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Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations to all winners


of Part 38



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Posted: 4 years ago

Wonferful

Maan try to handle situation geet kept doing blunders maan is right they made their mind already seeing them together now no use of explanation


Geet want to look better than any other of her friends so maan don't look at them she feeling insecure in maan presence in her friends

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

Oh god when will Geet understand

And maan being comfortable with her friends to is so sweet

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 39


Fabulous Update


I liked how Maan tells Geet's friends they have been dating

for 3 months

actually he does not want anyone pointing fingers at Geet

while she trying so hard to let her friends know that she and Maan

are only friends

she panicked and again its Maan that calms her down

wow just wow Geet dressing up for Maan as she does not want him

looking at other girls

I also admired Maan refusing beer , he is really trying to win Geet's trust

hopefully she can see he is not like other rich guys , he is different

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Posted: 4 years ago

39

geet is very much confuse seeing maan is very nice with friends

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful story. Loved all the parts.

So Geets friends visit her. But Geet is panicking but Maan is there with her hope all wl b fine and Geet comes out of her awkwardness

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm

appreciate the regular updates!


Part 39

Perfect update.... superbly written

well the friends are nosy

can understand Geet's reaction...

Proud of Maan.... he refused to have beer.

I expected Geet to trust Maan

not surprised that Maan and Geet give different responses to the question.

well Maan says they are dating for 3 months....

of cos Geet does not want to play truth and dare

great that are going our for dinner

so Geet starts panicking again

liked Maan's advice to Geet

seems like Geet has yet to understand Maan

she has already pegged Maan as rich snob

does she not realise that he is serious about her.

he told her friends that they are dating for 3 months - this should have given her a hint

loved that Geet decided to dress up to impress Maan

nice that she is making an effort

but Maan likes her as she is

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

She wants the dude's eyes on her and not on someone else. That's a start. A dress and makeup. She is making the effort.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Friends are great to have

Especially to give some push to high run emotions

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 39)

Winner: Taahir004

Runner-ups: kkiran,

Special Mention: coderlady,

Early Bird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): kkiran, Creampuff,NeenaDd

Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s

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Part 40

The thought of all her friends dressed to the nines and she in a drab dress and Maan checking out other girls had made her feel uncomfortable instantly

She wears a beautiful feminine skirt & a top ,instead of the original choice of a jeans and a loose top

+++++

Geet appears wearing the dress and light make-up.

Maan glances at her and smiles while walking towards her

But before he could step towards her; the girls reach her with a squeal complementing her how beautiful she looks

Maan puts his hands inside his pockets and walks behind the girls who were walking being busy taking selfies

So, ab aisa hai ki 2 cars hain aur 6 log

They have to split into 2 groups.

They decide ki girls’ boys mein divide ho jaate hain

Geet goes in separate car with the other two girls while Maan joins the boys

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Ao ab jo bandi truth n dare ke peeche padi thi

She says ki, chalo ab hum truth n dare khelte hain

Aisa tha ki, ek jo ladki thi uska boyfriend one of the ladkon mein se ek tha, aur dusri married thi

Truth n dare khelte huye sab hass rahe the, bakwas kar rahe the

Geet ki baari aayi toh Geet ko pucha ki

“What do you like most about Maan?”

G-emmm….I think he has a great butt

The friends are open mouthed with shock

“I meant...about his nature”

Geet music full volume pe chala deti hai to bide her embarrassment

G-I think Suresh and Ramesh also have nice butts (referring to the other guys)

She adds trying to normalize the situation then realizes she made it worst

She is thinking, God! what's wrong with me!

+++++++

Finally, they reach

As they are walking towards the restaurant

M-What's wrong?

Maan whispers to Geet while purposely walk slower than thegroup

G-I am making everything worse....It’s all because I am trying to lie...they are my friends I should not have kept anything secret. I will tell them there is nothing between us

M-Calm down. It’s not like that they don’t have any secrets that they hide from you

G-They don’t. I know everything about them

M-Suresh & Bani are secretly dating. Did you know that?

She gasps

G-They are not!

Maan shakes his head and joins the group

He has lost all hopes on her....isko kabhi nahi samjhega

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They are at the dinner table talking and all

The other couple go out to take a call from their family as the restaurant was little noisy


Geet was poking Maan ki how do you know

She even messaged him that, but he didn’t reply to

Four of them were having dinner and conversing

Waiter puts a tissue near Bani

She opens it and excuses herself

After a while Suresh also excuses himself that he has to make a call

G-See I told you!

Geet says triumphantly

M-They are making out in the back

He states calmly

G-They are not! Didn’t you see? Somebody sent some message on tissue paper to Bani. That happens to women. I guess someone in the restaurant likes her and gave her his number

M-Firstly, number diya hai to number save kare ya phek de...uth kar kaha jaana hai? Secondly, if Suresh went to take a call then why is he coming from the direction of the washroom where Bani went?

Maan shuts his mouth as Suresh comes to sit

Bani also comes and sits next to Geet

Geet notices Bani has a hickey

She gasps

Geet excuses herself

Maan peeche nahi aaya toh she calls him

Maan looks at his phone and excuses himself

Geet chupke khadi thi, he follows her

M-Why were you calling me?

G-You were right about them...I saw a hickey on Bani...oh my God!

M-You called me just to say this? Now they think we are making out here

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago

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