Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara KushalTandon-Ada,Vin-Shiny SS

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Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara..Just be careful heart... Introduction

 Dedicated to Varshatomar2 who wants a Kushal Tandon-Ada Khan,Vin Rana-Shiny Doshi story from me.

It is the remake of my old SS with some changes.

He was her first love.She was his first love too.But can first love be always ever lasting?Is it necessary that the first love be their last love also?


Manav,Dev and Gaadha work in the same office.
Manav:A very handsome jovial person.Apart from his work, dancing is his hobby though he is not a professional dancer.

Dev:A very serious man.Though he has a job he does music shows.He is a very good singer.

Gaadha:A bubbly girl who is fun loving.She is very beautiful.

Gaadha and Dev are best friends.They are family friends too.

Manav adores Gaadha secretly.He does not have the guts to confess his love.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congrats on the SS! 

lovely intro

update soon 

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Congratulations on your new SS


Title sounds Fascinating 


Concept and Character Sketch is Interesting 

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Will this be a love triangle?

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U will know it in the upcoming parts.Thank you


Originally posted by: coderlady

Will this be a love triangle?

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Thank u very much friends

Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara..Just be careful heart...Part 1

Dev,Gaadha and Manav were at their colleague Natasha's wedding place.

Dev started singing....

Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai
Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani


Use Jitna Dekhoon Utna Sochoon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon, hit it!
Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai
Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani
Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai
Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani
Woh Hai Koi Kali Ya Koi Kiran
Ya Hai Koi Kahani
Use Jitna Dekhoon Utna Sochoon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman
Hey Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Dekhte ho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman

Gaadha who was in a fun mood could not control herself.She started shaking her legs.


Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman
Ho Maine Jise Abhi Abhi Dekha Hai
Kaun Hai Woh Anjaani
Woh Hai Koi Kali Yo Koi Kiran
Yo Hai Koi Kahani
Use Jitna Dekhoon Utna Sochoon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Dekhte ho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Tum Bhi Kaho Naa O Pretty Woman

She danced around Dev.

Yo Pretty Woman
Listen Up Girl Why U Feel This Way
Don't U See The Sunshine
Coming Out Today
You Got To Feel It Right Just Like Day After Night
Don't Let The Sunshine
Out Of Your Sight
Cause I Can Feel You
Here Can You Feel It
When I Say That
I Can Feel You Here
Can U Feel Me Here
When I Say "I Am Crazy About You
Pretty Woman”


 

Manav was fuming with jealousy.

He thought:This Dev is damn good at singing.That's why Gaadha is crazy about him.Unfortunately I don't possess the tool which he possesses...singing talent.But I cannot accept defeat that easily.I can dance.I will dance to impress Gaadha.

Manav started dancing.Gaadha was surprised.Manav moved towards Gaadha  by shaking his  legs.Gaadha smiled.

Sone Ka Rang Hai
Sheeshe Ka Ang Hai
Jo Dekhe Dang Hai Kya Kahoon
Hairaan Main Bhi Hoon
Yeh Kya Andaaz Hai
Itna Kyoon Naaz Hai
Is mein Kya Raaz Hain Kya Kahoon
Woh To Pal Mein Khushi Hai Pal Mein Khafa
Badle Woh Rang Har Ghadi

For Manav her beautiful smile for him was priceless.He was very excited.

Par Jo Bhi Dekhoon Roop Uska
Lagti Hai Pyaari Badi
Use Jitna Dekhoon Utna Sochoon
Kya Use Main Keh Doon
Pretty Woman Pretty Woman
Dekho Dekho Na Pretty Woman
Pretty Woman
Dekhte ho Na Pretty Woman
Tum Bhi Kaho Naa Pretty Woman
(Kal ho na ho).


But Dev's song pulled her back which made Manav angry again.

After the music-dance session,while everybody was busy Manav grabbed her hand and dragged her to a vacant room.Gaadha was shocked.

G:Manav....what are you doing?

