*Sunday delights* FF 'entangled* last part updated

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attiya1.3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali
Wow Attiya no words to praise I am speechless now I am stunned by or update omg 😉 U ve taken me too a ddifferent world I am shocked with happiness with ur FF 😳 getting goosebumps reading the final part 👏

Thanks dear for lovely reply😳

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Mansi_jg

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Omg...temperature rise in toshniwal house!! Brilliant ff attiya.,I am speechless very beautifully written, you should continue the ff it's so romantic and wish to see in the show .

Thanks a lot. Keep writing.

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attiya1.3

@attiya1.3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg
Omg...temperature rise in toshniwal house!! Brilliant ff attiya.,I am speechless very beautifully written, you should continue the ff it's so romantic and wish to see in the show .
Thanks a lot. Keep writing.

Thanks a lot.this ff is complete.

hope CWS provide me something to write on coming sunday😃

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Reshma

@AVRfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Thanks Attiya for such a fantastic ff update.👏

I was daydreaming today after reading those hot scenes...too good dear! You're an amazing writer please keep writing some more dear. You make me go in a different world with those bold scenes 👏

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hindifan

@hindifan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Why, why, Attya? Why that lamp should fall in that moment? Why didn't it fall two, three or ten minutes later? That damn lamp spoiled everything, yaar!

I enjoyed to the fullest your fiction, dear. 👍🏼

For the next amazing story you'll write, please insert one filler chapter when they fix lamps, windows, curtains, carpets, walls, everything, then let the story end naturally 😆

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attiya1.3

@attiya1.3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: AVRfan
Thanks Attiya for such a fantastic ff update.👏
I was daydreaming today after reading those hot scenes...too good dear! You're an amazing writer please keep writing some more dear. You make me go in a different world with those bold scenes 👏

Thank you dear😃

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attiya1.3

@attiya1.3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: hindifan
Why, why, Attya? Why that lamp should fall in that moment? Why didn't it fall two, three or ten minutes later? That damn lamp spoiled everything, yaar!
I enjoyed to the fullest your fiction, dear. 👍🏼
For the next amazing story you'll write, please insert one filler chapter when they fix lamps, windows, curtains, carpets, walls, everything, then let the story end naturally 😆

😆..lamp cannot be fixed too soon.

Thanks😃

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TSMSPfan

@TSMSPfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Attiyaa darling!!!! Hugs!!! You used that bathtub in a cutie way!!! Love it!!! When he locked the front door you don't know how much I got relived!!! Yeah you gave the feeling as if I am watching the episode!!! But that lamp 😡 I was expecting a lip lock!!! 😛 actually how you concluded it... it's pretty natural and so nice !!! Thank you!!!

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attiya1.3

@attiya1.3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: TSMSPfan
Attiyaa darling!!!! Hugs!!! You used that bathtub in a cutie way!!! Love it!!! When he locked the front door you don't know how much I got relived!!! Yeah you gave the feeling as if I am watching the episode!!! But that lamp 😡 I was expecting a lip lock!!! 😛 actually how you concluded it... it's pretty natural and so nice !!! Thank you!!!

Liplock itni asani s kahan😆

Thanks btw😃