getting hyper. While all of a sudden the girl turns towards them looking at her Yug gets shocked. He could hardly just say "Vineeta"

The lady advances towards Yug. The girl is tall, fair in complexion wid thick and brown hair wearing a black skirt and top ( I m writing about Vineeta keeping Maya of Kis desh in mind). She comes and stands in front of Yug. Yug looking at Vrinda smiles to himself. And stand up to hug her.

Yug: hey Vineeta.

Vineeta: Yug darling I can't believe this u still remember me.

Yug: hey wat are you saying tumhari jesi larki tou koi chah k bhi nahi bhula sakta. Well u are looking much more beautiful rather stunning than last time I met u"

Its hard for Vrinda tolerating all this as she can't see Yug wid someone else and Yug hugged that gal was making her much more feeling painful. Desperately she left the place. Seeing this Yug gets happy "jealous ho gai so jo mein ne socha tha wahi hua she loves me too."

Vineeta: Yug are u ok itni tariff tum ne meri pehly tou kabhi nahi ki.

Yug: ab jab tum achi lag rahi tou kahna tou chahiy na.

Vineeta: ok Yug gotta go zarori kam hai ok. Take care bye.

Yug: ok bye.

Neel: guys class ka time ho raha hai so lets go.

Yug: ok tum log class mein jao mein aur Sharad ghar chalty hain.

Yug and Sharad leaves the college while Ghithika, Neel and Pooja moves towards the class. But Ghithika is thinking of Vrinda the way she left wat made her to leave she tend to know wats going on in her mind.

Ghithika: Neel Pooja tum log class k liy jao mujhe aik zarori kam yad agia hai.

Neel: aisa bhi kiya zarori kam hai jot um class chor rahi ho.

Ghithika: kuch kam aisy hoty hain jo sab se ziada important hoty hain tum log class mein jao.

Ghithika leaves the place. After searching her every where.

Ghithika: ary yar har jaga dekh lia Vrinda hai kahan. Ab aik hi jaga hai jahan woh ho sakti hai.

Ghithika comes to a beach. She looks here and there and all of sudden she finds Vrinda sitting on a rock. " I knew she will be here."

Ghithika: Vrinda kiya hua yahan kiya kar rahi ho.

Vrinda: Ghithika tum yahan tumahari tou class thin a.

Ghithika: meri dost parishan hai mein class kaisy ly sakti hun. Acha batao kiya hua.

Vrinda: kuch bhi tou nahi.

Ghithika: Vrinda tum sab se bat chupa sakti ho par mujhe se nahi. Chalo batao kiya hua tum aisy wahan se q agai?

Vrinda: Ghithika bat ye hai…….. (then she tells every thing about Yug and the she felt about him wat made her leave the place today.) pata nahi Ghithika kiya ho gia hai mujhe.

Ghitika smiles at Vrinda: meri jan tujhe Yug se pyar ho gia hai. Tum ja k ussy bata q nahi deti.

Vrinda: nahi nahi pata nahi who mery bary mein kiya sochta hai mein aisy kuch nahi kah sakti ussy. Dekho na agar who mujhe pyar nahi kart tou iss se hamari dosti pe farq pary ga jo mein nahi chahti.

Ghithika: hummm tou pehly yeh pata karna ho ga k who tumhary bary mein kiya sochta hai.

Vrinda: chalo choro yeh sub ab tum ne class chor di haitou chalo mery sathkuch prep karo.

Ghithika: Kis baat ki.

Vrinda: ary yr ajj rat ki flight se Dubai se mera best friend Rahul araha hai. Uski prep.

Ghithika: Rahul…….. Vrinda Yug kay dil ki bat pata karny ka plan mery pas agya.

Vrinda: really…..

Ghithika: now do as I say…….