Manav stared at her angrily:I am doing what i feel like doing.

 He removed his hands off  her.


G:Are you crazy?

M:You are crazy.That's why you are encouraging Dev to flirt with you.

Gaadha got irritated:How did I encourage Dev to flirt with me?

M:By over rating him....admiring him as a singer....

G:Did I do any mistake by admiring him as a singer?I don't think so.Because he is a fantastic singer.That means he is not over rated.And don't try to underestimate him.He is my best friend.

Manav got irritated:Ohhhhhhhhhhhh!I am fed up of hearing good things about Dev.Why don't you say at least one good thing about me?I danced well.Right?Or you don't want to give me a compliment as I am not famous like Dev?If I take dance as a profession I can be more famous than Dev.

Gaadha felt like laughing.

G:By the way...why do you get angry when I praise Dev?Is it jealousy?

Manav felt embarrassed as he was caught red handed.

M:Jealousy?I am not jealous of Dev.

G:Don't hide it Manav.I know that you are jealous when I talk good about Dev.You became jealous when i danced with him.
Manav did not know what to say due to embarrassment.
Gaadha lowered her voice and asked him in a cute manner:Is it because you love me and you hate to see me with someone else?

Jeene bhi de duniya humein
Ilzaam na lagaa
Ik baar toh karte hain sab
Koi haseen khataa
Warna koi kaise bhalaa
Chaahe kisiko bepanah
Aye zindagi tu hi bataa
Kyun ishq hai gunaah

Manav was shocked by her unexpected question.
Manav stammered:Gaadha.....
Gaadha smiled:Tell me Manav...tell me what is inside your mind.Otherwise I won't talk to you.
Gaadha pretended to be angry and tried to walk away.Suddenly Manav caught her hand.She smiled.Slowly she turned back and looked at his face with a smile.Manav smiled.


Jeene bhi de duniya humein
Ilzaam na lagaa
Ik baar toh karte hain sab
Koi haseen khataa


M:You are right.I can't tolerate you getting close to anyone else.

Gaadha smiled:Why?


Khud se hi karke guftgu
Koi kaise jeeye
Ishq toh laazmi saa hai
Zindagi ke liye (x2)


M:Because I love you.
She blushed.

Dil kya kare
Dil ko agar acha lage koi
Jhoota sahi
Dil ko magar sacha lage koi


She looked at him:Me too Manav.I love you too.
Manav could'nt believe the magical words she uttered.

Jeene bhi de duniya humein
Ilzaam na lagaa
Ik baar toh karte hain sab
Koi haseen khataa
Warna koi kaise bhalaa
Chaahe kisiko bepanah
Aye zindagi tu hi bataa
Kyun ishq hai gunaah

They both looked at each other's eyes deeply. 


Dil ko bhi udne ke liye
Aasmaan chahiye
Khulti ho jinme khidkiya
Wo makaan chahiye (x2)

Suddenly they heard a voice.
"Gaadha!"
G:My God!Dadimaa is calling me.What if she finds me with you here?

 M:What is the problem?

G:You fool....she will think that we are doing some mistake.That's why we chose this vacant room.
Suddenly Manav pulled her towards him.
M:A sweet mistake....


Darwaze se nikle zaraa
Bahar ko rehguzar
Har mod pe jo saath ho
Aisa ho humsafar




Gaadha blushed and ran away removing his hands from her.He smiled.

Jeene bhi de duniya humein
Ilzaam na lagaa
Ik baar toh karte hain sab
Koi haseen khataa
Warna koi kaise bhalaa
Chaahe kisiko bepanah
Aye zindagi tu hi bataa
Kyun ishq hai gunaah


(Dil Sambhal Jaa zara)


Gaadha ran towards her grand mother Indira.
I:Where were you Gaadha?It's time for Natasha's departure.

G:Sorry Dadimaa.I was....I had sweets.Right?So I went to wash my hands.

I:Ok....

Gaadha was relieved.

