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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 37)

Winner: Creampuff ⭐️

Runner-ups: sanum23, Khwaishfan

Special Mention: ferdouz,coderlady,

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Part 38

She digs her face into the palms of her hand

G-oooo...I always choose wrong men. I even question my judgement now

M- You just dated one guy. One! I think problem is more on the lines of that you fear making mistakes

G-Everybody does!

M-Everybody doesn’t!

He retorts

M-Breaking news, Geet! It’s ok to fail. Everybody fails and everybody has failed

She looks down

M-You know how I see you ...like when you were younger…like a goodie-goodie girl; good in studies, obeying her parents, praised by teachers and relatives, always the good girl. You identify yourself as that...you are judgmental of yourself and fear if anything you do will put you in that not so perfect or average category. You are too hard on yourself

She is silently listening to him unable to find words to counter him

M-Geet, it’s okay to f*ck up and say that you f*cked up. But point is to realize when & how much you f*cked up and learnt from it. Your fear of failure doesn’t even let you try. See, you feared having s*x coz somea-hole said that you are not "good enough" but today we tried and it turned out great

G-You think it was great?

Geet squeaks looking down shyly

Maan smiles putting her loose strand of hair behind her ear

M-I think it was beyond great, Geet

He brings his lips near her cheek for a light peck, but she moves her face, and it turns into a smooch

This time they smooch ache se properly time leke. No guilt,in the moment wala kiss

Tabhi the doorbell rings and they had to stop midway

Geet wonders ki mere ghar kaun aa gaya

She opens the door, to find her friends plus colleagues at the door

“Hey Geet..we...”

“eh..we thought you were on leave as you must be sick or something...as you never take leave...so we came...”

G-ehh...no, I am ok, please come inside

Geet notices them gawking at Maan

G-emm..this is Maan

M-Hi

Ab dost toh ghuss gaye, ki gossip milegi

“Yeah...we didn’t realize Maan is there to take care of you...we hope we are not intruding”

G-I will get some water

Maan bhi kya kare awkwardly khada hai

Ladkiyan Geet ke peeche- peeche aayi ki

“Ohh you guys are living together”

“I told you naa they were serious”

“OMG, you guys look so cute together!”

While Geet is in the kitchen being hounded by the girls Maan is with the men in the living room

“This is so dreamy! He moved in with you”

Geet jitna koshish kar rahi hai ignore kar rahi thi unki baat ignore karne ki par wo ladkiyan topic change hi nahi kar rahi

Finally, Geet had to reply

G-It’s not like that…he is just visiting me

“Is he?”

Geet looks away

G-Why don’t you go in the hall and sit

Geet almost pushes them out of the kitchen

Maan hears Geet calling for him

G- Maan. Can you just come here and help me with this?

M-Coming

Maan kund ke aa jaata hai

Her friends are like we already know they are together,why is she trying to hide

Aur uske upar clearly ye sab Maan ka saara laptop etc sabyahan pada hua hai, who is fooling by saying ki he is visiting

Geet is such a prude

Maan aata hai Geet ke kitchen mein

Geet is panicking ki kya karu kya karu

M-Stop panicking

Maan kitchen se kuch khaane peene ka samaan leke jaata hai

M-Come. You can’t stay here forever

Geet toh bahar jaane ko ready hi nahi hai

But as Maan walks out of the kitchen, she also reluctantly follows him

Ek friend bolta hai ki since nobody is actually sick, I have some beer in my car. I will get it

Wo uthke chala jaata hai beer laane

One of the girls speaks up


“So Maan, you are working from here I see”

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Finally 😁 They spoke clearly not in riddles 😋

Maan has perfectly analyzed Geet's behavior. She is indeed scared of making mistakes.

Chalo she finally accepted the truth.

Yeh Geet ke friends wrong timings.

Geet is hesitant in front of her colleagues and friends.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Chapter 37

Mind blowing update !!!👏👏👏👏👏

So maan is still interesting in dating geet but her mind is overdrive spurting out nonsense left, right & centre !!! 😆 But I like how maan does not get phased by geet’s ridiculous comments

Unfortunate that geet does not think herself worthy of maan 😔

But di you absolutely blew me away when I found out piyush was gay !!!!!

Funniest part was that maan knew b/c he propositioned maan 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Omg that is just too funny !!!

So piyush ‘s current wife does not know either !!! Not sure if he is bi or if he is still hiding in the closet & used geet & his current wife as a cover to hide his real sexuality.

But as you wrote (loved this line) “ does not matter if he is gay , bi or Martian “ b/c he is a a-hole !!!!! 🤣🤣

I couldn’t agree more b/c now he is deterring maan from a relationship with geet saying she has mental problems ...... she should bring out her chainsaw & show him real mental problems 😆😆

Loved the twists & turns di


Hoping these two can express their true feelings to each other soon 💕

Thank you for the pm & update 🤗


her mind is overdrive spurting out nonsense left, right & centre !!! -Lets say that's her special talent🐷


she should bring out her chainsaw & show him real mental problems -👍🏼Brilliant idea


Thanks for the wonderful comment every time❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Ooh so piyush is guy now everything get clear to geet y he showed geet low he him self have problem

Maan still want to date her but her insecurity stopping her to believe in maan bz of his high class status y not she judge him like others and give him one chance to proof his love


everything get clear to geet y he showed geet low he him self have problem -Yup on point


Lets see what will she do next, keep reading❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

part 34

No matter what she puts out in front of him, he keeps taking it in a stride.


I loved this line❤️

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Originally posted by: coderlady

part 36

That was not fair on her part to accuse him like that. He gave her an experience she never had, she enjoyed herself, and then turned it around as if he used her. If she was concerned about it, she should have not let it get that far.


Yes yes yes!!!! this comment is gold!❤️

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Originally posted by: ferdouz

Omg Piyush is gay. Gosh the as----e. Khud has flaws and blaming Geet 😠

Geet is doubting her choice. Maan bhi tho uski choice hai na 😅


Maan bhi tho uski choice hai na- 😉hahahah sahi pakde hain!

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Originally posted by: coderlady

part 37

OK so it wasn't really an accusation.

The real surprise here is that Piyush is gay. We already knew he was a jerk based on how he treated Geet. He is still covering up for himself. Getting married and hiding the fact from his wife. On top of that he has the gall to badmouth Geet. Talk about gaslighting.


Exactly Piyush is textbook example of gaslighting. Thanks for calling that out👍🏼

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Originally posted by: aparna3011

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nice

geet is protecting herself with defense mechanism

maan shows real face of piyush to geet


Yup thats the word defense mechanism. Two words describe Geet's behaviour perfectly

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Posted: 4 years ago

It's good that he spoke and assures her,

Her friends and colleagues are 😂,

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