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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: petrovafire
It's amazing shruti 😊👏 nd its beautiful 👍🏼

Thanks Prerna- glad you liked it xoxo

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Awww... Loved the ending. Swara ans Sanskaar are so adorable together!

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Swathy

@SwathyS

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

"Mrs Swara Sanskaar Maheshwai, main tumse jitni baar tum shaadi karna chaho, karoonga, lekin tumhe apni life se ek bhi baar abh jaane nahi doonga."

My favourite part ...

Loved the story

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Such a lovely ending. It was doubly sweet after yesterday's episdoe and the whole sanskaar bearing the punishment for lying before God 🤢

The hotel scene was a bit filmy but who says filmy is bad. Sometimes the more public you go the more awww it becomes 😆 and this was one such moment for me where i was grinning at all the cuteness and the intensity between the two. I am sure glad they checked in 😉

I hope you write more. Kal hi viji ka series khatam hua, now yours! What will i read now 😭 but thanks for writing this wonderful piece and sharing it here 🤗

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

I sooo loved Swara's public declaration! Pity family was not there! But the best part was Sanskar's line "Mujhe bahut kuch kehna bhi hai aur karna bhi hai, lekin iske liye akele hona zaroori hai, yahan se toh arrest ho jayenge." ❤️

Fitting finale to previous angsty shot! You are a wonderful writer tootiefrootie. I could visualize the whole scenario at the hotel lobby as if its happening in front of me! 😃 And the whole time had my heart in my mouth!😊

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Awww... Loved the ending. Swara ans Sanskaar are so adorable together!

Thank you- glad you enjoyed it:)

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: swa291
"Mrs Swara Sanskaar Maheshwai, main tumse jitni baar tum shaadi karna chaho, karoonga, lekin tumhe apni life se ek bhi baar abh jaane nahi doonga."
My favourite part ...

Loved the story

Thank you for reading and liking! x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Such a lovely ending. It was doubly sweet after yesterday's episdoe and the whole sanskaar bearing the punishment for lying before God 🤢

The hotel scene was a bit filmy but who says filmy is bad. Sometimes the more public you go the more awww it becomes 😆 and this was one such moment for me where i was grinning at all the cuteness and the intensity between the two. I am sure glad they checked in 😉

I hope you write more. Kal hi viji ka series khatam hua, now yours! What will i read now 😭 but thanks for writing this wonderful piece and sharing it here 🤗

Thank you Shruti! Yes, I needed a full on happy ending for myself given the current track! I know re the filmy- like I said to Medha, I was torn about this. See, one of my alternative scenarios was that whole confession playing out in private as originally I wanted them to kiss straight after BUT I couldn't let Swara off. I felt she had to declare to the whole world how much she loves him as he had been through hell and back in love so hence the filminess couldn't be avoided:).

I have a few nebulous ideas floating but I tend to look at the current track and then build my own one up so let's see how the melodrama plays out. Perhaps a Sanskaar based OS on the current stuff happening?! Tell me if you have any views, things you would like to see because sometimes that gives me ideas!

Thank you again!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: jasw
I sooo loved Swara's public declaration! Pity family was not there! But the best part was Sanskar's line "Mujhe bahut kuch kehna bhi hai aur karna bhi hai, lekin iske liye akele hona zaroori hai, yahan se toh arrest ho jayenge." ❤️
Fitting finale to previous angsty shot! You are a wonderful writer tootiefrootie. I could visualize the whole scenario at the hotel lobby as if its happening in front of me! 😃 And the whole time had my heart in my mouth!😊

Hey! Thanks so much. Glad you liked the public OTT confession- I wanted to make it like that given their history and the previous rejections of Sanskaar's love. Yeah, there were a few risque dialogues but I hoped I could get away with our dashing hero saying those sorts of things 😉. Your comments about my writing are too kind, really appreciate that! If a reader feels drawn into the story I have done my bit! x

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Shruti 🤗
Can i say that i'm very sad? Your TS finished 😒 But i didn't want to.
It was so mesmerizing
Swara's confession was oh gosh so beautiful ❤️ And it was a public one 😳 I was literally dancing when she confessed it 🥳 If this happens in the show i will throw a huge party ⭐️😆
And that line ' Mujhe bohut kuch kehna bhi hai aur karna bhi hai, lekin iske liye akele hona zaroori hai, yahan se toh arrest ho jayenge ' <3
I found it filmy 😎 and that's why i loved it 😳
It was a lovely and perfect ending ❤️
Keep writing more Shruts 🤗

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