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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...naughty kanum☺️
Superb update attiya👏

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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: AVRfan

Wow attiya great ff dear. Very delightful😉

You made everything look perfect as I was visualizing the scenes. Wished CVS had done it same way... would have been mind blowing! Please continue dear... Sunday will not be boring if we have such scenes to delight us.


Thank you so much😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Amazing write up Attiya Kanum was in their own dream paradise while sleeping 😉 when they came to reality each one of them blaming each other now we know who is controlling their desires 😛 Kanak is bold enough to speak about sexual lust wow good progress in Kanak.Best part was uma sspeaking about virginity he is afraid he will loose his control poor uma 😳 I imagined his expressions when he speaks about virginity I guess uma is not shy in this matter 😉 overall I enjoyed their conversation of kanum 👏 Uma not getting up at brahammuhurat is next to impossibilityi think this Kanak will break all his niyams surely.Thank u so much dear ⭐️


I think uma missing mahurat can be a possibility CWS can think of.

Thank you dwar😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: desigal2017

Tauba Tauba..



Your mom should read this ASAP.. Esp the second part.. 😉


🤣
Why you are after me...

2nd update to itni masoom or shareef si hai😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Iceblue

Really nice to see your creativity atiya! Please continue writing!


Thank you😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhaana

Wow...naughty kanum☺️

Superb update attiya👏


Thanks😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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' Delight' hai toh bonus bhi do😆
Update another part today😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Disclaimers:.
This will be a filler part to built up next scene.

You can imagine kanak jai icecream by yourself.I found no motivation to write it.😃

PART 3:

As uma stepped into hall,he could here sound of utensils from kitchen.
" its too late.lunch preparation has started and here I am waking up at this time.what will I say to massisa!"a sudden guilt surrounded uma.he had missed morning prayer which has become a routine of his life.he had never left it since massisa has taught him about its importance.

" pranam massisa" uma uttered with nervousness.

" I am sorry for...I don't know how it happened " uma was at edge of guilt.

"Why you are saying sorry uma! Its OK.yes, I was surprised when suman told me that you are meditating as you have never planned one without my permission but,that's OK." Massia spoke with usual sweetness in her tone.

" meditation?" Uma was confused.

Kanak stepped into hall and was surprised by massisa easiness for letting uma sleep with her ,missing his prayer because of her and calling it a meditation!

" it look like massisa is suffering from amnesia! How she can be so cool about this morning" kanak could only imagine this.

" massisa ,I am kanak! Uma didn't come for pooja in morning and that is first time in history of toshni house!"
Kanak thought to help massisa regain her memory.

" bhabhi...sa! We all know you are kanak and dhoti bro didn't came for pooja .by the way,was he meditating in morning in real or you people had a tough meditation last night ,making dhoti bro tired " aditiya spoke with his usual cheapness.

" only you can think of this filth" kanak felt disgusted to core.she came on uma side as she want aditiya near her.

" ms rathi! I didn't lost my memory.I clearly remember what you had done with us." Massisa taunted back.

No amnesia ! Thank god! Here I am fighting to win uma back and if she had forgot about our counter, I had to first make her remember what the whole plot is about.kanak relieved with her thoughts.

Uma and kanak were totally confused with this situation.they expected to listen some serious taunts from massisa.

" massisa! Prerna aunty has come.I have ask her to sit in your room." Suman interrupted in between.

"Oh haan! Palomi bring tea into my room." She left room.pallomi followed her and aditiya left as he don't want to listen another lecture by this man.

" suman! Can you explain this situation.when I said you about this" uma was fuming with anger.

" dadosa ,I ..." Suman fumbled.she knew it will happen.

" uma, you can ask her politely "kanak interjected in between .

" you keep out of this." Uma glared at kanak.

" dadosa! Mass...massisa was very angry at you ...and I came...to check you ...but , you were sleeping so, I ..." Suman didn't imagined it will be too difficult to narrate her act.

" what! You came in my room and saw us..." Uma just wanted to hide somewhere .he don't want to imagine in which position suman has witness them.
Even kanak eyes were wide open on this confession.

" and nobody came to check us?" Kanak was surprised as how pallomi and massisa left her and uma in same room.

" I...I lock both doors from backside and put cushions in my room so that nobody doubt that you didn't slept in my room and ...said to everyone that dadosa is meditating and you are sleeping in my room." Suman felt relief.

Kanak mouth was wide open on suman clever plan.she wanted to hug her for doing this.

Kanak smile looking towards uma who was astonished By his sister's act.

" how could you..." Uma felt short of words.he looked towards kanak who was smiling towards him and left room in boiling anger.

Kanak ran towards suman and hugged her." Thank you ! Thank you! Thank you!

Suman felt she did right as uma's anger was little price against her bhabhisa happiness!

Yet, they were unknown that massisa has heard everything from corner!

...
" uma! Are you going for some important work?" Massisa inquired.

" nahi massisa! Never busy for you." Uma replied obediently.

" OK ! Come with me to temple.I had prayed for you and pandit ji asked to accompany you ."

" OK massisa."

Uma started his jeep.
" maybe this will help to forget this morning!" Uma wished.
...
Uma rushed to his to control his anger.
" how could you kanak!"
He just witnessed kanak and his friend jai in market ,the way kanak was happy with him.
" never saw you so comfortable with me and there,with that pathetic person, you were..." Uma gulped down his emotions.

" leave it. Why I worry about her.vansh was right." Uma went to check his patients in other room.

In corner, massisa was cunningly smiling,watching her planned work.she called vansh and that educated fool, without inquiring about anything ,followed my instructions.

" ms rathi! Before you try to make uma correct, its better you look into your own brother! Uma spent his whole life with me and if he follows my rules blindly, that still makes sense.but, your brother, he is one step ahead than uma in intelligence.

Meanwhile, kanak returns home.jai had asked her to come to party tonight at his home.she even bought black dress for the evening unknown of volcano awaits for her.!in her room!

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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: nish_vir

' Delight' hai toh bonus bhi do😆

Update another part today😃


I don't know if its delightful but, I updated😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Parmeen

Wow can't wait for next part😊


Thanks😃

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