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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Thank u so much friends 4 the lovely comments


Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara..Just be careful heart...Part 6

I dedicate this chapter to

InsaneSoul08 who gave jodi names to Manav-Gaadha and Dev-Jhanvi as
Gaadhav and JaDev.

The engagement day....
Manav was bowled over by Gaadha's beauty.She blushed.
He kept looking at her.
G:Manav,you have seen me in this dress before.Then why are you staring at me like this?
M:Today is a special day.So though I have seen you before in this dress you look special today.
G:Special means?
M:Special means more beautiful than ever before.I knew that you will be beautiful today.But your beauty is beyond my expectation.
She blushed.He enjoyed watching her blush.

M:How do I look?

G:Perfect!

Manav became happy.



Dev and Jhanvi came.
D:Hey Manav....meet....
Gaadha completed the sentence:This is our family friend Jhanvi.
That time only Dev remembered his promise to Gaadha that he won't tell Manav about his engagement with Jhanvi.
M:Jhanvi?I have never heard about her before.Anyways nice to meet you.
J:Namaste.
Suddenly Manav was pulled away by his friends.
Gaadha yelled at Dev:Dev,you forgot your promise that you won't break the suspense?
Dev smiled:Sorry my best friend.I will not disclose it to Manav.

J:I can't understand anything.What's going on?

G:I want Manav to get surprised when you both exchange rings along with us.

J:That's nice.

She smiled.

Natasha was present there with her husband Kairav.

N:Guys...tell us your take on love...marriage....

Gaadha:For me,love is trust.If there is no trust no point in marriage.Nothing should be hidden from the life partner....truth should be always told.

Her words pricked Manav's heart.

Kairav:You are right.Trust is the main thing in every relationship.Trust makes a relationship beautiful and strong.

Natasha:Just like our relationship.

Manav felt so guilty that he just walked away.

N:Where is Manav?

Gaadha looked around.

N:He just disappeared before telling his concept about love and marriage.

G:Where is Manav?

Indira:It's time for the ring exchange.Call Manav.

.....

Manav cried alone in a room.

M:If love is trust then i broke your trust in me Gaadha.I hid a big truth from you.I can't cheat you anymore.If I hide the truth and make you mine my love will have no value.

....

Indira:Gaadha....how can Manav be so irresponsible?Where did he go at the time of ring exchange?

Gaadha was upset.She did not know what to say.

Manav reached:I am here.

Gaadha was relieved.

I:Ok....let the rings be exchanged.

M:No.This ring exchange should not happen.

Everyone was shocked.

G:Manav....what are you saying?It's not the time for your pranks.

M:Gaadha...I am serious.I can't....

Gaadha was shattered.

G:Why Manav?Tell me?

M:Because you love someone else.

Everybody including Gaadha was shocked.

Edited by jasminerahul - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

That's nice.. so manav tell the truth.. waiting for the suspense..continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

thanks for the pm

brilliant update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Manav-Gaadha's dialogues are romantic. Natasha's words pricked Manav's heart regarding trust. I guess Manav is guilty of hiding the truth from Gaadha. Hope the suspense comes out.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Part 6


Fascinating Update


Waiting for the twist

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Manav told the truth but did he have to do it in such a dramatic way? He should have pulled her aside. Plus he only knows how Dev felt, not Gadha.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Thanks a lot.yes he should not have told her in a dramatic way.actually gaadha had told manav that she used to love dev..but she suppressed it as she felt that dev doesn't live her back.now manav knows that dev too suppressed his feelings for gaadha thinking that she doesn't love him.that's why manav feels guilty.


Originally posted by: coderlady

Manav told the truth but did he have to do it in such a dramatic way? He should have pulled her aside. Plus he only knows how Dev felt, not Gadha.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Thank u very much friends

Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara..Just be careful heart...Part 7

Indira:Gaadha....how can Manav be so irresponsible?Where did he go at the time of ring exchange?

Gaadha was upset.She did not know what to say.

Manav reached:I am here.

Gaadha was relieved.

I:Ok....let the rings be exchanged.

M:No.This ring exchange should not happen.

Everyone was shocked.

G:Manav....what are you saying?It's not the time for your pranks.

M:Gaadha...I am serious.I can't....

Gaadha was shattered.

G:Why Manav?Tell me?

M:Because you love someone else.

Everybody including Gaadha was shocked.

Gaadha:Manav….!
Manav:You yourself told me that your first love is Dev.
Everyone was shocked.Dev,Indira and Jhanvi could not believe it.
Gaadha was embarrassed.
Dev:Manav,what nonsense are you saying?
M:I am telling the truth.Gaadha loves you.
Dev was shocked.
M:She would not have accepted me if you had proposed to her.
G:Manav,stop it.Don't hurt Dev.
M:No Gaadha.I am not hurting him,I am making him happy.Because he himself admitted that he loves you.

