Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan)

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Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Part- 6

Kanak and uma comes to see nanisa. On the way, kanak sees many huts and traditional houses.

Uma, this place is really very beautiful.

I know u will like the place, and the people also kind hearted.

Mmm... Lets see.

They both enter into nanisa's hut. And she was sitting in the chair. Uma and kanak greets nanisa.

Nanisa blesses them. Ask them sit, immediately, uma pulled kanak on the floor. Because he knows kanak, immediately she will search for the couch.

Kanak looks at uma. Uma smiles at her.

See uma, u and ur bhindinisa should do the traditional rituals and should do all the poojas whole hearted. So ur marriage life will be long losting for every birth. Bhindinisa, u have to be very careful while doing the poojas.

Ji nanisa. I will be careful.

K, tommorrow we are starting our first ritual. Be ready, by 8.30am. Don't be late. Now go and take rest.

Ji nanisa. Kanak and uma left nanisa's hut. One of the grandma tells nanisa, uma 's wife seems to be good girl.

Yes, but we have to wait untill the rituals to be complete. But whenever i see her face, Something come into my mind.

What?

I don't know, how to explain, but something special with her.

It is good that u think her in a good way.

K, u also go and take rest. Morning we shall meet.

Uma and kanak goes to their room. The bed was already prepared there. And they find someone there. It was lakshmi, uma's cousin. Uma was happy to see her.

How are you dhadusa?

Lakshmi touches uma's feet and about to touch kanak's feet. But kanak says what are you doing?

Uma says no need touch her feet, because she is younger than you.

But dhadusa is ur wife.

Kanak touches lakshmi's feet and gets her blessings.

Didi, younger one should get blessings from the elders.

Dhadusa, bhabhi is really sweet by, both inner and outer.

Uma smiles.

Dhadhusa, i prepared ur bed already. U both can take rest. Morning, i will meet u.

How is your son lakshmi?

He is fine, now he is sleeping with his father. Morning, i will bring him.

Lakshmi leaves the hut.

Uma and kanak sleeps in the bed. But both of them, moving and turns, because they don't feel sleepy.

Kanak... Uma called kanak in a low voice.

What?

R u sleeping?

No, just dancing, want to join.

Kanak...

Then what is a stupid question, u are asking.

I don't feel sleepy. Can u do that, Uma whisper

What???

That one.

What that one??? Tell me clearly.

The pleasure point behind the ears, once i did that for u. When i was suffering from cold. Remember.

Ahhh.

Can u please do that for me. Please.

Ur really my brain eater. K come.

Uma comes closer to kanak. Kanak keep on rolling his ears. Uma smiles at kanak.

As usual kanak slept first. Uma makes her to sleep on the pillow.

Uma holds kanak's hand and places his head near to kanak, and watches her. Then he also slept.

Morning, uma and kanak gets ready to the rituals. Uma instructs kanak, do the rituals as they say.

K uma, i will do it, don't worry.

Uma and kanak goes to nanisa's hut. Nanisa welcomes them.

Come, i was waiting for u, both. This is the first ritual, both husband and wife should involve themself into this pooja. And u should get matharani's blessings.

Lets start...

Sry for the grammatical mistakes.

Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago

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Abc12345678

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Nice track..kanum bond super.thanks geetha dear.eagerly waiting for next😉

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Thank u so much guys, for ur support, i will update the next chapter very soon.

Once again thank u so much.

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Mansi_jg

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Nice update... Plz update soon. Thanks!!

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Part- 7

Uma and kanak about start the pooja.

Nanisa says to uma and kanak, "ur going to pray to the god, to keep ur marriage life happier. Both husband and wife should involve themself in the pooja, so that ur relationship will be strong".

First thing needed for the pooja,

Uma, u should go and collect the firewoods from the forest. By that firewoods, ur wife will start her cooking.

Bhindinisa, u have draw a rangoli in the ground, in that rangoli, the god will be placed.

Kanak and uma agrees. Uma left the place. Kanak gets the colour powder from the relatives.

Kanak thinks " i should draw a big rangoli, so that, it will be good to see.

