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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys moving towards next part hope u guys will enjoy it.

PART 11

Vrinda gets up frightenedly and jumps out of her bed.

"Oh God I m late. Yug will be waiting for me. It seems we are going to fight again and this time it is going to be about why I m late."

Meanwhile she gives a glance to the clock on the wall and is shocked to see its just 5 while the time fixed for meeting by Yug was 10.

"Ary yeh tou abhi 5 baj rahy hain. Lagta hai????. Meri ghari kharab hai. Let me check out the time somewhere else."

She leaves the room goes downstairs and reaches the living room. She finds that no one is there. Every one is in their room. She advances towards the lawn and finds out that its still dark which confirms that its not the clock which is out of order but its she who woke up early. She comes back towards the living room and observes the time in the clock that its 5 o'clock.

"Aj mein kaisy itni jaldi uth gai" then she remembers her meeting with Yug. She smiles to herself and comes to her room. As its too early she tries to sleep but is unable to. She atarts checking her dresses in hope of finding something better to wear but finds nothing suddenly she remembers something. She takes out her suitcase and takes out a dark green colour (the colur she was wearing last day in the show I loved that colour so I m adding This colour.)

Anarkali shirt with golden pajamaalong with green dupatta and golden lace around its borders.

" I think this is the perfect dress that I should wear."

At Yug's home

After having break fast every one had left for their offices. Pooja is also ready for her college and is about to leave when she notices Yug standing in the middle of room wid number of shirts around him he seems quite confused.

Pooja: kiya hua bhaiyya!!!!!!

Yug: Nothing as such I was just thinking wat should I wear.

Pooja: Q lagta hai date pe ja rahy hojis k liy itni preparation ho rahi hai.

Yug: Pooja!!!!!!!

Pooja: ok ok bhaiyya ap jo bhi pahno gay dashing lago gy afterall Pooja k bhai ho kuch tou effect hoga. Well I think you should wear this yellow shirt, with black jacket and jeans. This will???

Yug: wait wait wait kiya kaha tum ne tumhara bhai hun isliy dashing lagon ga wait aj mein tumhe sidha karta hun??.

At this Pooja just runs out of the room to save herself. Yug looks at wat pooja has asked him to wear he smiles to himself and decides to wear that stuff.

" I should wear this to meet my date."

At the Cafe

Yug is waiting outside the caf for vrinda. He looks at his clock.

"She is ten minutes late."

As he looks up his mouth opens wide he is astonished at the beauty of the lady standing in front of him its non other than Vrinda. He can't do anything but just to stare her. He is completely lost in her beauty. He starts moving towards her. While a song is being played at the back. (The song is from dostana I hope it fits in the above situation)

Mery Maula Maula mery Maula man matwala q hua, hua Re man maula Maula mery Maula.

Kis taraf hai Aasman

Kis taraf zameen

Khabr nahi khabr nahi

Jab se aiya hai sanam

Mujhe ko khud ki bhi khabr nahi khabr nahi

Hosh gul sapno k mein bandon pul Ankh kab khuli khabr nahi khabr nahi Man Maula??.

Jany kab kahan kaisy

Tery ho gai kaisy

Hum tou sochty hi rah gai

Aur pyar ho gai??..

She puts her hand on his shoulder and shakes him abit. He feels if he is going to faint.

Vrinda: Hello??..

Yug: Ohhhhhh Hello.

Vrinda: wat happened kiya soch rahy ho.

Yug: Nothing I was just admiring the beauty of God.

Yug stares at rinda. Both share an eye lock moment.

Yug: tou chalin andar.

Vrinda: Sure.

Both go inside and have a seat.

Yug: wat would u like to have tea, coffee, or juice

Vrinda: Coffee will do much better.

And yug oders two coffees.

Yug: so Kiya kahna tha ap ko Neel aur Pooja k bary mein.

Vrinda gets confused at this question she thinks to her self "ohhh God mein tou yeh soch k yahan nahi ai thi k mujhe Neel k bary mein bat karni hai ab agar kuch nahi kaha tou issy lagy ga k mein iss se milny k liy ana chahti thi.

Yug: hello kiy soch rahi ho.

Vrinda: "Kuch nahi who mein kahna chahti thi k hamin apni families ko Pooja aur Neel k bary mein bata den chahiy." Vrinda to her self Thanx God bach gai.

Yug: Ithink yeh abhi sahi time nahi hai hamy pehly Neel aur Pooja ko un se milny ka chance dena chahiy agar woh dost ban kar un ko impress karty hain tou I think it will have better effect.

Vrinda: par yeh sub hoga kaisy.

Yug: Just leave it to me I have planned it already Kab aur kaisy karna hai I will let u know later.......

