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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 37

Fantabulous update..... amazingly written

loved Maan's reply to Geet....

at least she agreed....

that question from Maan was reasonable

ahh she said no....

feeling for Maan

great that he did not prod her

while I understand Geet's fears, she should give them a chance

sad that Geet has such low confidence

hate that she cannot see how attracted Maan is to her! 

did she forget his confession?

great she conceded that what transpired was good

why would Maan think of her as a lose character

ahh she only dated Piyush

omg Piyush is gay

of cos Geet is flabbergasted

glad that Maan called Piyush..... 

Gosh Piyush was interested in Maan

seems like Piyush is still interested in Maan

that's why he wants to get Geet out of Maan's life

Geet's shocked/

now she is questioning her judgment in falling for Maan

hope she gives Maan a chance

update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

Thank you for pm..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congratulations to all Winners


of Part 35 


Well done 



Part 36 


A Fantasy Indeed 


Maan and Geet got intimate , in a way 

where Maan actually made her feel wanted and beautiful

he was sensitive towards her 

and wow she experience her first big "O"

she is happy then why blabber out unnecessary words to Maan

she allowed him to touch her 

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Hey Congratulations to all the 


Winners of Part 36 well done 



Part 37 


Fabulous and Surprising 


Wow Piyush is Bi sexual , hell Geet is better off without him 

and Maan has known Piyush from college days 

when Piyush actually liked Maan 

well Geet now should be happy that her relation did not work

with Piyush and she must try and give Maan a chance 

he seems to really like Geet and always talking about dating 

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Amazing chapter. Thanks for the pm.

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Awesome update dear ,oh payush is gay  ,no wonder hemail always act funny around maan, hopefully his wife will find out 

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Star Commentor Award (Part 37)

Winner:   Creampuff ⭐️

Runner-ups:  sanum23, Khwaishfan

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Part 38

 

She digs her face into the palms of her hand

 

G-oooo...I always choose wrong men. I even question my judgement now

 

M- You just dated one guy. One! I think problem is more on the lines of that you fear making mistakes

 

G-Everybody does!

 

M-Everybody doesn’t!

 

He retorts

 

M-Breaking news, Geet! It’s ok to fail. Everybody fails and everybody has failed

 

She looks down

 

M-You know how I see you ...like when you were younger…like a goodie-goodie girl; good in studies, obeying her parents, praised by teachers and relatives, always the good girl. You identify yourself as that...you are judgmental of yourself and fear if anything you do will put you in that not so perfect or average category. You are too hard on yourself

 

She is silently listening to him unable to find words to counter him

 

M-Geet, it’s okay to f*ck up and say that you f*cked up. But point is to realize when & how much you f*cked up and learnt from it. Your fear of failure doesn’t even let you try. See, you feared having s*x coz somea-hole said that you are not "good enough" but today we tried and it turned out great

 

G-You think it was great?

 

Geet squeaks looking down shyly

 

Maan smiles putting her loose strand of hair behind her ear

 

M-I think it was beyond great, Geet

 

He brings his lips near her cheek for a light peck, but she moves her face, and it turns into a smooch

 

This time they smooch ache se properly time leke. No guilt,in the moment wala kiss

 

Tabhi the doorbell rings and they had to stop midway

 

Geet wonders ki mere ghar kaun aa gaya

 

She opens the door, to find her friends plus colleagues at the door

 

“Hey Geet..we...”

 

“eh..we thought you were on leave as you must be sick or something...as you never take leave...so we came...”

 

G-ehh...no, I am ok, please come inside

 

Geet notices them gawking at Maan

 

G-emm..this is Maan

 

M-Hi

 

Ab dost toh ghuss gaye, ki gossip milegi

 

“Yeah...we didn’t realize Maan is there to take care of you...we hope we are not intruding”

 

G-I will get some water

 

Maan bhi kya kare awkwardly khada hai

 

Ladkiyan Geet ke peeche- peeche aayi ki

 

“Ohh you guys are living together”

 

“I told you naa they were serious”

 

“OMG, you guys look so cute together!”

 

While Geet is in the kitchen being hounded by the girls Maan is with the men in the living room

 

“This is so dreamy! He moved in with you”

 

Geet jitna koshish kar rahi hai ignore kar rahi thi unki baat ignore karne ki par wo ladkiyan topic change hi nahi kar rahi

 

Finally, Geet had to reply

 

G-It’s not like that…he is just visiting me

 

“Is he?”

 

Geet looks away

 

G-Why don’t you go in the hall and sit

 

Geet almost pushes them out of the kitchen

 

Maan hears Geet calling for him

 

G- Maan. Can you just come here and help me with this?

 

M-Coming

 

Maan kund ke aa jaata hai

 

Her friends are like we already know they are together,why is she trying to hide

 

Aur uske upar clearly ye sab Maan ka saara laptop etc sabyahan pada hua hai, who is fooling by saying ki he is visiting

 

Geet is such a prude

 

Maan aata hai Geet ke kitchen mein

 

Geet is panicking ki kya karu kya karu

 

M-Stop panicking

 

Maan kitchen se kuch khaane peene ka samaan leke jaata hai

 

M-Come. You can’t stay here forever

 

Geet toh bahar jaane ko ready hi nahi hai

 

But as Maan walks out of the kitchen, she also reluctantly follows him

 

Ek friend bolta hai ki since nobody is actually sick, I have some beer in my car. I will get it

 

Wo uthke chala jaata hai beer laane

 

One of the girls speaks up


“So Maan, you are working from here I see”

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally 😁 They spoke clearly not in riddles 😋

Maan has perfectly analyzed Geet's behavior. She is indeed scared of making mistakes. 

Chalo she finally accepted the truth. 

Yeh Geet ke friends wrong timings. 

Geet is hesitant in front of her colleagues and friends. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Chapter 37 

Mind blowing update !!!👏👏👏👏👏

So maan is still interesting in dating geet but her mind is overdrive spurting out nonsense left, right & centre !!! 😆 But I like how maan does not get phased by geet’s ridiculous comments 

Unfortunate that geet does not think herself worthy of maan 😔

But di you absolutely blew me away when I found out piyush was gay !!!!!

Funniest part was that maan knew b/c he propositioned maan 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Omg that is just too funny !!! 

So piyush ‘s current wife does not know either !!! Not sure if he is bi or if he is still hiding in the closet & used geet & his current wife as a cover to hide his real sexuality. 

But as you wrote (loved this line) “ does not matter if he is gay , bi or Martian “ b/c he is a a-hole !!!!! 🤣🤣

I couldn’t agree more b/c now he is deterring maan from a relationship with geet saying she has mental problems ...... she should bring out her chainsaw & show him real mental problems 😆😆

Loved the twists & turns di 


Hoping these two can express their true feelings to each other soon 💕

Thank you for the pm & update 🤗


her mind is overdrive spurting out nonsense left, right & centre !!! -Lets say that's her special talent🐷


she should bring out her chainsaw & show him real mental problems -👍🏼Brilliant idea


Thanks for the wonderful comment every time❤️

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Originally posted by: sanum23

 Ooh so piyush is guy now everything get clear to geet y he showed geet low he him self have problem 

 Maan still want to date her but her insecurity stopping her to believe in maan bz of his high class status y not she judge him like others and give him one chance to proof his love 


everything get clear to geet y he showed geet low he him self have problem -Yup on point


Lets see what will she do next, keep reading❤️