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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi...I am fine.How r u?

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi how are you?

thanks for the pm

nice update

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Dil Sambhal Jaa Zara..Just be careful heart...Part 8

After a year....

Gaadha seemed to be very happy as it was their first wedding anniversary.
She wore a grand blue saree.

Still she looked so ravishing that Manav could'nt control himself.He kept pampering is beauty with his eyes.

Gaadha:Manav,do you remember our wedding anniversary?

Manav:How can I forget that beautiful day?

She smiled.

They remembered their wedding day.

Manav held her hand as her Prince charming and led her to the party hall.
Not only Manav and Gaadha were looking glorious,but also Dev and Jhanvi.It was their wedding anniversary too.

Manav was mesmerized by Gaadha's beauty.She blushed.

Dev wished Jhanvi:Happy wedding anniversary Jhanvi.

He was staring at his beauty.

Jhanvii:Why are you looking at me like this?

Dev:Because you look very beautiful.

Jhanvi smiled:The credit goes to you as the dress I am wearing is your wedding anniversary gift.

He smiled.

Jhanvi:Happy wedding anniversary to you too.

She gave him a gift.He unwrapped the gift and was surprised.

It was a framed wedding photograph of them.

Dev:This is the best wedding anniversary gift.

She smiled.

He held her closer romantically into a cute hug making her blush.

Kairav-Natasha also came there and wished them:Happy Anniversary guys.

Dev-Jhanvi,Manav-Gaadha smiled:Thank you.

The whole atmosphere became romantic with the flow of beautiful music which came from Dev's mouth.

Tere bina jeena kya
Tere bina jeena kyun

Tujhe kaise bataun yaara
Tere bin mujhpe kya guzre
Woh zindagi hai hi nahi
Jo tujhse judaa guzre

Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara

Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara yaara..

Kahin se bhi chalun main
Kahin se guzru main
Tujhi se aa milun main yaara o..

Zara sa sirphira hoon
Zara sa bawra hoon
Jaisa bhi hoon tera hoon yaara

Teri palkon tale meri saans chale
Meri saans chale tere dum se

Manav-Gaadha and Dev-Jhanvi danced together.


Dhal jaaun main tujhme
Ghul jaaun main tujhme
Mil jaaun main tujhme yaara

Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara yaara

Tu kaagzon pe dil ke
Likha hua hai tab se
Duniya mein hoon main jabse yaara

Tu mera ho chuka hai
Dil phir bhi maangta hai
Har lamha tujhko Rabb se yaara

Mera tere siva koi aur nahi
Tu na hona khafa kabhi mujhse

Kairav-Natasha also danced.

Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara

Dhal jaun main tujhme
Ghul jaun main tujhme
Mil jaun main tujhme yaara yaara(Rustom).


After the party Manav took her to the car.
G:Manav,I knew that you are going to surprise me as usual.
M:Yes.For Dadima,we attended the party she arranged.But there was no privacy.I want our wedding anniversary celebration to be private.
G:Where are you going to take me?
M:Airport.
Gaadha was shocked seeing tickets in his hand.
G:Manav!Are you crazy?
M:Yes.Crazy for you.
She smiled.

They flew to Kerala by flight.
M:God's own country!
G:Wow!So beautiful.
They were mesmerized by the beauty of back waters.
M:My surprise is not over Gaadha.
He pointed his finger at the house boat.

G:Manav....we...
M:Yes,we are going to spent our precious time in the house boat.
She was thrilled.
Gaadha could not believe it due to over excitement:Oh Manav....you are so cute.
She pulled his chubby cheeks in a cute manner.
They both entered the house boat holding their hands together.
They entered the bed room which seemed as if it was awaiting them.They could see the beautiful scenery outside from the room.
There she saw a yellow flower and a white flower lying on the bed.

She looked at Manav with surprise.
M:The yellow flower shows that my love is a sweet friendship too.The white flower signifies my pure love.
Gaadha embraced Manav happily:You are too sweet.
Suddenly she saw the open windows.
She moved away from him.
G:You said we will have privacy here.But see...the windows are open.
Manav smiled:That’s the beauty...the back drop of our romance is the sea water...the beautiful scenery.
She smiled and ran into his arms.

The end

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Part 8


Beautiful and so Awesome


Mesmerizing song choice

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

thanks for the pm

superb update.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Part 7


The engagement function scenes between Manav, Gaadha, & Dev is dramatic. When I was going through that part, I was scared that Manav would leave Gaadha broken-hearted. But glad that Dev cleared all misunderstandings. The post-engagement scenes are romantic.

Edited by kavitha_r - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Part 8


Maanav-Gaadha & Dev-Jhanvi dialogues are cute. Song sequences are romantic. The wedding anniversary scenes are romantic.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Part 7

Too many assumptions were going around but the misunderstanding is cleared now.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

part 8

Some alone time for the couples for their anniversaries. Nice.

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