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i loved it really gr8 yaar i loved it and now we will get to see Yug jealous cant wait for that please hun dont take long like you did with the last two updates please update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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There are many more to come from Vrinda to jealous Yug but buddy again i m sorry for not updating in time as i m badly stuck wid my assignments. but next updat is few minutes away.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84

Guys here is the next part hope u guys will enjoy it.😉

PART 14

Vrinda and Githika leaves the place. In the car Githika explains how and when they have to carry out their plan.

Vrinda: Ghithika will it work woh kuch aur tou nahi sochy ga na. kahin ussy yeh tou nahi lagy ga k ???..

Ghithika: come on Vrinda I m sure it will work.

Vrinda: ok. Tum sham tak ruk jana hum dono sath airport chaly jain ge.

Ghithika: ary yr mein chali jati par kuch kam hai mujhe iss liy nahi ja sakti. Par tum Rahul ko sub kuch bata dena aur uss se poch bhi lena k who iss natak ka hissa banna chahta hai ya nahi. Ok.

Vrinda: Thek hai??

At Air port:

Vrinda is With Neel waiting for Rahul.

Neel: vrinda are u sure Rahul ay ga flight tou kab ki achuki hai.

Vrinda: uff Neel thora wait karo na who aiga.

Meanwhile she feels a hand on her shoulder as she turns around she shrieks. "Rahul" here we see a guy in black shirt and geans smiling ( I m introducing Jay bhanushali as Rahul right here)

Vrinda: Rahul he is my brother Neel and Neel he is??

Rahul: Hi I m Rahul nice meeting u Neel.

Neel: Nice meeting u too Rahul.

Vrinda: itni dair q kardi hun??..

Rahul: oh God VrindaKaisa hun kia kar raha hun yeh sub pochny se pehly hi dair q kar di tum kabhi nahi badlo gi.

Vrinda: Jo Badl jai who Vrinda tou nahi na q??. chalo ab ghar chalty hain sub tumhara wait kar rahy hain??

Rahul: ok lets go.

And all the three leaves the air port and set off to home..

At Vrinda's home:

Rahul, Vrinda and Neel comes to their living room. Vrinda introduces Rahul to her family.

Kushal: Kaisy ho Rahul ghar waly sub kaisy hain sub.

Rahul: mein thek hun uncle papa sub thek hain ap logon ko sub both miss karty hain aur Mom tou Radhika aunty ko both miss karti hain infact woh sub tou ana chahty thay par papa ki kuch meetings ki waja se nahi asaky.

Radhika: acha batain watain sub bad mein khanna thanda ho raha hai dinner kar lo ok.

Every one moves towards the dinning room. After dinner Vrinda takes Rahul to her room and shuts the door.

Rahul: hey Vrinda kiya hua yar lagta hai tum ne mujhe kuch ziada miss kiya hai q kisi aur ka dimagh khanny ko nahi mila tha.

Vrinda: shut up Rahul. Aik both bari problem ho gai hai.

Rahul: (worried) kyun kiya hua sub thek tou hai na??.

Vrinda: Rahul I AM IN LOVE?..

Rahul: what????

Rahul hearing this burst out laughing???. Vrinda U can't be serious tumhe aur Pyar???

Vrinda: Rahul its not a joke.

Rahul: tumhary honton pe lafz PYAR hi both ajeeb lagta hai tou tumhe Pyar hona??. Oh God its redicolous.

Vrinda: ok thek hai tum hanson mein tum se bat nahi karti??..

Rahul: Ok well any thing can happen in this world kaun hai who Badnaseeb?.

Vrinda: What??????????//

Rahul: just kidding kaun hai who???

Vrinda: YUG.

On the other Yug is in his room watcing movie bhool bhulayian. He is watching a song.

And imagines himself and Vrinda there dancing on the song.. The song is??.

Labon ko labon pe sajao

Kiya ho tum mujhe ab batao.

Labon ko labon pe sajao

Kiya ho tum mujhe ab batao.