Kanak started her work. Nanisa and the grandma watches kanak.

Grandma: what are you thinking?

Nanisa: nothing..

I know something going on ur mind regarding kanak bhindinisa!

Yes, u r right. I am just noticing her activities.

Anything weird?

Not like that. Something different about her.

What? Tell me clearly

She is a modern girl, and different from our habits.

So what, uma chosen her. She is shiviji prasad for uma.

Yes, i know all things, but something what i see is, that u r not seeing that.

I don't see anything, but ur making me unclear.

K leave it. Now the pooja is very important for us.

Do u think that bhindinisa can able cook every dishes with in a short period.

It is a test for her, and how is going to manage . Let us see

By that time, kanak completed the rangoli and uma came back with the firewoods. Uma placed the firewoods near kitchen. Uma comes towards kanak. And sees the rangoli.

Nanisa: uma, ur wife was talented. And i going see how talented, she is in cooking.

Uma smiles at kanak. And she also smiles back.

Uma thinks, i know kanak, no one is so good in cooking than you.

Nanisa says to kanak , you should not taste the food while you prepare. Because the food should be tasted after offering to matharani.

Kanak got little bit of nervous.

Nanisa: uma, now u have to arrange the things for the pooja, and place the matharani's idol in the rangoli.

Uma goes to kanak and says all the best, and kanak also wished him back. Accidently uma touched kanak's hand. It was ice cold.

Uma: what happened kanak? Y ur hands r ice cold. R u afraid of pooja. Don't worry, u can make everything possible.

Kanak: but uma...

Uma: i trust u kanak, u can do it.

Kanak smiled at uma. Uma nodded his head. Then both left the place. Kanak goes to the kitchen.

Kanak says to herself, (don't worry kanak, u can do it. R u stupid !! How can u cook without tasting it, don't forget that whose daughter ur? U r World's best cook campion's daughter.)

Kanak prays to suraj " pappa help me with ur blessings.

Kanak started cooking and uma is arranging the things for the pooja.

Sry guys for the grammatical mistakes.

Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago

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Mansi_jg

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Wonderful !! Plz update soon...very interesting, eagar to know what happens next.

Thanks.

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Iceblue

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

You are fantastic! Please keep writing! Don't worry about grammar!

Hazaron khwahishay Asi kay, hur khwahish pay dum niklay

Buhath niklay meray arman , pair Bhi Kim niklay

You fulfilled so many of my wishes through this story. For kanak and uma to talk about their pasts and all. I wish you had also included about how umas words saved kanak from committing suicide. But regardless can't thank you enough. And for sure uma being 30 must want a child soon especially since he is a typical guy with traditional values. And the co education part was so cool. I wish kanak would let him be a little jealous!

Please keep writing! So nice to read your story🥳👏

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Part- 8

Kanak started cooking, uma arranging the pooja items, uma prayed to god that kanak should get success in her cooking.

Kanak cooks with full involvement. She cooks, as if suraj helping her. She remembered every single things that was told by suraj.

She also don't have any idea about how, she remembered. She thanked suraj for helping her. She prepared everything. And informed to nanisa.

Nanisa: did u prepared every dishes bhindinisa?

Kanak: yes, nanisa.

Nanisa: k, now u and uma should offer the food to matharani. Uma arranged the pooja things, a banana leaf is placed before the matharani's idol. U and uma should serve the food in the banana leaf.

Uma and kanak agreed. The pooja was started, they both offered the food. After a while. The pooja was completed.

Nanisa: uma, bhindinisa, u already got the blessing from matharani, it is time to get blessings from poor people. U have to get their blessing because when u feed poor people, its like u r feeding to god. Kanak and uma offered food to poor people and children.

While they were eating the food, they all praised kanak. By saying, she is goddess annapoorani. After hearing that nanisa and grandma were very happy.

Nanisa: kanak bhindinsa has proved that " she is goddess annapoorani". Kanak bhindinisa won my heart. I am really proud of her.

Grandma: i am really happy for u.

