Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan)

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Calypso05
Hi Geetha😊,
Interesting part👏,
I'm curious to know how many chapters have you planned for your story? I can't wait to know the end😃
Thank you

Hai calypso..

The story almost got over, u will see the interesting twist and turns in the end of the story.

Soon i will update the next part.

Thank u so much for the comments

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Part 18

Uma and kanak walking together. Kanak carefully taking each step.

Kanak: uma, why we came here?

Uma: for praying.

Kanak: i know that... But y we came to this mountain!

Kanak looks around, it was mountain forest,covered by full of trees and plant.

Kanak: are u joking. We are middle of the mountain forest.

Uma: in this mountain, there was a shivji temple, so we came here.

Kanak: ohh.

Uma: our ritual will be over after getting blessings from shivji.

Kanak: nanisa and lakshmi also didn't tell me, nothing about this.

Uma: in this rituals, husband and wife should support each other on their journey.

Kanak: interesting..

Uma: are u getting tired?

Kanak: no... I am not. Have u ever visited this mountain?

Uma: many times, this mountain have rich of herbs and medicinal plants, so i used to visit here.

Kanak nods her head.

Kanak walks with uma, the woods was complete silence. It looks like they were in out of the world, without any worldly noise.

Kanak take notes of each and every parts of the forest. Uma looks at kanak, he feels like a journey with best companion.

The cold breeze touchs them. Kanak enjoys the nature.

Uma: have u visited any mountain forest?

Kanak laughs,

Uma: y do u laugh kank?

Kanak: uma i already told u that i am a photographer, and i visited many forest in kerela for taking photos. And in the college also, we went to trekking.

Uma: so u have done many things in college, right.

Kanak: yes, i enjoyed my college days.

Uma smiles. Kanak observe the mountain forest. The trees are large and it look like touching the cloud. The sun rays hardly passes through the woods

Kanak: uma, this forest is really lovely. I can sense the ayurvedic fragrance in this woods. Like when i sense ur clinic.

Uma's think, but for me only i can sense ur chandan ki mehek.

And smiles at kanak.

Kanak looks at dew drops in the leaves and picks the leaf carefully and sprinkling on uma. Uma shakes his head. Kanak laughs at uma, uma feel looking at kanak. Every dazzling droplets on his face, refresh him. The tender of the drops transforming him into more loving.

Uma hold kanak's hand, she looks at him with a surprise, and smiles, uma holding his beloved's hand, wishing the way to extend, forgetting everything.

The exotic feel. And walking together in the thick woods.

Tell ur comments guys.

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Divyaamurali

@Divyaamurali

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Hi Geethu u saved me today by giving ur beautiful update I was totally upset today after seeing that crap on TV today I am missing my kanum nowwdays😭when we will see light romantic momentsBut urs was extraordinary I was visualizing kanum in woods what a amazing feel it was .Wow uma sensing only chandan ki mehek in that ayurvedic forest 😳How romantic it was geethu u are a talented writer .Uma holding kanak hands will he get intimate with her in that lonely forest😉.Thank u so much dear u gave my most expected kanum moments 😃

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali
Hi Geethu u saved me today by giving ur beautiful update I was totally upset today after seeing that crap on TV today I am missing my kanum nowwdays😭when we will see light romantic momentsBut urs was extraordinary I was visualizing kanum in woods what a amazing feel it was .Wow uma sensing only chandan ki mehek in that ayurvedic forest 😳How romantic it was geethu u are a talented writer .Uma holding kanak hands will he get intimate with her in that lonely forest😉.Thank u so much dear u gave my most expected kanum moments 😃

Hai divya,

Thank u so much for ur lovely comments,

I feel like, i am really blessed,

Thanks for giving me courage.

Once again thank u so much.

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Mansi_jg

@Mansi_jg

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Hi Geetha, it was wonderful!! Love the kanum moments in the forest, the solitude...beautiful nature, herbs and romantic kanum wow!! You are awesome Geetha, keep writing and update soon, I was waiting for this so long. Thanks a lot!!

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Iceblue

@Iceblue

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Thank you so much! It's like watching another version, the interesting one, of TSMSP! Love it. Another part this weekend?

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Part- 19

Uma and kanak still walking in the woods, holding their hands.

Kanak: uma, when we will reach the temple?

Uma : within one and a half hours

Kanak: any wild animals are in this forest?

Uma laughs.

Uma: why , u r afraid of animals.

Kanak : no, not like that.

Uma: don't worry kanak, there is no wild animals in this mountain.

Kanak : oh.

Uma: but some dogs will be roaming here and there.

After hearing dog's name, kanak failed to move from that place. Uma didn't notice that kanak was stopped there itself. Uma keeps on talking.

Uma: only dogs are there not any other animals.

No reply from kanak.

Uma: kanak, y u r so silent. Mmm

Uma looks besides, kanak was not there, he turns and looks, he sees kanak at a distance, uma rushed to her.

Uma: kanak, what happened? Did u see anything?

Kanak signals no.

Uma: then what happened?

Kanak: animals...

Uma: animals... I already told u that there is no animals and only dogs are here.

Kanak shakes her body in fear.

Kanak: uma, y u didn't me before itself. Dogs are there in this mountains.

Uma starting laughing, and rounds kanak. Kanak stares at him.

Kanak: uma...uma...

Uma keeps on laughing.

Kanak: uma stop laughing at me.

Uma controls his laughter.

Uma: kanak rathi, sandhya rathi's daughter was afraid of dogs.

Kanak stares,

Kanak: yes, i am afraid of dogs, why ? What is the problem in that.

Uma holds kanak's hands,

Uma: my cute wife, why u r afraid, when i am here with u.

Uma cups kanak's face says whenever u get angry, ur face is so cute. Then he pinched her cheeks.

Kanak : uma... It hurts.

Uma pinches once again. Kanak takes his hands.

Kanak: my cheeks became so red because of u.

Uma walks front, road was getting narrow, and in that road only one can go in a time. Uma walks front and kanak follows him from the back.

Kanak: is anybody lives in this mountain?

Uma: no, only pilgrimage comes to this mountain. People will always come here.

Kanak nods her head.

Uma walks suddenly a plant branch was stuck in his kurta. Uma stop his move and kanak notice him, and comes closer to him, when uma turns his body, he dashes kanak, she loses her balance and falls, kanak rolls in the slope.uma was shocked to see that, uma shouts, kanak rolls and landed on the bottom. Kanak cries, she tries to get up. Uma rushes and cross the slope. Finally he reaches kanak. He takes kanak his hand.

Uma: kanak, r u k.

Kanak: yes, i am.

Uma: sorry kanak, because of me.

Kanak sits and looks at uma.

Kanak: uma... It just an accident.

Kanak feels pain on her right hand. She couldn't move her hand.

Uma: do u feel pain anywhere.

Kanak signals her right hand. Uma holds her hand. And examines,

Kanak: it hurts.

Uma: thank god it is not a fracture. But u should not move ur hand for two days.

Kanak nods her head. Uma bandage her hand by a piece of cloth. After that he makes her to stand, and walks to the temple.

Tell ur comments guys.

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg
Hi Geetha, it was wonderful!! Love the kanum moments in the forest, the solitude...beautiful nature, herbs and romantic kanum wow!! You are awesome Geetha, keep writing and update soon, I was waiting for this so long. Thanks a lot!!

Hai mansi,

Thanks u much for comments.

I am really sorry, for the late update.

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Iceblue
Thank you so much! It's like watching another version, the interesting one, of TSMSP! Love it. Another part this weekend?

Thanks iceblue.

Thanks for reading and commenting