Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan) - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Please don't take too much time for next update :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ok😊 .. I will update soon..
Thank u guys for ur support
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Geetaranjan,
Awesome update, Iove ur story a lot especially jwellery part and jealous uma. Thanks.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing Geetanaranjan! I love your plot and the subtle romance! Mind soothing!
Please continue!👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 15



Lakshmi came to uma's hut with a plate, and it was covered by red cloth on the top of the plate. She knot at the door. Uma and kanak were seated in the bed.
Uma goes to the door and opens it. He smiles at her and welcomes her. Lakshmi sees kanak sitting in the bed. Kanak says good morning to lakshmi
Kanak : good morning didi.
Lakshmi smiles at her
Lakshmi: what happened bhabhisa why ur face is so pale.
Kanak : nothing didi, i am fine.
Lakshmi moves closer to kanak, touches her bruise unknowingly. Kanak jerk her body. Lakshmi sees the bruises on her hand. And she laughs silently. Uma excuse himself from there.
Lakshmi started teasing kanak
Lakshmi: bhabhisa, now i understand why ur face is so pale.
Kanak : didi, it is not like that.
Uma passes through the window. He hears their conversation.
Lakshmi teases, is uma dhadhusa really rough with you. I can see the bruises in your body.
Kanak: didi...
Lakshmi: yes i have to accept this truth. Because your skin is this smooth and soft, so it is normal to have bruises like this.
Kanak : didi...
Lakshmi: don't worry bhabhisa i have ointment for this.
Uma moves there after listening to their conversation.
Lakshmi: bhabhisa, look at this, nanisa send this for you. Today we are going to the temple for the another ritual. So your ask to wear this dress and jewels.
Back to nanisa and grandma.
Nanisa: did u checked everything for the pooja.
Grandma: yes, i checked everything already.
Nanisa: today, we are going to the temple for the special reason.
Grandma : what is that reason?
Nanisa smiles at her.
Grandma: what is the meaning of this smile?
Nanisa: wait and watch.
Grandma : now a days u always giving me a riddle.
Nanisa: don't worry, you will get ur answer on the temple.
Uma comes to his hut and he sees lakshmi makes kanak to get ready.
Kanak: didi, everyday ur giving this heavy dress and heavy jewels to wear. And it makes me feel like a warrior. And this is too heavy also.
Lakshmi: bhabhisa, ur always making fun.
Kanak: i am serious didi, see, i am looking like a joker.
Lakshmi smiles
Lakshmi: look in the mirror, how beautifull you are. Looking like a princess.
Uma watches them silently
Kanak : princess! Where, there is no freedom for you to do anythings as you wish.
Lakshmi: what bhabhisa?
Kanak: nothing..
Lakshmi: but u said princess looses her freedom.
Kanak : yes, being as a princess will not give you happiness, but being as yourself will give you happiness.
Lakshmi: bhabhisa, i don't understand what ur saying.
Kanak gives her a smile. And she changes the topic.
Kanak: k didi, tell me this bangles suits me.
Uma hide himself from them. And he thinks about kanak's words. He repeatedly hears that words.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Not fair Geetha! You should have written a little more! Your story is my favorite in this forum. I need to have more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

Not fair Geetha! You should have written a little more! Your story is my favorite in this forum. I need to have more

Thank u ice for ur comments.
I am writing the next part, by this night, i will post the 16th part in the forum.
I promise that next part will be the lengthy one.
Thanks guys for ur support.
Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi dear,
It was really awesome, but it's very short plz write bigger version, as we love your writing and little greedy.
Thanks and update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey... Waiting for the next episode.. Plz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 16


Kanak gets ready for the ritual and she is wearing pink dress in flowery pattern. The dress was very unique. Kanak likes dress very much. Uma comes to the room and sees kanak. Kanak expected him to say something about her attire but he didn't say anything. Kanak was disappoint and moves towards her suitcase. But her earing stuck in hair. She tried to get that but she fails.
Uma notice kanak. And he comes towards kanak, before kanak could say anything he comes closer to kanak. Uma bend his head towards kanak's neck, he tries release her hair from earing.kanak's heart beats increase suddenly, she could not understand why. Uma rolled his eye towards kanak and he can see her nervousness. Her chandan ki mehek pulls him towards her. He controls himself, trying to release her hair as soon as possible. His light touches makes her freeze. Her body becomes ice cold, she could feel his breathe, her fear increases more and more.
Uma finally release her hair. He adjust her hair, kanak didn't face uma at all. He touches her hand it is ice cold. Till then kanak didn't see him. He let her go.
Lakshmi comes here.
Lakshmi: bhabhisa come lets go.
Kanak : ji didi.
Kanak goes with lakshmi. Uma lost in his thought. He couldn't go closer to kanak. Whenever he goes closer to her, she is not facing him. Her body becomes ice cold. Why? My touch makes her freak out. Why she is getting fear. I love her. I love her a lot but why my love is so difficult. My one step towards her, makes her afraid.
My heart waiting for her to open. When her nutshell opens.
Uma hears nanisa's calling. He left the room.
In the temple nanisa ask pandit to start pooja. Everyone starts praying. Finally the pooja gets over.
Nanisa ask uma and kanak to offer the gifts to the children.
Nanisa: This is the ritual, ur going offer things to the children. The children are considered as god. Ur going to pray god to give god as gift to you. Before that you both should consider every children as ur children. Give the gift to them, and feed the food, and you should make them happy. This is the ritual that ur going to do.
Kanak smiles.
Nanisa: uma, i know ur wife love children a lot. And i am so confident that she will become a good mother.
Uma: yes nanisa, kanak love kids.
Nanisa: i am proud of my daugther in law.
Uma and kanak gives gifts to the children, kanak feeds sweets to the children. Kanak plays with the kids.
Kanak: uma, see kids are happy with the gifts.
Uma: yes, they are really happy with you also.
Kanak: i miss shiv a lot.
Uma: yes, i miss him too.
Kanak: mmm.
Uma: when we are going to have baby.
Kanak: uma...
Kanak goes away from there. Nanisa comes there.
Nanisa: u have completed the ritual. Soon u will be blessed with baby.
Uma: sure, nanisa.
Nanisa: mmm. I know ur heart. Kanak is still young give her time, soon she will accept your heart.
Uma smiles.
Kanak gives prasad to everyone. She pass through the tree and she stop, and looks at the rishi who is sitting under the tree. She sits near to the rishi. Rishi is too old and he is too weak. Rishi opens his eye and sees kanak, young girl with the bright face. Kanak smiles at him. Rishi smiles back at her. Kanak gives prasad to him. And gives the shawl to him to cover his body. Rishi blesses her.
Nanisa, grandma and uma watches kanak. And goes towards rishi and greetings him.
Rishi looks at nanisa. Ur daughter in law is precious gift. She is the daughter of pure souls. Her birth is a destiny. She is born to lead. Even though, everyone gives hatred to her. She gives the happiness in return.
Rishi looks at uma, ur made for each other. It is god's wish.
Your love will suffer a lot. Ur life going to change, she is the light of ur life. She will write her own destiny.
Uma touches rishi's feet and get blessings.

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