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Wonferful
Maan try to handle situation geet kept doing blunders maan is right they made their mind already seeing them together now no use of explanation
Geet want to look better than any other of her friends so maan don't look at them she feeling insecure in maan presence in her friends
Great part
Oh god when will Geet understand
And maan being comfortable with her friends to is so sweet
Cont soon
Part 39
Fabulous Update
I liked how Maan tells Geet's friends they have been dating
for 3 months
actually he does not want anyone pointing fingers at Geet
while she trying so hard to let her friends know that she and Maan
are only friends
she panicked and again its Maan that calms her down
wow just wow Geet dressing up for Maan as she does not want him
looking at other girls
I also admired Maan refusing beer , he is really trying to win Geet's trust
hopefully she can see he is not like other rich guys , he is different
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geet is very much confuse seeing maan is very nice with friends
Beautiful story. Loved all the parts.
So Geets friends visit her. But Geet is panicking but Maan is there with her hope all wl b fine and Geet comes out of her awkwardness
thanks for the pm
appreciate the regular updates!
Part 39
Perfect update.... superbly written
well the friends are nosy
can understand Geet's reaction...
Proud of Maan.... he refused to have beer.
I expected Geet to trust Maan
not surprised that Maan and Geet give different responses to the question.
well Maan says they are dating for 3 months....
of cos Geet does not want to play truth and dare
great that are going our for dinner
so Geet starts panicking again
liked Maan's advice to Geet
seems like Geet has yet to understand Maan
she has already pegged Maan as rich snob
does she not realise that he is serious about her.
he told her friends that they are dating for 3 months - this should have given her a hint
loved that Geet decided to dress up to impress Maan
nice that she is making an effort
but Maan likes her as she is
update soon
She wants the dude's eyes on her and not on someone else. That's a start. A dress and makeup. She is making the effort.
Friends are great to have
Especially to give some push to high run emotions
Star Commentor Award (Part 39)
Winner: Taahir004
Runner-ups: kkiran,
Special Mention: coderlady,
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Part 40
The thought of all her friends dressed to the nines and she in a drab dress and Maan checking out other girls had made her feel uncomfortable instantly
She wears a beautiful feminine skirt & a top ,instead of the original choice of a jeans and a loose top
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Geet appears wearing the dress and light make-up.
Maan glances at her and smiles while walking towards her
But before he could step towards her; the girls reach her with a squeal complementing her how beautiful she looks
Maan puts his hands inside his pockets and walks behind the girls who were walking being busy taking selfies
So, ab aisa hai ki 2 cars hain aur 6 log
They have to split into 2 groups.
They decide ki girls’ boys mein divide ho jaate hain
Geet goes in separate car with the other two girls while Maan joins the boys
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Ao ab jo bandi truth n dare ke peeche padi thi
She says ki, chalo ab hum truth n dare khelte hain
Aisa tha ki, ek jo ladki thi uska boyfriend one of the ladkon mein se ek tha, aur dusri married thi
Truth n dare khelte huye sab hass rahe the, bakwas kar rahe the
Geet ki baari aayi toh Geet ko pucha ki
“What do you like most about Maan?”
G-emmm….I think he has a great butt
The friends are open mouthed with shock
“I meant...about his nature”
Geet music full volume pe chala deti hai to bide her embarrassment
G-I think Suresh and Ramesh also have nice butts (referring to the other guys)
She adds trying to normalize the situation then realizes she made it worst
She is thinking, God! what's wrong with me!
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Finally, they reach
As they are walking towards the restaurant
M-What's wrong?
Maan whispers to Geet while purposely walk slower than thegroup
G-I am making everything worse....It’s all because I am trying to lie...they are my friends I should not have kept anything secret. I will tell them there is nothing between us
M-Calm down. It’s not like that they don’t have any secrets that they hide from you
G-They don’t. I know everything about them
M-Suresh & Bani are secretly dating. Did you know that?
She gasps
G-They are not!
Maan shakes his head and joins the group
He has lost all hopes on her....isko kabhi nahi samjhega
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They are at the dinner table talking and all
The other couple go out to take a call from their family as the restaurant was little noisy
Geet was poking Maan ki how do you know
She even messaged him that, but he didn’t reply to
Four of them were having dinner and conversing
Waiter puts a tissue near Bani
She opens it and excuses herself
After a while Suresh also excuses himself that he has to make a call
G-See I told you!
Geet says triumphantly
M-They are making out in the back
He states calmly
G-They are not! Didn’t you see? Somebody sent some message on tissue paper to Bani. That happens to women. I guess someone in the restaurant likes her and gave her his number
M-Firstly, number diya hai to number save kare ya phek de...uth kar kaha jaana hai? Secondly, if Suresh went to take a call then why is he coming from the direction of the washroom where Bani went?
Maan shuts his mouth as Suresh comes to sit
Bani also comes and sits next to Geet
Geet notices Bani has a hickey
She gasps
Geet excuses herself
Maan peeche nahi aaya toh she calls him
Maan looks at his phone and excuses himself
Geet chupke khadi thi, he follows her
M-Why were you calling me?
G-You were right about them...I saw a hickey on Bani...oh my God!
M-You called me just to say this? Now they think we are making out here
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