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Part 2

Beautiful and so Fascinating

Kairav and Natasha gets married

Both guys love Gaadha. who does she really love? She may not know the answer yet.

The character sketch is interesting. Manav is good at singing while Dev is good at dancing. Manav is possessive about Gaadha. It seemed that Maanav was going to do something to Gaadha. Their love confession was surprising. Dev accepted their love.

Kairan is so sweet that he told Natasha that she would visit her people regularly. The cake cutting scenes are romantic.

When dadi told Gaadha that she would get her married of her choice, I thought she would get her married to Manav.

Indira taking Dev's name was shocking.

To be in Indira's good books, Manav spoke to Dev. It is so shocking that Dev is told that he will speak to Indira but won't tell that he doesn't love her. Waiting for the next part.

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Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara..Just be careful heart...Part 3

Dedicated to Shesha who wants Vijayendra-Nia scenes too.

Manav met Dev.
M:Dadimaa wants Gaadha to marry you.
Dev was shocked:What?
M:She sent me here to ask you whether you are interested to marry Gaadha.She wants you to call and tell her your reply.You should call her now itself and tell her that you don't love Gaadha.Dev looked at Manav deeply.
D:I will call her now itself.But I won't tell her that I don't love Gaadha.
Manav was shocked.
Manav:Why?
Dev:I can't lie to Dadimaa that I don't love Gaadha.Because i consider her as my own Dadimaa.
Manav's lips shivered:That means.....

Dev said softly:I love Gaadha.
Manav was shocked.
Dev smiled:But don't worry Manav.I won't come as a villain and destroy your love story.I will call Dadimaa now and tell her that you will pass my message ie my reply to her.And you can tell her that I am not interested in Gaadha.
Manav was numb.
Dev rang up Indira.
Indira was excited:Dev?Did Manav meet you?

D:Yes.He told me everything.
Indira asked him eagerly:What’s your reply?
D:Manav will tell you that.I cannot say that over the phone.

Indira:But…

Dev:Dadimaa…I am quite busy now.I will call you later.

Indira:Ok Bye Dev.

Dev:Bye Dadimaa.
Dev disconnected the call.
Indira became dull.
Dev smiled at Manav:Happy?Now there won't be any problem.
Manav did not know how to react.
M:But....you....
D:Forget it Manav.Gaadha is my first love.I don't know whether someone else will be able to replace her in my mind or not.
M:Then why did'nt you confess your love to her?
D:Because i realized that she does'nt see me the way i see her.For her, I am just her best friend.I don't want to hurt her by confessing my feelings.And I am happy that finally she found her soul mate in you.I am happy for both of you.
M:How can you be happy to see Gaadha with me?
D:Because she is happy with you.And I want her to be always happy.
Dev's words made Manav feel inferior to him.

Manav thought:I love Gaadha.So I was always jealous to see her with Dev.But Dev loves Gaadha.So he is happy to see Gaadha happy with me.He is so different.I feel bad for Dev for the first time.If I had not come between both of them,they may have got united.

Manav went to Gaadha's house.
Indira:Manav....what did Dev say?

Manav hesitated to lie.

Gaadha smiled:Dev must have said that he is not interested in me.Right?

Manav's lips shivered:Yes.Gaadha was right.

Gaadha was happy:I knew it.

I:When Dev showed discomfort in giving a reply to me on the phone itself I felt that his reply would be negative.

M:Ok....I am going.

I:Ok.

Manav went out.Gaadha followed him.

G:Manav....why are you going so soon?

M:I have to take rest as it's weekend.

She smiled:You are so unromantic.

You want to take rest instead of spending time with me.

Manav gave her a pale smile.

He thought:I am longing to be with you Gaadha.But I feel guilty after knowing Dev’s love for you.I am hiding the truth from you,Dev and Dadimaa.

Gaadha:Tell me how did Dev react when you told him about the proposal?
Manav was too weak to reply.
G:He must have laughed.Right?
Manav lied:Yes.

Gaadha giggled:I knew it.

Manav felt upset.

