Star Commentor Award (Part 37)
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Part 38
She digs her face into the palms of her hand
G-oooo...I always choose wrong men. I even question my judgement now
M- You just dated one guy. One! I think problem is more on the lines of that you fear making mistakes
G-Everybody does!
M-Everybody doesn’t!
He retorts
M-Breaking news, Geet! It’s ok to fail. Everybody fails and everybody has failed
She looks down
M-You know how I see you ...like when you were younger…like a goodie-goodie girl; good in studies, obeying her parents, praised by teachers and relatives, always the good girl. You identify yourself as that...you are judgmental of yourself and fear if anything you do will put you in that not so perfect or average category. You are too hard on yourself
She is silently listening to him unable to find words to counter him
M-Geet, it’s okay to f*ck up and say that you f*cked up. But point is to realize when & how much you f*cked up and learnt from it. Your fear of failure doesn’t even let you try. See, you feared having s*x coz somea-hole said that you are not "good enough" but today we tried and it turned out great
G-You think it was great?
Geet squeaks looking down shyly
Maan smiles putting her loose strand of hair behind her ear
M-I think it was beyond great, Geet
He brings his lips near her cheek for a light peck, but she moves her face, and it turns into a smooch
This time they smooch ache se properly time leke. No guilt,in the moment wala kiss
Tabhi the doorbell rings and they had to stop midway
Geet wonders ki mere ghar kaun aa gaya
She opens the door, to find her friends plus colleagues at the door
“Hey Geet..we...”
“eh..we thought you were on leave as you must be sick or something...as you never take leave...so we came...”
G-ehh...no, I am ok, please come inside
Geet notices them gawking at Maan
G-emm..this is Maan
M-Hi
Ab dost toh ghuss gaye, ki gossip milegi
“Yeah...we didn’t realize Maan is there to take care of you...we hope we are not intruding”
G-I will get some water
Maan bhi kya kare awkwardly khada hai
Ladkiyan Geet ke peeche- peeche aayi ki
“Ohh you guys are living together”
“I told you naa they were serious”
“OMG, you guys look so cute together!”
While Geet is in the kitchen being hounded by the girls Maan is with the men in the living room
“This is so dreamy! He moved in with you”
Geet jitna koshish kar rahi hai ignore kar rahi thi unki baat ignore karne ki par wo ladkiyan topic change hi nahi kar rahi
Finally, Geet had to reply
G-It’s not like that…he is just visiting me
“Is he?”
Geet looks away
G-Why don’t you go in the hall and sit
Geet almost pushes them out of the kitchen
Maan hears Geet calling for him
G- Maan. Can you just come here and help me with this?
M-Coming
Maan kund ke aa jaata hai
Her friends are like we already know they are together,why is she trying to hide
Aur uske upar clearly ye sab Maan ka saara laptop etc sabyahan pada hua hai, who is fooling by saying ki he is visiting
Geet is such a prude
Maan aata hai Geet ke kitchen mein
Geet is panicking ki kya karu kya karu
M-Stop panicking
Maan kitchen se kuch khaane peene ka samaan leke jaata hai
M-Come. You can’t stay here forever
Geet toh bahar jaane ko ready hi nahi hai
But as Maan walks out of the kitchen, she also reluctantly follows him
Ek friend bolta hai ki since nobody is actually sick, I have some beer in my car. I will get it
Wo uthke chala jaata hai beer laane
One of the girls speaks up
“So Maan, you are working from here I see”
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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