*Sunday delights* FF 'entangled* last part updated

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Posted: 7 years ago
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So ,initially it was one shot but, now it has turned into some more shots.šŸ˜†
I try to complete it today.
Its continuation of last OS:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4922605

with touch with this week most anticipated track" jealousy"šŸ˜†...but,CWS can't see us happy😔

So here it goes...enjoy( if you can)

Birds were singing morning song to welcome new day.the whole idol palace outside room was breathing fresh air.water falling beside idol was providing a soothing feel to the entire scenario.everything was awake ,yet they were maintaining silence in their respective manner,not wanting to disturb two love souls,entangled into each other.

uma and kanak were in deep sleep or the nature can say,into peaceful ignorance from the world.kanak's head was buried in his chest,as she had not changed her position since last night ,inhaling his fragrance as oxygen.her one hand was tightened and near her chest while other was loosely yet,calmly placed on uma's left side,as if transferring her warmth to him.on contrary,uma's both hands were on kanak's back ,entangled within each other. even in his sleep,he was not letting her go from him,even an inch.
nature was carefully playing outside ,letting the two lost souls filling each other.
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"Payal! Where is tahli?we have to start pooja"

massisa spoke with as usual sweetness yet dominating sharp voice.it was another start,another brahammahurat.toshni house started off again with their usual chores.

" here it is massi" payal handed over thali and started to look in the hall.

" what are you searching for?" Massisa figured out it anxiety in payal face within seconds.

" uma sa! He and jiji hasn't come for pooja!" Payal was surprised rather than being worried for their absence.

" are you in your senses? Uma has never slept too late in his entire life."massisa couldn't believe her ears.uma not present in brahmamahurat! Its like earth stopped revolving for her.

" maybe bhabhisa and dhoti bro is having quality time" adititya spoke with utter excitement and surprise.
"even that stone age man knows how to have fun! With his face, I thought he has taken some virgin oath for his lifetime." He just thought these possibilities in his mind in accordance with his thinking ability and had a small laugh on his thoughts.

"What do you mean?" Massisa doesn't understand what aditiya meant by quality time.
"I mean to say..." Before he could complete his sentence,suman had clearly understood what aditiya bhaisa meant to say and she quickly reach to action.

" massisa ,I just check out why they didn't came."
And before massisa could respond ,suman quickly run to uma's room before massisa could follow her.
After 10 minutes,suman came back reflecting confidence in her body language.
"Where is uma?" Massisa was looking behind suman to have glimpse of uma.

" massisa! Uma dadosa is performing meditation in his room."

"Which meditation? He didn't inform me in night.I should ask him." Massia stepped forward to reach uma but was interrupted by suman.

"He has started meditation and clearly instructed no body should disturb him.he even locked both doors and asked me to inform that no body should come to idol side as it will disturb him."
Suman cleverly lied about everything.

"He asked us to not disturb him and what about that valcano which is in his room,kanak rathi!" She was fuming with anger.

" bhabhisa is sleeping in my room.she was not feeling well last night so she stayed in my room and as she is a guest here,she doesn't have to wake up in brahammahurat."

"Oh! " she was relieved by this news.she doesn't care if uma perform meditation for lifetime,all she care is about kanak near him.
" let us perform pooja"all of them gathered near the idol and started their prayer.

As suman stand their ,she sent a silent apology to god "sorry lord! I lied about everything and I know,when dadosa will find this out,he will be super angry.but,everything is fear in love & war Na"

She went in uma's room from backside and found both in embrace.she quickly locked front door and for back door,she used thread trick to lock door from outside which she used when she lied about her studies.then she quickly went to her room and set pillows as kanak so that no body doubt on her.
Suman tightened her hands and started praying to lord to save him from uma's anger.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's definitely a Sunday delight!! I am glad that atleast in your story there is someone who wants Kanum not to be disturbed! Someone wants their love story to bloom!! Please continue!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sachgirl2000

It's definitely a Sunday delight!! I am glad that atleast in your story there is someone who wants Kanum not to be disturbed! Someone wants their love story to bloom!! Please continue!!


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I thought suman should do something apart from roaming in house😃

Will do.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai attiya.
Superb story. Suman's part was too good.
So kanum romantic part is going start.šŸ˜†
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Attiya,
This storybis way way better than what CVs are dishing out to us. My vote is for you to replace the CVs and give us happy romantic stories as promised.😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai attiya.

Superb story. Suman's part was too good.
So kanum romantic part is going start.šŸ˜†
Waiting for the next part.


Thank you dear😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: savithp

Hi Attiya,

This storybis way way better than what CVs are dishing out to us. My vote is for you to replace the CVs and give us happy romantic stories as promised.😳


I think not a good idea considering my wild imagination.avi rhea will demand some high amountšŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow in serial it will take another year to happen thanks you turned this boaring sunday into a colorful sunday ā¤ļø
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TSMSPfan

wow in serial it will take another year to happen thanks you turned this boaring sunday into a colorful sunday ā¤ļø

Its serial.it has many baggage 😃

I am glad I lighten mood of many peoplešŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Attiya Awesome story darling its giving me goosebumps when I read it kanum together in bed hugging each other wow what a visual treat it would be to watch by imagining itself we are getting excited if it happens oh god we will surely go mad šŸ˜‰This kanum is making us crazy day by day.Fantabulous FF Attiya love u so much dršŸ¤—.If massisa see them together 😲 suman sweet heart is helping kanum.Kanum will be busy romancing in their dreams



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