Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan)

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg
Thank you so much for wonderful ff. Update soon, it's really beautiful and interesting.

Thank u so much for ur comments

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: myths_vaz
Awesome Geeta for giving us a wonderful read of 16 parts. Thank u so much. Keep writing more dear.

Hai myth-vaz...

Thank u so much for reading the story.

Thanks for the comments.

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Divyaamurali

@Divyaamurali

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Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Wow this part sounds romantic chandan ki mehek attracting uma uma cannot resist himself 😉 Kanak getting nervous by his touch and the earring part was awesome I even imagined our title track when I read that line.Superb ff pls update it soon.This rishi part is turning point of ur story isn't it.Keep it up geetha.Atleast you bring the suhagrat part in ur story 😛

Edited by Divyaamurali - 7 years ago

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Calypso05

@Calypso05

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Hi Geetha😊,
As I told you in my previous comment i read all the chapters of your fanfiction😉. Your story is soo good👏, you wrote it soo well. Your fanfiction is very close to the real life❤️.
You add extra character, superb idea👍🏼.
Uma's nani reminds me maasa from dabh.
Kanak's inner voice and her whisper are funny😆😆.
"kanak is my wife, she belongs to me, she is only mine" ❤️Uma doesn't stop repeating this sentence😆, as in the show, your Uma is extremely possessive😳.
I like all the chapters of your ff especially part 13❤️, it looks like a remarriage. I like the way you compared the forced marriage with that mutual consent marriage, you detailed nicely kanum's feelings👏❤️⭐️
Interesting ff, i'm waiting for the next part👍🏼
Thank you.

Edited by Calypso05 - 7 years ago

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Iceblue

@Iceblue

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Can we please have the next part Geetha?

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali
Wow this part sounds romantic chandan ki mehek attracting uma uma cannot resist himself 😉 Kanak getting nervous by his touch and the earring part was awesome I even imagined our title track when I read that line.Superb ff pls update it soon.This rishi part is turning point of ur story isn't it.Keep it up geetha.Atleast you bring the suhagrat part in ur story 😛

Hai divya.

Thank u for reading the story.

I didn't plan for suhagrat, but it will be some what like that.

I hope u will enjoy that. Thanks for the comments

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Calypso05
Hi Geetha😊,
As I told you in my previous comment i read all the chapters of your fanfiction😉. Your story is soo good👏, you wrote it soo well. Your fanfiction is very close to the real life❤️.
You add extra character, superb idea👍🏼.
Uma's nani reminds me maasa from dabh.
Kanak's inner voice and her whisper are funny😆😆.
"kanak is my wife, she belongs to me, she is only mine" ❤️Uma doesn't stop repeating this sentence😆, as in the show, your Uma is extremely possessive😳.
I like all the chapters of your ff especially part 13❤️, it looks like a remarriage. I like the way you compared the forced marriage with that mutual consent marriage, you detailed nicely kanum's feelings👏❤️⭐️
Interesting ff, i'm waiting for the next part👍🏼
Thank you.

Hai calypso,

Thank u so much for the lovely comments.

I am so happy that your enjoying the story.

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Iceblue
Can we please have the next part Geetha?

Hai iceblue.

Sure, i will post the next part by afternoon.

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: CutestGirl
Pls update we are waiting

Hai cutestgirl...

Yes, i will post the next part by this afternoon.

Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#70

Part - 17

Uma, nanisa and grandma were listening to the rishi. Rishi sees kanak in the distance, she is talking with lakshmi.

Rishi: pure soul, who went through lots of troubles but still has pure heart. Like a gold ( kanak) which dropped in the fire, but remains the gold. It never change.

Nanisa: what do you mean by that , rishi muni

Rishi laughs, and says human's fate was written by god. No one cannot change that, everything is a destiny.

Rishi looks at uma, the girl is your destiny, ur made for each other, the day, the girl was born your fate got changed. Ur connected with each other, when u lost ur hope on the things which is cannot give answers, that day she born as a hope. The things which you cannot in the world, she came as a vision for u. She will guide u to the path of wisdow. The path will be too hard for u. But she will be there as ur guide.

U both meet each other in the temple. Right

Uma: yes, i realised her presence from the kerela temple. Then i meet in person in uma shankar's temple.

Rishi laughs.

Mermory is the thing that a person keeps him alive. Some memories is like breeze which exist for short time. Like u both have.

Uma: sorry rishi muni, i don't understand what ur refers!

Rishi: listen uma shankar, u meet ur wife in your childhood.

Uma was shocked,

Rishi: u saved her in the temple stairs,

Then rishi closed his eyes, and started his meditation. Uma and others hold their hands to the rishi and moves from there.

Uma sits on the floor, nanisa and grandma sits along with him, nanisa touches his shoulder.

Nanisa: do u remember anything like that.

Uma: no nanisa, don't remember anything.

Grandma: rishi told you, when lost ur hope in the thing and that time kanak was born he said. Right.

Nanisa: yes,

Uma: i lost my hope when my maasa was bedridden.

Nanisa: u ever visited pushkar that time,

Uma: no... i never left ladnoo.

Grandma: uma think, whether u left ladnoo, think...

Uma: yes grandma, now i remember, when maasa was bedridden, i never left her, but a year later, i went out of ladnoo with gabbasa, to get medicine for maasa. After we done with our work, we stopped by the shivji's temple which located in the border of pushkar. We went to the temple,

Grandma and nanisa eagerly looks at him, uma keeps his hand on the head. He searches for his memory. Finally.

Uma: yes, i remember, that day i saw a baby playing in the temple floor. The baby has ball in its hand. But the ball slipped from its hand and run through the stairs, when the baby followed the ball towards the stairs, i noticed the baby is about to fall, i hurried and picked her, when she is about to fall. That means, the baby that i saved on that day was kanak.

Grandma and nanisa looks at each other and smiles.

Uma: nanisa, i saved my kanak on that day. ( uma smiles)

Uma searches for kanak, but he don't see her anywhere,

Uma: nanisa, i will be back soon

Uma runs towards lakshmi

Grandma and nanisa laughs.

Grandma: so this is your reason to come here. To meet the rishi.

Nanisa nodded her head.

Grandma: so, when kanak bhindhisa came here, you keep on telling that she was something different and something special about her. I think now u got answers, right.

Nanisa: yes, she is different from others. Not that, when rishi muni told us about her. But i found her from her actitivity.

She is really special.

Grandma: uma is very lucky.

Uma goes to lakshmi

Uma: where is kanak?

Lakshmi: she went to get the water. Dhadhusa

Uma: thanks lakshmi.

Uma runs, then he saw kanak in a distance, he calls her. Kanak turns and stops, uma runs towards her, without a word uma hugs kanak. Kanak left with a shock. Kanak did not understand anything, what is happening around.

Then kanak pulls herself back from his hold,

Kanak : uma, what happened?

Uma: kanak... Kanak...

Kanak: what?

Uma: u know what, i meet u in my childhood itself, i saved u from the temple stairs.

Kanak laughs...

Kanak: uma! Everytime u make fun of me.

Uma: kanak, believe me.

Kanak: i believe u, my pati devi. Come lets go.jiji is waiting for the water.

Kanak holds uma's hand and walked towards the temple. Uma smiles, and goes after her

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