Dev's stage show...
Dev was singing.

sitaaro ki mahafil me
gunjegaa taraanaa
ki hotho pe aaya hai
dil kaa fasaanaa

are dil ne dil ko pukaaraa
lo mai aaya milane dubaaraa
manzil pyar tumhara
mai hu saagar tum ho kinaaraa

sitaaro ki mahafil me
gunjegaa taraanaa
ki hotho pe aaya hai
dil kaa fasaanaa

are dil ne dil ko pukaaraa
lo mai aaya milane dubaaraa

ajab shaam hai ye pyar ki
pahalu me sabake yaar hai
ajab raat hai jazbaat ki
pahalu me pyar hi pyar hai

ye pyar tumhara ye pyar hamara
hai khub nazaaraa
zamana usi kaa hai saaraa zamana
ki jisne bhi sikhaa hai pyar nibhana

are dil ne dil ko pukaaraa
lo mai aaya milane dubaaraa
manzil pyar tumhara
mai hu saagar tum ho kinaaraa

kadam aaye hai us mod pe

The viewers were jumping with joy.Accidentally two beautiful eyes captured Dev's eyes.Due to the crowd and his changing positions while performing he lost the view of those lovely eyes.

ham tum hai jahaa saamane
nazar se nazar karane ab lagi
baate bade hi raaz se

ye raaz tumhara ye raaz hamara
kare hai kyaa ishaaraa
nishane pe dil hai ke dil pe nishana
divana hai apani hi dhun me divana

are dil ne dil ko pukaaraa
lo mai aaya milane dubaaraa
manzil pyar tumhara
mai hu saagar tum ho kinaaraa

sitaaro ki mahafil me
gunjegaa taraanaa
ki hotho pe aaya hai
dil kaa fasaanaa(Kaho na pyar hai)

After the performance,many people stood around him for his autograph.He was giving them autograph.A girl gave him a small book.

She:Autograph please…

He looked at her.He was surprised as se was the same girl who caught his attention while singing.Unknowingly he noticed her beautiful expressive eyes ,her pink lips. her beautiful smile. her lovely marble like face.
D:Your name?
She was excited to say her name:Jhanvi.

He wrote:Dear Jhanvi...
With love
Your Dev!
Suddenly he thought:Oh!Why did I write 'Your Dev'?Now if i strike it it will look bad.
He gave her the book where he wrote so.
She read his words.Her eyes glowed more seeing 'Your Dev'.
She smiled happily.Her smile was entering his heart and making a permanent mark there.
The crowd increased and she got disappeared.Unknowingly he felt sad.

Natasha was enjoying in the rain.Kairav was lost in her.

Yeh saajish hain boondon ki
Koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
Yeh saajish hain boondon ki
Koi khwaahish hain chup chup si
Dekho na dekho na
Dekho na dekho na
Hawa kuchh haule haule
Zubaan se kya kuchh bole
Kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan
Dekho na dekho na
Dekho na dekho na

He went near her and embraced her from behind.

Phir na hawayen hogi
Itani besharam
Phir na dag mag dag
Mag honge yeh kadam
Haa saawan yeh seedha
Nahi khufia bada
Kuchh toh baraste
Hue keh raha

They looked at each other passionately.

Samjho na samjho na

Samjho na samjho na

Hawa kuchh haule haule

Zubaan se kya kuchh bole

Kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan
Dekho na dekho na
Dekho na dekho na

He pressed his lips on her forehead softly.

Jugnu jaise chahat
Dekho jale mujhe
Meethi si mushkil

Hain koi kya kare

They had a passionate embrace which led to a romantic union of lips.

Hmm hothon ki arzi
Aise thukraaon na
Saanson ki marzi

Ko jhuthlaaon na
Chhuu lo na chhu lo na
Chhuu lo na chhu lo

They danced passionately forgetting everything else.

Hawa kuchh haule haule

Zubaan se kya kuchh bole
Na duuri hain ab darmayaan
Dekho na dekho na

Dekho na hmm hmm hmm
Hmm hmm hmm dekho(Fanaa).

After a few days....
Dev went to the temple.He prayed closing his eyes.He opened his eyes.He was surprised to see Jhanvi next to him praying to God.She opened her eyes after praying.She was surprised to see Dev in front of her..

J:Devji!What a pleasant surprise.
D:Jhanvi.
She was again surprised:How come you remember my name despite of meeting many people every day?
Dev said in his mind:My eyes see many people.But my heart has seen only you.
D:I don’t know why.But i could not forget you easily.
She blushed.
D:You stay near by?
J:Yes.
D:Who are there in your house?
Her face became dull.
She became upset:I have only my nani.I lost my family when I was 6 years old.

