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Posted: 4 years ago
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Dev has found someone too. Why is Jhanvi so reluctant?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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thanks for the pm

awesome updaate

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gaadha has finally opened up with her Dadi that she loves Manav. Glad that Dagi agreed. The Manav-Gaadha songs are romantic. Dev & Jhanvi's love confession was romantic.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Part 3


Fabulous Update


Lovely song choice


Dev and Jhanvi's scene was hearttouching

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

thank u very much


Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara..Just be careful heart...Part 5

Jhanvi reached her house.Her Nani Savitri came.
S:Jhanvi....
She was suddenly shocked when she saw Dev coming from behind.
J:Nani....this is the singer Devji.I always tell you about him.Right?


Savitri was not able to understand anything.She kept looking at them to clear her doubts.
Dev touched her feet.Her hands shivered while blessing him.
D:Naniji....I love Jhanvi.I want to marry her.
Savitri was shocked:But....

D:Please don't say 'no'. I really love her.Since I am a celebrity don't think I am just doing all these for fun.Please....

Savitri became emotional:Jhanvi has always adored you.You were her Prince Charming in all her dreams ever since she saw you.If your love for Jhanvi is true why should I oppose?

Dev and Jhanvi became very happy.

Dev's parents visited Jhanvi and they fixed the date for engagement.

Gaadha met Manav.

G:Manav...Dadimaa has fixed the date for our engagement.The coming 7th.

Manav was excited:Really?I am so happy.

Suddenly he became emotional:Gaadha....promise me that you will always be with me.I am an orphan.I have only you.

Gaadha became emotional: I will always be there with you Manav.

M:Whetever happens you will be with me?

G:Yes Manav.Nothing can reduce my love for you.Time can only strengthen my love for you.

Manav became emotional.

He said in his mind:Gaadha....if you know the truth about Dev's feelings for you,will you leave me?How will you react if you come to know that i hid Dev's love from you purposefully?

Manav got tensed.

Gaadha kept her hand on his chest:I can feel your heart beating for me Manav.I know how much you love me.My heart is also beating for you and it will beat for you till the end of our lives.

They smiled at each other sweetly.

G:Ok...I am going.
Suddenly he pulled her towards him and wrapped his arms around her waist.To get grip she held him tight.

He touched her forehead with his.

M:Can't you stay here for some more time?
Gaadha blushed.




Dev and Jhanvi met each other at the temple.
J:This temple is so special.This temple only united us.


He smiled.
D:I came here to take you for the engagement ring shopping.
J:Shopping with you?Oh no...
D:Don't be scared.I won't misbehave with you.
J:I trust you.But Naniji won't like it.
D:Please don't refuse Jhanvi.It's our engagement.So i want you to wear the ring you like.Please.

She was still confused.
Finally she nodded her head making him smile.


Gaadha rang up Dev.
G:Hi buddy,where are you now?
Dev smiled at Jhanvi who was standing next to him.
D:I am with Jhanvi at the jewellery shop.We came here to select engagement rings.
G:Cool.We are also going for shopping.But it’s for the clothes shopping that we both are going together.Then Dev....you know that our engagement is on the same day at the same place.Don't tell this to Manav until that moment comes.I want him to be surprised.
D:Sure sure.As usual you are a prankster.
She giggled.
G:Ok bye.I am not disturbing your shopping romance.
She cut the call.


Dev and Jhanvi looked at the engagement ring collection.

D:Jhanvi,which ring did you like the most?

J:Whatever you chose will be the best.So you choose.

He picked up a ring.

D:Did you like this?I guess it will look lovely on you.
She smiled:Yes,I liked it.
D:Ok.So your ring selection is done by me.Now it's your turn to select a ring for me.
She never expected him to ask her to select a ring for him.
D:Come on.
She chose a ring.
J:I hope you liked this.


He smiled at her from the bottom of his heart:Lovely like you.

She blushed.
Dev told them to pack the rings.They packed it.
The girl who stood there:You both look lovely together.
They became shy.

Manav and Gaadha went for shopping.

Gaadha selected a shervani for Manav.

G:This will make you look damn handsome.

Manav smiled.

G:Now you select a dress for me.

Suddenly he saw a curl lying on her forehead.He touched it and tucked it behind her earlobe.

Feeling his magical touch she closed her eyes.Manav noticed it.

In a sweet voice he tried to wake her up from the romantic dream world:Gaadha!

She opened her eyes and moved her fingers towards his face and ended up caressing his cheek.

They both were lost in each other.Their eyes pampered each other romantically.

Slowly they came back to their senses breaking their eye lock.They were shy.
They walked to the engagement outfit section.
Manav chose a beautiful Indian attire for Gaadha.
G:I will try wearing this in the changing room.
M:Ok.
Gaadha went to the changing room while Manav stood outside the room.

After some time Gaadha came out of her dressing room.

Manav's eyes touched her completely.Gaadha was very shy.
She looked more gorgeous than he expected.
M:Can I tell you something Gaadha?


G:Tell.
Manav looked at her romantically:You look gorgeous.
She blushed.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Manav is worrying himself crazy. He might as well tell the truth and lets the chips fall where they may.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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thanks for the pm

superb update

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Dadi agreeing to his & Jhanvi's marriage was emotional. Manav & Gaadha dialogues are romantic & emotional. The engagement ring scenes & attire scenes are fantastic.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Hi...

I have read all parts In one go..

And i must tell you i like the concept..

The only character kushal tondon who is my fav.. i am reading this ss for him😳

But one i started reading this i like this..

You have given importance to almost each n every character which is very difficult..

Waiting for the engagement and new twists..

Good luck

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

A Beautiful and Emotional Update


Loved all Maanav scenes

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