Uma and the female patient, Final part updated ( 15th jan) - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was amazing geetanataranjan !!!
Thanks for this treat on a boring Sunday! Please continue writing! Your story is the one I love the most right now. Thanks again!⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank u guys for ur comments...
Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 13


Uma in the temple stairs, he is about to climb up. Uma sees kanak, kanak looks at him and smiles. Uma was frozen, his legs are not supporting him to move. His heart also stop him, commands him to stand there to see his kanak. Kanak was in yellow colour dress which was suited her very beautifully. Kanak smiles brightly.
Uma was surrended by her smiles, a voice call him, he came to his sense, it is nanisa,
Nanisa: uma! What happened, why ur standing like this?
Nanisa looks at grandma, both of them exchanged their smile.
Uma: nothing nanisa...
Come, bhindhinisa is waiting for u. We have to complete the ritual.
Uma goes towards kanak and sits besides to her.
Kanak: uma! where did you went? I was searching for u from the long time.
Uma: kanak, don't call me by my name
Kanak says sorry by holding her ears,
Kanak: where did you went my pati dev!
Uma smiles, u don't change.
Nanisa : uma complete the rituals by wearing all the ornament to bhindhinisa.
Uma: ji nanisa.
Uma looks at kanak. Uma hears the ladies gossip about kanak.
Aunty 1:oh, this girl is married, i was thinking her to make a proposal
Aunty 2: even i don't think she was married girl.
Aunty 1: it is not our mistakes, she is too young, so we considered her as a unmarried girl.
Aunty 2: yes, ur right.. This girl is this pretty and lovely, so if anyone looks at her they will also think like that.
Aunty 1: anyway i pray to god that this couple should lead a happy life.
Aunty 2: yes, i will also pray.
Uma hears them and smiles at kanak.
Kanak : y r u laughing?
Uma: nothing.
Uma takes the payal from the plate and he lifts kanak's skit upwards. He looks at her foot which is so pure. He wears that payal. He remembers the moment when he wears the payal for the first time, the day she cooks for the family. That time he says, this is chain of love he won't let her go. Today also he says in his heart he won't let her go. Then he takes the toe ring he hold her foot and puts the ring on her fingers. He remembers, when kanak pretends to faint, he pull her toe finger for teasing her.
Uma takes the bangles and wear them in her hand, the bangles touches kanak's hand and made sound, this reminds him, the first touches of her where she lost her bangles, for him he lost himself on thinking about her. Then he sees the ring which is considered as a engagement of two soul into a relationship. Then he picks the necklace, he remembers the moment he gifted her. He makes her to wear them. Then picked the earings and wears them on her beautiful ears, while wearing that her silky hairs stucks in his face. He feels chandan smell, and he inhales that and he was very close her, he looks her eyes. Then he takes borla and places in the foreline. He remembers the moment where she came into the dressing room to thank him. He was very close to the fore head, when kanak faces him closely, she avoid the closeness, accidently his lips touches her forehead. Uma was totally frozen, then he back himself. Kanak was speechless. Then finally uma takes mangalsutra on his hand and looks at kanak, and he wears to her. This time he is making her to wear the mangalsutra with her consent, kanak smiles at him while he wears them. Uma longed for this moment to accept him as a husband with a smiling face. He remember each steps when forced kanak. He holds kanak in his hand without letting her go. She cried for the help. She kicks, cried, but he hold her very tightly with his strong arms. But now she accepted him whole heartedly as a husband.He fills the sindoor, she looks into his eyes. Uma feels that. When he forces kanak to fill the sindoor she didn't even look at him. That time uma sees the pain and crying of kanak who is helpless to fight back. But now she trust him.


Nanisa: this is the trust that ur giving to your relationship.
Uma looks at nanisa...


Sry for the grammatical mistakes
Sry for late update











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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey thank you Geetha for such a wonderful update.. I really want to see this scene in serial...
Hope you will be updating soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Part 14

In the temple, uma looks at kanak when nanisa says that this is the trust that ur giving to ur relationship. Uma thinks, yes nanisa ur right, that this is the trust that i am giving to my wife. Uma holds kanak, what were happens i won't leave ur hand, happiness or sorrow we will face it together. My shivji gave u to me.
Uma looks at the people in the temple, who wants kanak to make his/her daughter in law/ wife. They were very disappointed that kanak is already married. Uma holds kanak very tightly, and he says to himself that kanak is my wife, she belongs to me, she is only mine.
Kanak loses her hand from his hold but he refuse to leave her.
Kanak: patidev, pls leave my hand, people are watching us( in a lower voice)
Uma leaves her hand.
Grandma: r u happy, ur plan was executed correctly without any mistakes.
Nanisa: yes, in a relationship both of them should know the importance of partners.
Grandma: yes, i saw him, in jealous also.
Nanisa: yes, uma was so cute in jealous.
Granda orders lakshmi take aarti for uma and kanak. Lakshmi takes aarti. They get blessing from elders.
Finally they returned to the room after completing the rituals. Uma and kanak changes her dress and goes to the bed. Kanak cover herself with the bed sheet. She turns, uma can see her backside. Her hair spreads the whole pillow. Uma touches her hair, he thinks why her hair also have the chandan fragrance. He adjust the pillow and move towards her. Kanak was already slept. He slowly puts his hand around her waist. Then he closes his eyes. Kanak feels the touch immediately, she wakes, and sees uma's hand. She tried to take his hand without disturbing his sleep. But his arms are too strong , she unable to take the hand. To her surprise, uma pulled her closely hold her tightly. He hugged her from the back. Kanak cannot able to do anything. She calls uma to leave her, uma is not giving any responses, but actually he slept already. Kanak feels uma's respiration in her back. Uma holds kanak with his strong arms, from the ariel view kanak is too tiny for uma. Kanak tries to come out of his hold, but she could not able that. Kanak was hardly get her sleep. In the morning, kanak was on uma's arms, uma wakes up and he feels his kanak on his arms. And looks at her face then kanak slowly opens her eyes, uma was very close to her. Both was freezes for a moment then kanak says.
Kanak: atleast now release me.
Uma : what?
Kanak: what means!!!!! U r holding me.
Uma slowly releases kanak. Kanak feels the pain in her body.
Uma smiles at kanak. Kanak gets up from the bed and place her foot on the floor. But her legs are frozon and she loses the balance and she fell on the floor. Uma was shocked, and goes to kanak. And picked her in his arms and place her on the bed.
Uma : what happened kanak?
Kanak hides her pain, and says nothing, just i lost my balance, that all.
Uma: really.. Are u alright
Kanak: yes, i am ..
Uma sees bruises in her hands, he realises that because of his rough holding her in th night. So She gets hurt.
Uma : sorry kanak, i hurt u.
Kanak: patidev... I am alright... See i am alright.
Uma smiles at kanak..



Sry guys for the grammatical mistakes







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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Geetha hats off yaar 👏 u have bought in all the jewellery connecting with emotions of uma .Superb dr keep going .Last marriage scene was outstanding I really want this scene to come in our serial 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
Thank u guys for ur lovely comments...😊
Thanks a lot
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Awesome update beautifully written can't wait to read more I enjoyed your whole story pls continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Thanks u guys😊
For ur comments.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
superb writing geetha..👏..Bond between kanum is potrayed beautifully by your words..thanks..waiting for next part😊

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