He felt sad.

D:Sorry.

J:It's ok.
D:Ok...I have to go now.
J:Bye.I am happy to meet you again.
He smiled waving his hands at her.She waved her hands back at him.

Dev's love confession for Gaadha was shocking. But glad that he told Manav that he wouldn't come between them.

Manav felt guilty for coming between them.

Glad that Dev got attracted to Jhanvi,

Glad that Jhanvi was happy to see "Your Dev" in her autograph.

Dev & Jhanvi met at the temple.

I hope they confess their love.

Kairav-Natasha dance scenes were romantic.

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Manav realized how noble Dev was to step out of their way. Looks like there is someone for him too.

Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara..Just be careful heart...Part 4

Indira showed the photographs of some boys to Gaadha.
I:Who is the best guy?
Gaadha got irritated:Dadimaa...why can't you allow me to live peacefully?
I:Gaadha...are you planning to remain single till the end?
G:No.
I:Then?
G:I will marry someone i love.
I:Then tell me whom do you love?

Gaadha was silent.

Indira:Say… who do you love?
G: Dadimaa...what are you asking me?
I:You have been rejecting all proposals.So it's sure that you love someone.Then tell me who?
Gaadha was nervous.
I:Tell Gaadha.
Gaadha shivered:Manav.
Indira was surprised:Manav?Then why did'nt you tell me before?He is a nice guy.

Gaadha was happy.She hugged her:You are so sweet Dadimaa.

Indira:If you had told me before I would not have sent Manav to ask Dev about you.In fact If I had a clue about you both I would not have even proceeded that proposal. He might have got hurt when I told him about getting you married to Dev.

Gaadha:Sorry Dadimaa.I did not get the courage to tell you about me and Manav.

Indira:Oh no.You are so bold.Still when it came to love,you did not get courage.

Gaadha smiled.


Gaadha rushed to meet Manav.
G:Manav...there is a happy news.Dadimaa gave us consent for our marriage.
Manav was excited:Really?
G:Yes.
M:How did you get the guts to present the issue before her?
G:What do you think of me?I am very smart and courageous.Not like you who hides facts.
Manav's heart was pricked.
He thought:Gaadha is right.I am not courageous.That's why I am hiding a big truth from her.
Gaadha was walking and talking:Now we are free and can roam around like love birds.
Suddenly her leg got slipped and was about to fall down.
Suddenly Manav held her.They shared a sweet eye lock.

Jab jab tere paas main aaya, Ik sukoon mila
Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, Wo wajood mila
Jab aaye mausam gham ke, Tujhe yaad kiya
Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya

They broke the eye lock.Gaadha tried to walk.But her leg pained.
M:What happened Gaadha?
G:I think it's sprain.
M:Then you don't walk.Take rest for some time on my sofa.
G:But how will I walk to the sofa?
He smiled.

Manav:Why don't you tell frankly that you want me to carry you to the sofa?

Gaadha blushed:If you know that why don't you pick me up in your arms.

He smiled.

Dil.. Sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil.. yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Aisa kyunkar hua janoon naa
Main janoon naa

He carried her in his arms.

Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

She encircled her arms around his neck.Again their eyes got stuck up to each other's.

Jis raah pe, hai ghar tera
Aksar wahan se, haan main hoon guzra
shayad yahi dil mein raha
Tu mujh ko mil jaye, Kya pata...
Kya hai yeh silsila
Janoon na, Main janun na

He placed her on the sofa.
G:Manav....you sit here.
M:There is no space here.
G:You sit here.I will lie on your lap.

He smiled:Naughty girl!

They giggled.

Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

They both smiled romantically.

Kuch bhi nahi Jab darmayaan
Phir kyun hai dil, tere hi khwaab bunta
Chaaha ki de, tujhko bhula
Par yeh bhi mumkin ho na sakaa..
Kya hai yeh maamla, Janun na
Main janoon naa

He sat on the sofa and Gaadha lay on his lap.
They both kept looking at each other.

Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

They did not realize that an hour had passed.
Suddenly Gaadha saw the clock.
G:My God!It's late.I have to go now.
She stood up fast.
G:I don't feel like going away from you Manav.But I have to go now.Bye.
Still Manav craved for her.
Gaadha walked fast surprising Manav.
M:Your leg is ok now?
Gaadha turned back and smiled at her.
G:My leg did'nt have any problem.I just pretended to have pain,so that i can spend some intimate moments with you.

Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk ja zara

Manav was stunned.

Manav:Drama Queen!

She pouted.

Manav:But no problem.I loved your trick.So I could also share some romantic moments with you.
She blushed.They both smiled.

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu
Dil sambhal ja zara
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu(Murder2).

Kairav gave a rose to Natasha.

Kairav:To my darling wife.

But to his shock she was not cheerful.

Instead she complained:Only one rose?

Kairav:Chill…there are more on the way…

He gave her a small bouquet of red roses.

Kairav:Here they are…

Natasha:Kairav..I just asked you whether there is only one rose and you gave me these many roses?

Kairav:What is this yaar?When I gave you one rose you had complaint.Again you are complaining when I gave you more roses.

Natasha:Who told you that I was complaining?I am just surprised.What I meant was there was only one rose and no icecream?

Kairav smiled:Oh..I did’nt understand that…Icecream’s child…I will bring you lots of icecream cubes.

Natasha was excited:Thank you Kairav!You are so sweet.

They had a hug embrace.

Dev was not able to forget Jhanvi.But he was confused.He rang up Gaadha and told her everything.
G:Wow!
D:What wow?
G:You fool.You are in love with Jhanvi.
Dev smiled:Gaadha....are you sure?

G:Ofcourse.

Dev:But I just met her twice.

Gaadha:Love is like that.Sometimes a few minutes are needed to fall in love.

He smiled.

Gaadha:Now go and confess your love to her.
He smiled.

Dev went to the temple.He did'nt find Jhanvi there.So he waited outside with his bag which had musical instrument.As he expected Jhanvi landed up there.
She was surprised:Devji!
J:Do you come here regularly?
D:No.But today i came here purposefully.
J:Why?
D:To see you?
She was confused.
D:I know that it’s strange.We did not even spend much time with each other.Still ..I …I mean I realized that I am in love with you.

Aahatein kaisi yeh aahatein
Sunta hoon aaj kal aye dil bata
Dastakein dete hain dastakein
Kyun ajnabi se pal aye dil bata

Jhanvi was shocked:What?No....
D:Why?You think I am a celebrity who flirts with women?
J:No.I know that you are not that kind of a person.
D:Then what's the problem?
J:You will get a better girl.I don't deserve you.I am an ordinary middle class girl.

Jhanvi started walking away without even entering the temple.
D:Jhanvi!Can you deny that you have not loved me even for a second?
She became very emotional.

Jhanvi's lips shivered:I...

Kuch toh hai jo neend aaye kam
Kuch toh hai jo aankhe hai nam
Kuch toh hai jo tu keh de toh
Haste haste marr jaaye hum

She could not say anything further.

He walked towards her:The first time when i saw your eyes itself I felt that your eyes were expressing something.Was that not love?I am sure that you are not my typical fan who is just crazy about my voice.

Mujhse zyada mere jaisa
Koi hai toh hai tu
Phir na jaane dil mera kyun
Tujhko na de sakun..

She did'nt look at his face.Tear drops decorated her eyes like pearls.
D:When I saw you on the first day itself in your autograph book i wrote unknowingly 'Your Dev'.I did'nt know why.But now i understand that it was God who made me write so.Because I was destined to be yours.I am your Dev.
She looked at him unbelievably.

Kuch toh hai jo dil ghabraaye
Kuch toh hai jo saans na aaye
Kuch toh hai jo hum honthon se
Kehte kehte keh naa paaye

D:Can you look at my eyes and say that you don't love me?
J:You asked me if i have ever loved you even for a second.Right?I fell in love with you the moment I saw your first stage show.Then onwards i have been loving you every single second.
He held her hand.

Jo humaare darmiyaan hai
Isko hum kya kahein
Ishq kya hai ik lehar hai
Aao iss mein bahein

They shared an emotional eye lock with a sweet smile.

Kuch toh hai jo hum hain khoye
Kuch toh hai jo tum na soye
Kuch toh hai jo hum dono yun
Haste haste itna roye(Do Lafzon Ki Kahani)