Nanisa: i think, i should give her a gift for this! What do you say

Yes, ofcourse, she deserve that.

K, let me think what can give for her.

Kanak and uma got blessings from the poor people. Kanak and uma smiles at each other.

Uma: kanak, ur amazing.

Kanak: thank u uma for giving me strenght.

I didn't do anything, it is only ur efforts.

Nanisa: uma, kanak bhindinisa come here.

Kanak and uma goes to nanisa,

Nanisa: today, u both completed the first ritual successly. Tommorrow, we are going to temple. They both nodded their heads.

In the room, kanak feels pain in her hand and uma notice that. Uma: What happened kanak?

Kanak: nothing, i just have pain in my hands.

Show me.

Leave it...

Kanak, don't be stubborn.

Thank u guys for ur comments.

Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago

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Mansi_jg

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Awesome... Plz continue

Update soon. Thanks!

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Geethanatarajan

@Geethanatarajan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Part- 9

Uma takes kanak's hand and gives massage. Kanak smiles at uma.

Uma: kanak, y r u smiling?

Kanak: nothing!

Uma: kanak, i have confussion?

Kanak: what?

U told me that u spend almost 15years in hostel, then how did u learn this cooking skills?

Yes, i didn't learn from anyone. But i learnt from my pappa.

From ur father! How?

It is true, i learnt the cooking skills from my pappa.

How it can be possible? Ur not even a year old, when ur parent's died.

Yes, Even i also don't understand this. But the truth, i learnt his cooking skills while i was in my mum's womb. ( uma was shocked) i know, u will get shock after hearing this. When i was in mum's womb, my pappa was disable, so he cannot able run KMB, so my mom helped him, that time he teaches my mom, in cooking. So everybody says that my cooking was exactly same like my pappa.

Uma: kanak, u r really like abhimanyu. How he learnt his father's skills from his mother's womb.

My bhabsa also used to call me, abhimanyu

Because it is true. U r abhimanyu, kanak.

Uma... Don't praise... Enough.

Kanak gets shy. Uma, i feel sleepy. Uma tried to carry her.

Kanak: uma, what r u doing?

Uma: i am going to carry u

I can walk by myself. No need to carry.

But uma carried her, kanak struggles, but she cannot win uma, because he was too strong.

Uma: kanak, u r in my hands. I never let you go.

Kanak: u always only use ur force on me.

What to do! Ur not listening to my lovable words, so that, i am using my love force to capture u.

Kanak: love force, where r u getting these words.

Uma placed kanak on the bed, wrap her with bed sheet.

Uma: i also don't know this, when i see ur eyes, automatically it is coming, what shall i do.

Enough ur love capture. Let me sleep.

Good night kanak.

Uma goes to washroom. After coming from the washroom, he went to bedroom and he about to lock the bedroom, someone comes and informed that nanisa wants to meet him.

Uma nodded his head. Then the man left the room. Uma turns towards kanak. She was sleeping peacefully. Uma leaves the room and goes nanisa's room.

Nanisa: come uma, taka a seat, where is bhindinisa?

Uma : she is sleeping nanisa. U want to see her. Shall i call her.

Nanisa: no need, let her sleep, she will be tired. I just called u, because i want to give a gift to bhindinisa. So i called u to get any idea from u.

Uma: sorry nanisa, actually i don't have any idea about her favourites.

Uma! What r u saying? U r her's husband u don't know anything about ur wife.

Grandma smiled at uma. Uma feels bad that he don't know anything about kanak.

Nanisa: k uma go and take rest. We shall meet in the morning.

Uma left the room. Nanisa and grandma looked at see other.

Grandma : what do u think of this?

Nanisa: u will get ur answer by tommorrow

Uma comes to the bedroom with a sad face. He lie down besides to kanak. He looks at kanak and thinks about nanisa's words. Then he slept.

In the morning, lakshmi( uma's cousin)comes with glasses of milk.

Lakshmi: good morning bhabisa. I brought milk for both of u.

Kanak: good morning didi, actually uma don't drink milk in the morning, he will take only kaada.

Laksmi: where is dhadhusa?