Edited by sweetouch_98 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
Great update yaar! I loved it. I can't wait to see where you take the story from here. Update soon😊

By the way, I really love that green dress on Vrinda too.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
lovely update cant wait to read the next part😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
Lovely part I loved the song, its one of my favourites, going to have to listen to it!
Vrinda in green, aww she looks stunning.
Liked Pooja and Yug's relationship!
Cont soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Hey guys i m really really late in writing the next part. But sweeties its very hard to write about YuVi under the influence of current track but still i m trying to do this. well i will update the next part in a day or two. Well really sorry guys for such a long wait.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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np hun... take ur tym... as long as u update! =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys i m really really sorry for such a late update But i was badly stuck in my college its assignment and blah blah. i sometimes feel very 😡 at being a student. But i promise that from tuesday onwards i will update regularly thats a promise.
Well guys here is the next part but i m sorry again dear that its a quite short update. I hope u guys won't mind. i just followed this rule that something is better than nothing. Sorry hun.....
Well here we go with the updat i hope u guys will like it.
PART 12
The next day Vrinda wakes up. As usual its quite late. She is feeling very thirsty and starts to for water in refrigerator but all the bottles are empty. So, she decides to go and look into the kitchen for water. As she is going down and is at the last step suddenly she slips and is about to fall when she feels an arm below her waist a hand grabbing her palm which holds her. As she was falling she had closed her eyes. Now she was feeling her self in someone arms. She slowly opened her eyes and to her utmost astonishment she was in Yug's arms. She was deeply lost in his eyes. The way he was smiling at her she was loving that too. She was feeling herself in air at the thought that she is in Yug's arm she felt everything disappearing around her. She wanted this moment should be saved forever. While a song Mann Maula mery maula ( as I used it earlier) being played at the back. While Yug is also feeling the same. He never expected to be so close to her so soon after rescuing her from the clif. He is totally lost in the beauty of her eyes. She was in cream colour night dress. Sunlight was giving a golden tinge to her long hair and she was just looking like an angel. After staying in this pose for a minute or two Vrinda was pulled out of her dreams and she started to think that she must be dreaming about Yug. How he can come here. It's her home. So she politely said " thanx Neel"
Yug: What Neeel Hey Vrinda are you OK its me Yug.
Vrinda: ohhh Hi I thought how u can be here after all its my home. It….. my…..home.

And she pulls him to the back of stairs and look here and there while he is astonished at wat's going on with this gal.

Vrinda: Yahan any ki kiya zarort thi mujhe bula lia hota agar koi kam tha agar kisi ne dekh liya tou both bari problem ho jai gi.

Yug: oh……..madam tum hamesha ulta kyuon sochti ho mein yahan tum se milny q aonga. Mein tou Pooja k sath aia hoon Remember I m Neel's friend Right……..
Vrinda: Ohhhh mujhe laga…..

Yug: kiya laga tumhe.

Vrinda: Kuch nahi.

Yug: waise tum batain both chupati ho well mein jo sochta hon Keh deta hoon jaise ap mery mann mein jo bat……. (While he gives afull glance to her) Hai who….

Vrinda: kaisi bat……

Yug: yahi keh iss nite dress mein tum kuch ziada hii means extra…….

Vrinda places her hand on his mouth and shyly looks down: Bus ab choro na…..

Yug: kiya……

Vrinda: Yug tum bhi naa…..

Vrinda turns around and is about to leave.

Yug: lagta hai phir kuch ghalat soch rahi ho well iwanted to say k iss nite dress mein both ajeeb lag rahi ho tum. Completely an alien.

Vrinda: what……….Yeh kiya bakwas kar rahy ho.

Yug: well jo mann mein kah raha hoon tumhe kiya laga tha k mein yeh kahon k both Hottt lag rahi ho but sorry aisy complements mein har kisi konahi deta (while Vrinda is frowning at what he is saying) I give these complements to those who really deserve it.

As he turns around he notices that Vrinda has left while Yug smiles to himself politely saying: I love You Vrinda as you deserve to be loved by anyone.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
Aw, that was sooooooooo mean of Yug!😆 Poor Vrinda, she must be feeling like a fool. Honestly, though, his comment about the nightdress was exactly something he would say in the show. Great update...though short.😛😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
ohhhh Vrinda in yugs arm man dying to see that in the show thaks yaar for the lovely update loved it and that alien thing was sooo Yug😆😆 old Yug that is miss our old Yug a lot will he ever come back
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
@ Neetu there is something more in next part about Yug. you will find him more mean......
@ binky yap binky i also want old yug but new Version of Vrinda not the one that currently is in the serial.

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