MG New SS: The Sunrise Of My Life : Updated Part 3 - Pg 10

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Posted: 4 months ago


A young man enters into a palace like house talking to an another man of his age 

"Vahi ruk ja bhai."

Came an anger filled voice. Both of them frooze on their spots looking at the person. 

"Annie? "

"Ji Maan bhai, Annie he bol rahi hu."

"Kay huva, sab teek hai? "

"Ha sab teek hai, kyu teek nahi hoga? Abhi abhi to London mai aapne studies complete kar ke aye Ho. Next Tumhara shaadi keliye dadi be ladki doondna shuru kar denge."

"That's all fine, but I don't get why you are angry on me? "

"Shaadi to hojaye ge. Lekin aap eligibile and responsible to honi chaye na aapni patni aur bache ko dekh ne keliye? " 

"What do you want to say Annie? What do you mean I'm not responsible? I have the property which would be there even after 7 generations. Now why are you ranting this much? "

"Ha, vo to hai. But that's not ur's, it's dad's."

"To, vo meri he hua na?"

"After a few days that also wouldn't be yours. Do you even know, already three of our factories have been closed?"

"If three got shut down what happened? Even if ten persons like me come also they will not be able to melt down the property."

"Agar aap aise rahi, to sab kuch katham. Dadi, y do you want to get him, a person who is not serious about life married to a girl and spoil her life? Bhai kay aap ne kahbi sunrise dekhi hai kay? Nahi dekhi hogi, kyu ke aap uthe he dopair ke 1 baje pe!"

"So does it mean if I didn't see sunrise I have not taken my life seriously or just because I didn't see, will sun only not rise? "

"I don't know if that Sun would rise or not but definitely this sun (Maan) will not raise. 

That was a big insult to Maan, the patience he had earlier was vanishing. 

"U meant to say i will be on roads? "

"Not only ur's, but because of you all the people who are dependent on you will also suffer. U are not even worried about your three factories that have been shut down, but because of it 30,000 people who were working are struggling."

"It's their headache I can't help it. "

"Sorry bhai, it's not their headache it's your carelessness."

"Annie, bus karo beta" 

"Nahi dadi bolne do. What you people were saying it sweetly she is telling it angrily."

"To meri kehne se tum badal jahoge"?

"Badlav mathlab! U want me to see the sunrise or you want me to earn 50crore for my capacity?"

"Crore? Ho sakae to monthly 15K earn karo. Phir dekh lenge."

"Afterall 15k ruppees! I give it as tips."

"Deena bohat asan hai, kamana nahi. "

"Mai 15k earn nahi kar sakthi hu kya?"

"15k Kay! 15paise be nahi kar sakthi Ho!! "

"Agar kiya? "

"Without using dad's name, being a common man, means just as Maan if you prove urself worthy enough, then we will see. "

"Are you challenging me Annie?"

"I'm not, I'm just saying what you are and what is your capacity"

That hit Maan rightly on his nerves. Enraged he forcefully pulls out his platinum chain, watch, wallet, rings and thows it on the table. 

"As you said just in one month, i will earn 15k and prove myself to you wait and watch."

Maan leaves the place. 

Will Maan succeed?


The second prologue got more votes so I'm starting it. This story is not like my first story, it is straight forward and light hearted. Will update part one by evening.

Hope you guys will like thissmiley27

I will start the other story once I finish Shhh. 

Posted: 4 months ago

Congratulations on your new story 

Posted: 4 months ago

Tensed and Awesome Prologue 

Maan seems to have a don't care attitude 

but Annie has placed a challenge for him 

and I'm hoping Maan can come out as a winner 

strong and realizes his mistakes 

Posted: 4 months ago

i love this concept as well

seems like maans gonna meet geet as a common person not as the msk

i love stories like this

love the title as well

update next soon

Posted: 4 months ago

Nice prologue

Maan character is totally different likes it

Update soon 

Geet Hui Sabse Parayi 

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