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thank you for the pm

superb update 

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We know who she likes and he likes her back. What does Dev feel, that we dont know.

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Part 1 


Beautiful Start 


Loved Dev's song , it was just so amazingly beautiful 

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Thank u very much friends



Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara..Just be careful heart...Part 2

Dedicated to InsaneSoul08 who wants to see Natasha.I was not planning to show Natasha.But seeing Insanesoul08's comment on his wish to see Natasha I showed her with her husband.

Natasha looked at her parents and friends emotionally.

Natasha hugged her parents and cried.

She also hugged Gaadha before leaving with her husband Kairav.

Kairav:Nats,are you upset?

Natasha:Yes Kairav.I will miss my parents.

Kairav:You don't have to miss them as after marriage also you will visit them regularly.

Natasha looked at him happily.

Dev,Gaadha and Manav waved hands at them.

 

Natasha-Kairav’s reception party…

The photographers were busy clicking the photographs of Kairav and Natasha.

Natasha and Kairav cut a cake 

 and fed each other.

Indira:Natasha looks so nice with Kairav.

Gaadha:You are right dadi.They look adorable together.

Indira:I wish to see you as a bride Gaadha.

Gaadha thought:I just confessed my love to Manav.Dadi won’t allow us to have a romantic courtship.She wants straight wedding.Oh!

Gaadha:Dadi.....always wedding and wedding.You don't have anything else to talk about?

Indira:What is wrong in that?I want to see my grand daughter married.I want to see my great grand children also.

Gaadha:Everything will happen on time Dadi.

Indira:But I can’t wait that long.

Gaadha smiled:Dadi…

Indira:I will choose a guy you like.You won't be able to refuse it then.

Gaadha closed her eyes.

Gaadha:The guy I like....Manav! 

She smiled thinking of Manav.

She opened her eyes.

Suddenly her eyes fell on Manav.He winked at her and looked at her with a naughty smile.

She blushed.

 

Aankhon ki
Gustakhiyan.. maaf hoon
O aankhon ki
Gustakhiyan.. maaf hoon
Ek tuk tumhein dekhti hain
Jo baat kehna chaahe zubaan
Tumse vo ye kehti hain

As Indira got busy talking with someone she knows Gaadha walked towards Manav without her knowledge.

He held her hand and pulled her to a corner.

Gaadha:Naughty Manav…dadi will see us.

Manav:Don’t spoil my romantic mood Gaadha.

Gaadha:Really?What’s your intention then?

Manav:To get lost in your beautiful eyes.

 

Aankhon ki
Sharmohaya.. maaf ho
Tumhein dekhke jhukti hain
Uthi aankhein jo baat na keh sakin
Jhuki aankhein wo.. Kehti hain
Aankhon ki
Aankhon ki
Gustakhiyan.. maaf hoon

He looked at her eyes romantically.She was also lost in him.

Kaajal ka ek til tumhare labhon pe laga loon
La la la..
Haan chanda aur suraj ki nazron se tumko bacha loon
Hmmm..
Oh palkhon ki chilman mein aao main tumko chhupa loon
Aa.. a..
Khayaalon ki
Ye shokhiyaan… Maaf hon (hhhaan..)
Har dam tumhein sochti hain
Jab hosh mein hota hai jahan
Madhosh ye krti hain
Aankhon ki sharmohaya
Maaf ho(HDDCS)






Gaadha told about hers and Manav’s confession of love to Dev.
Dev started laughing along with Gaadha.
D:Manav is jealous of me because of our close friendship?
G:Ya....
D:That's so funny.


Manav came there.
Dev patted his shoulder:Come on yaar.Don't be silly.You were jealous of me?
Manav was embarrassed.
D:Anyways I am happy for both of you.You both make a cute couple.
Manav and Gaadha smiled.
D:Ok...carry on.I have rehearsal for my next music show.See you guys.
G:Bye...
M:Bye Dev....
D:Bye....
Dev went away.
Manav looked at Gaadha.
M:I am such a big fool.Seriously...seeing your friendship with Dev,I had longed to be born as Dev.
I really thought that you both love each other.
Gaadha giggled:That is partially correct.

