glad you liked it😘😘Originally posted by: Nicky-nish
Shivaaaa
Kitna cuteee tha ye flashback😍
And Shiva being a gentleman thoroughly 😍
Aise hi pyaare pyaare updates dete raho ❤️
I am loving it ❤️
many more cute updates are on the way😁😁😁
no idea may be both of them are busy.........Originally posted by: virangna2005
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btw where is aimmy and jiya....haven't seen them since long
PART 21
as raavi remembers that day, a lone tear escapes her eyes and falls on shiva’s palm. Shiva realizing this gets worried. He looks her with questioning eyes. She wipes her tears and nods in no. she hugs him and snuggles into his wramth. Shiva smiles.
Ooohho....
Ummm….hoooo…
Ummm….hooo..oo
After a min they break the hug. Shiva makes raavi lie comfortably on the bed. He gets up to leave but
Tum ho
raavi stops him holding.
Tum hopaas mere
Saath mere ho
Tum yun
Shiva turns and finds raavi looking him pleading. He smiles her and lies besides her on the bed.
Jitna mehsoos karoon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon
He gently caresses her hairs while raavi looks him lovingly.
Tum homere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, tumko main jeeta hoon
She gently cups his face and leans forward. She looks into his eyes for permission. Shiva getting the hint leans forward and and tilts his head in affirmation.
Ooohho....
Ummm….hoooo…
Ummm….hooo..oo
Raavi gently presses her lips on his. Shiva wraps his hands around pulling closer. The kiss was gentle with full of love and gratitude with commitment. They break apart as they feel satisfied. Raavi hugs shiva hiding her blush.
Tum ho
Shiva smiles and hold her closer both drifts to a peaceful sleep.
ahmmm....
Aaah haa aa...
Around 4am, both were sleeping peacefully in each other embrace. shiva’s sleep gets disturbed. He looks out and it was still dark. He sees raavi in his arms sleeping peacefully.
Kahinse.. kahin ko.. bhi
Aao bewajah chale
He gently kisses her forehead. raavi, sensing some moment, opens her eyes slowly only to find shiva looking her lovingly.
Poochhe bina kisi se
Hum mile
She returns back a smile to him. shiva shakes his head gesturing that he should leave. Raavi smiles and shakes her head in yes.
Bandisheinnaa rahi
koibaaqi
Tum ho
shiva gets up from bed and heads towards the window. Raavi sits up onthe bed. He turns back to raavi and gives her positive smile and waves his hand. Raavi too waves him back. Shiva jumps out of window.
Tum hopaas mere
Saath mere ho tum yun
Jitna mehsoos karooon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon
As he walks back home, he thinks of raavi and smiles. Elsewhere, raavi sitting on her bed thinks of shiva and smiles at her luck.
Oooohho ho...
Ummm….hoooo…
Ummm….hooo..oo
It’s 8 in morning. Everyone arein for breakfast in both house.
Kistarah chheenega aa
Mujh se ye jahaan tumhe
shiva texts raavi asking about her health. Raavi smiles at his concernand replies back that she is fine. Both, on there side, get ready for the day.
Tum bhiho main
Kya fiqar ab humein
For the first time they were a this much worried about the situations between two families.
Tum homere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
During the breakfast also, they continue thinking the same.
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, Tumko main jeeta hoon
Both know that both of them were worried about this. But both also know that they won’t give up as they are amandent about their relationship.
Oooohhoo ho...
Tum ho
Hoo aa....
After breakfast, shiva was about to leave but before that dhara stopshim.
Dh: shiva sun…
Sh: ji Bhabhi….
Dh: (hesitant) dekh main jaanti hu rishta tera aur raavi ka hai…aur isse related koi bhi decision lene ka haq sirf tum dono ka hai…(shiva looks confused)…dekh shiva maa aur maami ke rishte me jo khataas hai vo bad rahi hai…isse pehle raavi isse khataas ke lapete me aaye…maa aur maami ko sab sach bata do….kahin aisa na ho ki baat bigad jaye….(tensed)
Sh: hn Bhabhi…main issi baare me soch raha tha….mujhe bhi lagta hai ki absab sach bahar aana chahiye… main ek baar chipkali se baat karunga….
Dh: (caresses his head) acha laga dekh ke ki tu raavi ki raaye ko itni ahmiyat deta hai….
Sh: (smiles) mera akele ka rishta hai kya….vo bhi hqdaar hai…..
Dh: saaru….
Sh: nikalta hu Bhabhi….jai somnath…..
Dh: jai somnath….
Shiva leaves for shop while dhara silently prays for shivi’s happiness……
[a/n: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gkCKTuR-ECI ]
so guys.....I know bahut hi chotu sa update hai...but ye special wala hai on a special day and it was not planned....hope you liked it....do give your review😘😘
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thanks dear😘😘
Shivaaa
I so loved it when he said "mere akele rishta thodi na hai, woh bhi haqdar hai" ❤️
Their moments were so subtle.
'She looks into his eyes for permission. Shiva getting the hint leans forward and and tilts his head in affirmation.'
This is something new though we always read about guy asking permission but it strangely feels good to read a girl doing the same😊
loved it.❤️
It was sooo beautiful 💕💞
His care is the most precious thing 💕
Shiva pandya is the man who can't be defined in words he is the best ❤️
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