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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Here it is.it is getting long then expected😆
I hope I complete it before CWS show some jealous track
Disclaimer:
I made characters little open and bold😆
Used Hindi based on google.hope its right😃

PART 2:

A ray of light was hitting his face.uma tried to open his eyes and figured out what is unique about this moment.the room was all dark ,giving it a peaceful ambiance and warmth like he always wished to have when he pray.suddenly ,he felt someone heart beat as close as his and look to his left.

It was moment of realization!

Realizing why on earth,husband wife is considered most complete relation.you pick any religion,its placed on highest : one declare wife as " ardhangini" meaning other half of men body signifying one cannot live without other.

In one ,both are considered " libaas"( clothes) of each other; hiding each other weakness,enhancing each other strengths ,yet covering each other in embrace.as it is believed, Adam and eve were married first making it first relation of universe.they were not made parents but,companion of each other ,fitting in each other gaps.

Uma was completely mesmerized.in her deep sleep,kanak moved her head ,making uma's view clear to admire this sleeping beauty.he slid away hair strands at back of her ears as if they were acting as an obstacle in his meditation.

Uma's slight touch generated unusual sensation in kanak's subconsciousness and she opened her eyes.her vision directly met uma's dark black eyes giving her chill in her whole body.
Though it was the most beautiful morning she could ever witnessed in her life! Uma was just inches away from her and she was in his arms.her breath just stuck their in her throat.

Meanwhile, uma was looking her like he its the only work he was assigned in this world.finally,nature decided to interrupt in between these lost souls as a pigeon strike with window creating a thunder in whole room.

They both come out of their admiring sessions and realised their positions.it took a nano second to uma to drift away from kanak.he stood from the mattress and tried to catch his breath and thoughts as well.

Kanak mouth was wide open as uma push her back.
" hawww! Daku Singh pushed me! He just pushed me as if I was only staring at him.he himself was looking me too intensely from past so many minutes and is acting like I was after his virginity"

Kanak stood up from her position and knock at uma " why you pushed me!"

Uma came back from his thoughts and successfully pulled off his usual angry expression
."I didn't push you.I was just standing up.and by the way,I want to ask you,why you came down to my mattress.don't forget kanak that just 20 days are left in our divorce and I don't want to have any trouble in these 20 days.anything can happen in sleep!" Uma cleverly put all blame on kanak for past events.

Kanak was having confused expressions on her face as if she was trying to decipher what uma meant with word trouble and as she realized ,she had a side smile on her face.

" first thing; I am sorry for sleeping beside you.but,if you had too much problem,you could had simple call out my name.
Secondly, what you meant by trouble?" Kanak inquired with usual chirpness in her voice.

Uma realized what he had blurted out but, it was too late.
" woh...I meant to say...that...just leave it.

" Uma just felt helplessness at its peak.he turned and wanted to get out of this room as soon as possible.

" just say it Na, you are worried that you may lose your ..." Kanak intentionally left the blank so that uma mind could fill it.

" lose what! How could you think and say such a indecent word in front of me.I am not worried about my virginity as it won't create problem for me but, it will surely trouble you in future" uma spoke in rocket speed to kanak.
It was getting difficult for kanak to control her laughter.uma said what she wanted.

" virginity! How that come in between.I meant to say you may lose bet with vansh bhaiya about divorce.but, uma I didn't expected such aroused expression by you.cheee!!!

Uma felt like a trap around him.what he just said.these hormones Na!

" I thought that...you meant..." Uma fumbled with his thoughts.

" I think you should meditate.it will help you to control it."

"What?"

"Yaun vassaana! ( sexual lust) I learned that word in your books" Kanak laughed at uma's condition.

Uma wanted to put tape on her mouth.
" I should get ready." Uma wanted to escape from this situation.

Kanak looked at window and screamed. " umaaa!"

" what happened?" Uma asked her impatiently.

" uma! Sun!" Kanak gulped down her condition.

" so what? Have you seen sun for first time" uma looked disgusted with kanak's reply.

" uma ,sun has risen"

" so,it rises everyday"

" uma,sun has risen fully and its rays are coming in our room." Kanak uttered in disbelief.

" it means...it means ...brahmamahurat has passed" kanak was shocked.

It was reality check for uma.he turned and quickly removed curtains.sun welcomed him with his full smile.
" its all because of you! In my 30 years, I have never skipped any mahurat and today..." Uma felt short of breath.

" how its my fault! I didn't snooze your mind in night.you can wake up on your own.
You can admit it that you had amazing sleep and by the way,how come 30 years? You started waking up in mahurat since your birth." Kanak looked at him cunningly.

" you are impossible." Uma rushed to closet and pulled out of his clothes.

" I will go to washroom first.you take too much time as if you are taking some brides shower.and my clothes take time too.you just have to wear this dhoti as you don't wear kurta most of the time" kanak quickly pulled out her dress and ran towards washroom.

" wait! " uma held her from arms.
" I will go first.I am already late for pooja and moreover, thats this brides bath which let you sleep too peacefully in my arms around my fragrance.secondly,my dhoti probably take much more time than your this 2 inch dresses.so please."

Uma rushed to washroom and shut doors,leaving jaw dropped kanak behind.
-------may be continue-----------
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Attiya Awesome story darling its giving me goosebumps when I read it kanum together in bed hugging each other wow what a visual treat it would be to watch by imagining itself we are getting excited if it happens oh god we will surely go mad 😉This kanum is making us crazy day by day.Fantabulous FF Attiya love u so much dr🤗.If massisa see them together 😲 suman sweet heart is helping kanum.Kanum will be busy romancing in their dreams




I hope we have this visual treat in future.
Thanks😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
I have to say you are adding more and more delight to my Sunday!! This was so cute!! Please continue...I actually was visualizing Uma's reaction on virginity 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Hi
This is good😊 If only this did happen.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sachgirl2000

I have to say you are adding more and more delight to my Sunday!! This was so cute!! Please continue...I actually was visualizing Uma's reaction on virginity 😆

Really😆...I am happy that I am doing something on Sunday

Uma's look will be unpredictable😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Parmeen

Hi

This is good😊 If only this did happen.😊


It can't happen.so let us imagine😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Wow attiya great ff dear. Very delightful😉
You made everything look perfect as I was visualizing the scenes. Wished CVS had done it same way... would have been mind blowing! Please continue dear... Sunday will not be boring if we have such scenes to delight us.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Amazing write up Attiya Kanum was in their own dream paradise while sleeping 😉 when they came to reality each one of them blaming each other now we know who is controlling their desires 😛 Kanak is bold enough to speak about sexual lust wow good progress in Kanak.Best part was uma sspeaking about virginity he is afraid he will loose his control poor uma 😳 I imagined his expressions when he speaks about virginity I guess uma is not shy in this matter 😉 overall I enjoyed their conversation of kanum 👏 Uma not getting up at brahammuhurat is next to impossibilityi think this Kanak will break all his niyams surely.Thank u so much dear ⭐️
Edited by Divyaamurali - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Tauba Tauba..


Your mom should read this ASAP.. Esp the second part.. 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Really nice to see your creativity atiya! Please continue writing!

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