MG New SS: The Sunrise Of My Life : Updated Part 4 - Pg 12; May 20th - Page 6

nice one

but maan is annoying lol

he wont be changing easily thats for sure

but excited to read more now

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maan is very careless towards business n even family which have only annie is sister n daadi

Originally posted by: heycookie

nice one

but maan is annoying lol

he wont be changing easily thats for sure It's difficult, but what if he will be forced.

but excited to read more now

Thank you❤

😆he definitely is. Because Maan here is not like that of the show.....but will become one.

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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maan is very careless towards business n even family which have only annie is sister n daadi

Thank you❤

Let's see if this careless Maan will turn into a responsible and respectful person.

It's so different maan

No work at all 😄

Originally posted by: priya_21

It's so different maan

No work at all 😄

😃Yes, Maan is a careless person.

Thank you Di❤

Originally posted by: ShashtiJMG

😃Yes, Maan is a careless person.

Thank you Di❤

Welcome

Maan is back after a long time but he has no interest in the business. He did not even want to see any reports.

Teaser:

Maan wakes up to the splash of water droplets on his face.

He slowly opens his eyes and finds a blured image of a girl infront of him. He slowly sits up blinking his eyes a couple of times to clear his vision.

He looks around to find himself on the ground then looks up at the girl there who was looking phenomenal even in the simplest chutidar suit she had worn.

He stares at her blankly and even she was also starring back at him, but her stare was more like who was this person??

"Mai kaha... " he was cut in between

* she continues what he was about to say in a soft tone *

"Mai kaha hu.... Ye tumhara dialogue hai" she points out her index finger at Maan

"Meri ghar ke bhar sharab peekar, tight hokar behoosh ho gai the. Ye mera dialogue" points her finger towards her.

Maan looks on, while she continues to question and answer by herself

"Nahi nahi, maine nahi peehai... Ye tumhara dialogue. To phir yaha kyu behoosh ho gai the?? Ye mera dialogue."

Maan looks in disbelief with this chatterbox going on and on by herself.

Finally she asks him to know why he was unconscious,

"Waise, tum yaha kyu behoosh ho gai the?"

"Sun Stroke " Maan speaks with the remaining energy in him.

"Oh-ho, tumhara beta be hai kya?*she settles down beside him* Usse kya huva, exam mai fail hogai hai kay?"

"No no no. Mai upar wale Sun ke bath kar rahi hu. Surya bhagawan ke." Maan talks pointing towards the Sun.

"Ohh, usske bare mai bath kar rahi te..* after checking his attire * tum dekhne mai to bohat amir lagi rahiho. Tumhara naam kay hai?"

"Maan Si.. *he realizes what he was about to blurt out and corrects himself* Ahmm Maan."

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Hi everyone,

Happy New Year 2023. May the new year brings you and your loved ones joy, peace, health, wealth and happiness.

Couldn't give an update so thought about giving a teaser. Hope you like it!

And I don't think you will need any clue to know who the girl was in the teaser😉.

Thank you❤

Part 3: Pg no 10

Originally posted by: coderlady

Maan is back after a long time but he has no interest in the business. He did not even want to see any reports.

Thank you❤