M:Means?I did'nt understand.

Gaadha smiled:I used to love Dev.He is my first love.

Manav was shocked:What?

G:Ya....But later I realized that I am a fool to be in love with Dev.He is a cool dude.He does'nt love me.He is passionate only about music.

Manav became upset.

G:Realizing that Dev does'nt feel the same for me I erased the unnecessary thoughts from my mind.Later I realized that I have started loving you.I felt that your eyes always expressed love for me.Automatically i fell in love with you.How can i not love the person who loves me?

Manav smiled releasing his tensions as Gaadha's words were filled up with romantic sweetness.

Suddenly his face became dull:You stopped loving Dev because he does'nt love you.But what if he falls in love with you?

Gaadha started laughing:Dev is in love with me?Are you mad?It will never happen.

Manav smiled trying hard to remove unnecessary thoughts from his mind.

After a  month....

Indira called Gaadha.

I:Gaadha...now you have a good career.So now it's time for you to get married.

Gaadha blushed.

She thought:I can't stay away from Manav.So it's better to get married to him now.

I:I am thinking of getting you married to the person you like.

Gaadha was surprised.She thought:Dadimaaa came to know about my love for Manav?

I:Dev...

Gaadha was shocked:What?Dev?He is only my best friend.Not my lover.Then how can i marry him?

I:After marriage he will become your lover.

G:No Dadimaaa.I can't imagine marrying him.Dev will surely reject him.I am only his best friend.He can never see me that way.

I:Then i will ask him.

G:No no.When he rejects me you will feel bad.So don't ask him directly.

I:Then....

Suddenly Manav came.Gaadha looked at him with tension.

M:Hi Dadimaa...hi Gaadha...

I:What's the matter Manav?

M:Nothing special.I just visited you guys.

I:Anyways its good that you came here.Can you do a favour for us?

M:Yes Sure.What's the need of asking me that?

Manav wanted to help Indira and create a good impression about himself,so that things will become easier between him and Gaadha in future when it comes to the marriage proposal.

I:You must stand as an intermediate between Gaadha and Dev and ask him if he can marry Gaadha.

Manav was shocked and he stared at Gaadha.She was helpless.

M:What?

I:I feel that Dev is perfect for Gaadha.We know him very well as we are family friends.Dev and Gaadha are good friends too.But Gaadha does'nt feel like marrying her friend.She feels that even Dev does'nt prefer this alliance.

Manav was relieved.

I:But I am not going to back out.So you please go and ask him if he is interested in this alliance on my behalf.

Manav was dull.

M:Ok Dadimaa.

Gaadha stared at Manav.

I:Ask Dev to call me and tell me his reply.

M:Ok.

Manav went out.Gaadha followed him.

G:Manav...why did you agree to ask Dev about marrying me?


Manav got irritated and stared at her:Then what can I do Gaadha?
Gaadha looked upset.

M:For Dadimaa I have to do it..How can i refuse to do something for her?She will have a bad impression about me.Right?

G:In a way you are right.Anyways you simply ask Dev for Dadimaa's sake.If you don't ask him, Dadimaa might feel that she was getting fooled by you,Then it will be a problem.
M:But how can i ask Dev like that?He knows about our relationship.
G:Yes.But it's fine as Dev does'nt love me.He will laugh off when he hears this.
Manav smiled.

Manav met Dev.
M:Dadimaa wants Gaadha to marry you.
Dev was shocked:What?
M:She sent me here to ask you whether you are interested to marry Gaadha.She wants you to call and tell her your reply.You should call her now itself and tell her that you don't love Gaadha.Dev looked at Manav deeply.
D:I will call her now itself.But I won't tell her that I don't love Gaadha.
Manav was shocked.

If anyone wants Vijayendra-Nia scenes(Kairav-Natasha)please do tell me.