Thor do khud ko tum meri bahon mein, meri bahon mein, meri bahon mein meri bahon mein?????.

Tery ehsason mein

bhegy lamhaton mein mujhe ko dubi dishnagi se hai.

teri adaon se dilkash nagahon se in lamhon mein zinagi se hai?????.

While Vrinda is telling Rahul every thing about her and Yug.

Vrinda: Rahul Mujhe nahi pata Yug mery bary mein kiya sochta hai bus ab tumhe meri help karni hai .

Rahul: Don't worry Vrinda mein aisi acting karon ga k Yug kay dil ki bat khud uss k zuban pea jay gi. So kab milwa rahi ho Yug se.

Vrinda: Kal raat ki party mein?..

Rahul: Party???

Vrinda: han party tumhary welcome k liy mein ne kal aik party rakhi hai ussi mein tum Yug se milo gay.

Rahul: ok boss well mera room kahan hai mujhe both neend arahi hai. I m tired but tum tou both selfish ho pehly apna kam bad mein auron ka araam.

Vrinda smiles to herself and takes him to his room.

Next day Vrinda gets ready and is standing in front of mirror and thinks to herself about wat will happen after wat they have planned. " jo bhi ho ga ab dekha jai ga par mujhe tumhary reaction ka intizar hai."

At college Yug is looking around for Vrinda as every one is here in the college caf but she is not here. Ghithka looking at him smiles to herself. " Kiya hua Yug Kuch dhoond rahy ho kiya"

Yug: nahi tou kuch nahi.

Ghithika still smiling: Neel ajj Vrinda nahi ai??

Neel: Vrinda?? woh actually kal rat ko uss ka best friend Rahul aia hai Dubai se tou uss k sath hai.

Vrinda: tou mujhe kaun Yad kar raha hai.

Ghithika: Vrinda?.. ofcourse mein yad kar rahi thi tumhe( looking at Yug) Ao betho na nahi yar mujhe dair ho raho hai mein tum sub ko invite karny ai hoon Ajj rat ki party mein location Neel bata dy ga raat 8 baje ok sub ne ana hai Pooja, Ghithika, sharad And Yug Zaroor ana mein wait karon gi (Looking at Yug in his Eyes)

Pooja: sure hum zaror aingy

Vrinda: ok So see u tonight. Bye.

At the party:

Vrinda is dressed in Black western dress and is looking superub everyone has arrived but still she is terribly waiting as Yug is not there. Rahul comes closer to Vrinda.

Rahul: Vrinda who aiga bhi ya nahi. Itni dair ho gai hai?.

Vrinda: woh aiga zaroor aiga he has to come???

Edited by sweetouch_98 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
HAHAHAHAHAHA ... Rahul is such a funnii guy naa? seems lyk he lyks takin da mick out of vrinda!!! LOL
OMG... cant wait to see Yugs reaction... hope he dont start a fite!!! 😆
luved it hun... plz update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO yaar why did you stop it there god you stopped at the best part what is it with you FF writers always keeps us hanging WHY
ok i'm calmed down now i loved it hun and i think you got the perfect guy as Rahul love jay 😃 and gosh cant wait to see Yugs reaction sooooo pleaseeeee hun update soon cant wait to read the next part😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
hun... when r u updating the nxt part?
really wanna know if Yug comes!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
OMG OMG OMG!!!!
wat a FF yaar!!!! just mindblowing...very cute..👍🏼 👏
love alll the jodis..shooo shweet 😳 😳 😳
just read all the part and loved all of them...👍🏼
OMG..im sooo excited to know wat would happen now.. 👍🏼
plzzzzz update soon..plz plz plz...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
its really veryy nice......lykd it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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well i just catched up wid all the paets now.
and its soo good to read loads together 1
i love the way you r portraying yuvi.
lol first he gets her jealous to find out how she feels, and now she is playing the msame game.
great updates hunny.
will read the next ones too.

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