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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part- 20

Uma and kanak were in the mountain forest.
Uma: kanak, can u able to see the cave behind the left corner
Kanak search for the cave.
Kanak: where it is uma, i could not see that.
Uma: watch carefully, that corner.
Kanak finally sees the cave.
Kanak: yes, that is a cave.
Kanak raised her hand to do hifi, she sees her wound, and stopped.
Uma: have u forgotten, that ur hurt.
Kanak: sorry my pati dev.
He helps her go further. They enter into the cave. Kanak looks around. They are many sculptures in the enters of the cave.
Kanak: uma, this is so beautiful.
Uma smiles.
Kanak goes further. Uma carefully takes her in.
Kanak: uma, u said that people will be around here. But i don't see any one.
Uma: i usually see people here, i think today, we will alone in the prayer.
Kanak: mmm
They moved forward and they saw a girl lighting the lamps on the walls of the cave.
Kanak: uma, see someone is there.
Uma looks.
Kanak: hello... Here
The girl sees them. Their was wall in between them. They see only her face.
The girl smiles at them. The girl greets them. Kanak goes near to the wall, says hai to her.
Kanak: hai, i am kanak. U r
The girl replies, i am gayathri.
Kanak: gayathri, nice name. And this is my husband uma shankar.
Gayathri looks at uma, and nods her head.
Kanak: gayathri, u came also here.
Gayathri: no, i came with my husband.
Kanak: then, where is he.
Gayathri : he went nearby.we usually come here.
Kanak: but, now ur alone.
Gayathri : i used to come here very often. I don't feel alone here. And i am not alone,
Uma: yes, ur not alone. shivji is here.
Uma looks at shivji. Hold his hand.
Gayathri : yes, ur right bhaiyaji.
Kanak helps gayathri in lighting up the lamp. Uma keeps pooja items aside. Meanwhile kanak and gayathri having conversation.
Suddenly gayathri feel uneasy.
Kanak notice that asking her r u k. Before she could reply, gayathri cries. Kanak was shocked,
Kanak calls uma,
Kanak: uma, i don't know what happened to her
Kanak turns towards gayathri and kanak see her falling
Kanak: uma, gayathri fell down. I think we should go to there, and check.
Kanak and uma runs to other side, suddenly they stopped, and shocked to see gayathri. Kanak and uma looks at each other's face, then kanak signals uma, they rushed. And kanak holds gayathri.
Kanak: gayathri, youre a pregnant woman.
Gayathri cries in pain. And holds kanak's hand tightly
Kanak: don't worry gayathri, we are here. Uma do something.
Uma: i will look for her husband.
Uma runs towards the entrance. Kanak shouts. Uma stopped by kanak' cry.
Uma turns and comes to them.
Uma: what happen kanak.
Kanak shows gayathri's dress and it was fully coverd by blood.
Kanak: uma, do something.
Uma: she is going to give birth. And u have to help her
Kanak shocked to hear that. Kanak was speechless and looks uma with a shock.
Uma: yes, u have to do it.
Kanak: but... Uma ... I don't know anything about pregnancy or delivery.
Uma: u can do it. I will tell u.
Kanak: no uma, u r doctor. I think u should handle this.
Gayathri cries, kanak cries too.
Kanak: don't worry be strong.
Uma covers gayathri with the cloth.
Kanak: breathe slowly,
Uma: kanak pushs her belly from upwards.
Uma heats water nearby. Kanak's body was wet by sweat.
Kanak encouragous gayathri.
Uma tells kanak to push the baby from upwards. Ask gayathri to push the baby.
Uma: kanak, u have to check the baby's head coming or not
Kanak looks at uma, and nods. she goes and checks,
Kanak gets up and signals no.
Kanak ask gayathri to push the baby. See ur going to bring ur baby to this world. Push the baby. Gayathri push. Kanak again checks. Finally the baby's head comes out. kanak ask gayathri to push harder kanak lift her hand, but she could not lift her. Kanak tries again,
Kanak: god pls help me, to save the child.
Kanak tries again, she could not.
Kanak cries uma
Uma: what happened kanak?
Kanak: pls help me, i cannot take the baby out.
Uma comes,
Kanak looks at uma,
Uma please help the baby.
But kanak how can i do the delivery.
I know, u cannot touch female, but now u have to save the life. Ur principal are not important here. But here, two lives needs ur help. Ur going to save two lives.
Uma looks at shivji idol.
Uma: shivji, what shall i do.
Gayathri cries in pain. Kanak shouts uma.
Uma's hands shivers and he feels heavy in his legs.
Gayathri cries
Kanak shouts.
Uma finally goes to her, kanak pulls uma, he sits near to her legs
Uma raises his hands, kanak signals and he once again looks at shivji and closes his eyes
And gayathri cries, uma sees the baby head coming.
Kanak says, push gayathri push
Gayathri pushes harder, baby's head comes out, uma holds baby's head and pulls the baby out. Uma holds the baby in his hand. Covered with full of blood. Uma lifts baby. Uma saw shivji and the baby started crying. Kanak looks at baby. And cries.
Gayathri, u have given birth to a girl baby. Gayathri smiles.
Uma cuts the cord and hand over the baby to kanak.

Uma looks at shivji.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: DivyaBujji

Geeta update nxt part today s sunday

Hai divya..
Sorry dear for my late update.
I hope u will like this part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
It's k geeta really very nice plzzz update nxt part soon don't mind I m little selfish
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Geethu my eyes is filled with happy tears oh god I didn't expect this part of story awesome writing how well u brought out each emotions of the characters extraordinary well written ur a blessed writer Dr very simple writing but very powerful.👏Uma treating first time woman that too delivery wow what a thought dear.Hugs to u geetu🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Unexpected twist today Geetha! You still are my favorite story! Thanks! will be waiting for next one!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Hey geetha, lovely n interesting story❤️
I like nanisa n Lakshmi roles here.That back hug while sleeping was so cute and kanak fear of dog reminded the introduction of kanak in the show.
Last part was so emotional.👏
Update soon dear...


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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: DivyaBujji

It's k geeta really very nice plzzz update nxt part soon don't mind I m little selfish

Hai divya
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
Soon i will update the next part. Dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Geethu my eyes is filled with happy tears oh god I didn't expect this part of story awesome writing how well u brought out each emotions of the characters extraordinary well written ur a blessed writer Dr very simple writing but very powerful.👏Uma treating first time woman that too delivery wow what a thought dear.Hugs to u geetu🤗

Hai divya.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
Thanks for the appreciate and encourage.


Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Iceblue

Unexpected twist today Geetha! You still are my favorite story! Thanks! will be waiting for next one!

Hai ice
Thanks for the reading.
Thank u so much for the encourage.
Thanks a lot
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhaana

Hey geetha, lovely n interesting story❤️

I like nanisa n Lakshmi roles here.That back hug while sleeping was so cute and kanak fear of dog reminded the introduction of kanak in the show.
Last part was so emotional.👏
Update soon dear...


Hai bhaana.
Thank u so much for reading and commenting.
I am happy to hear this.
Thanks a lot

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