Gaadha was shocked.Dev was embarrassed.Savitri,Indira and Jhanvi were extremely shocked.They were numb.
M:Yes Gaadha.That day when i told him about the proposal he told me that you are his first love.
Gaadha could not digest it.
M:I became so selfish that i hid the truth from you both.I did'nt even want to imagine losing Gaadha.So I hid the truth.But now i understand the mistake i did was not just a mistake,but a sin.I can't cheat you guys.Because of my selfishness you both should not get separated.Sorry....please forgive me.
D:Manav,what nonsense are you saying?
M:Dev,you are Gaadha's first love.
Manav looked at Gaadha:And Dev's first love is you Gaadha.First love is the best.I know that.Because you are my first love Gaadha...my last love also...
Gaadha went towards Dev.She stared at him.
Her teary eyes looked sharp.Dev was not able to face her.

G:Dev...is it true that I am your first love?

Dev shivered.He was nervous.
Gaadha raised her voice:I am your best friend.Right?Then at least now please tell the truth.
Finally Dev managed to get courage to tell her the truth:Yes.What Manav said was true.

Gaadha could not believe that she is hearing this from her best friend Dev.She did not know how to react.She was going mad.
G:Dev....I can't...I can't believe it.

D:I am sorry Gaadha.I was scared if you will hate me if tell you that you are more than a friend for me.But please don't hate me.I can't live without your friendship.I don't want to lose my best friend.
G:Dev,I have only one thing to ask you.Do you love me now also?

Dev said blindly:No.I love only Jhanvi.She is my only love.Jhanvi is last love also.
Manav was shocked.
Savitri and Jhanvi were relieved.
D:I am thankful to Gaadha.If She was not my best friend I would not have realized my love for Jhanvi.It was Gaadha who made me realize that I am in love with Jhanvi.It's only because of her that i got the courage to propose to Jhanvi.

Dev looked at Gaadha:Gaadha,you are my best friend.No one can take over that position in my heart.
Gaadha became emotional.

Gaadha stared at Manav:Did you hear this Manav?I am Dev's first love,but not his last love.And Dev is my first love.But not my last love.You are my only love Manav.My one and only love....my last love.
Gaadha's tears were flowing down while talking.

Manav became emotional:Gaadha!

G:I am your first and last love.I know that.Jhanvi's first and last love is Dev.But for everyone first love may not be the last love Manav.For me and Dev the first love was not the best.Our second love is our best love.Did you get that Manav?

Manav’s heart was aching for misunderstanding Gaadha and Dev.

M:Gaadha!
Manav could not control himself anymore and embraced her.Both of them cried.
All others felt emotional watching it.
Dev looked for Jhanvi,but he did'nt see her around.
D:Jhanvi?
He was restless and he could'nt find Jhanvi anywhere.
He peeped into a room.He saw Jhanvi there.She looked upset.He did'nt know how to face her,but he had to take the initiative to break the ice.
D:I know that you are upset about what happened now.I am sorry Jhanvi.I never intended to hurt you.I hid everything from you thinking that it will hurt you.

She kept silent.
D:Are you still angry with me?Please Jhanvi...don't be so silent.Please talk to me.

She did'nt say anything.
D:Jhanvi...i love you.I can't live without you.
Jhanvi suppressed her pain.
D:I promise you that i will never repeat this.I will shower you with happiness.

Won't you forgive me?

She looked at his face.
J:No need of apologizing Devji.You have not done any mistake.

I just became emotional hearing from you that you love me a lot.I felt hurt when I heard that you used to love Gaadha before.But I felt touched when you said that I am the one you love and I am your last love.
Dev became emotional:You talked to me.This is more than enough for me.

When you did'nt talk to me I became motionless. It was a terrible feeling.

J:My heart beat will get stopped and I won't be able to breathe if I don't talk to you Devji.
They both smiled at each other emotionally.

Manav-Gaadha and Dev-Jhanvi reached the platform for ring exchange.
G:Manav....today is Dev and Jhanvi's engagement too.
Manav was surprised.

Gaadha:I wanted to surprise you.That’s why I hid Dev-Jhanvi’s relationship.It turned out to be a big mistake.

Manav felt guilty.

Manav:I am sorry Gaadha for spoiling everything.Please forgive me.

Gaadha:Leave it Manav.

They had a cute hug.
Both the couples exchanged rings and posed for photographs.

Manav and Gaadha went to a lonely area of the house.Manav wrapped his hands around Gaadha's waist and looked at her deeply.She was shy.

G:Manav...you....
M:Now we are officially engaged.So there is barrier between us.Nobody will question me.
She blushed.
Slowly she raised her eye brows and looked at his eyes which were glowing due to his love for her.
They both got attracted to each other’s sparkling romantic eyes.Their eyes spoke in the language of love.

He held her hand which made her blush again.They walked together holding their hands with a smile.

She lost her grip and her hands fell on his shirt.But she was not able to catch his shirt quickly and so she was about to fall down.But he caught her hand very fast.

M:You won't fall down anymore when I am with you.

She smiled.They both were lost in each other for a few moments.

Then she giggled.

M:What happened?

G:As usual now also you did'nt understand my trick.I was pretending to fall down,so that you will catch me and bring me closer to you.

He smiled:Naughty girl,i like it.

She smiled.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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hi how are you?

thanks for the pm

nice update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Part 7


Excellent Update

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