New Beginnings Praja SS- Complete Update Pg 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello folks - as promised the new story is here and instead of a OS I decided to make it at least 3-4 parts long
Aur meri Goldie bane ki khushi mein I present Part I to you all
Enjoy Praja All Romance (with a bit of background story) but emphasis on happy new beginnings

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New Beginnings

PART I

It was a full moon night she smiled thinking about her future everything looked so bright - a cool breeze was blowing making her hair flow as well when suddenly a hand moved all of her hairs to one side whereas another grasped her tight from her waist making her gasp at the sudden chill. He stood behind her holding her as close as he could with his head bowed down inhaling her intoxicating smell

Kunwar Pratap what are you doing in my room at this hour of the night? She asked her fianc who was nuzzling his nose on her neck and slowly making a path towards her shoulder

I missed you was his reply. She kept her hand over his and pressed herself into his chest and they stood there in silence enjoying each other's company when suddenly her grip tightened as she exclaimed - look a shooting star!!! She closed her eyes making her wish while he looked at her - looking ethereal in the moonlight - her face glowing under the natural light, her lips looked luscious and so soft while her hair moving with the wind looked like cascading waterfall. As she opened her eyes to find him looking at her she blushed and looked down - he loved her eyes - deep large doe-like eyes that made him want to drown in them and her blush was proof of the effect he had on her if only she could see the effect she had on him as well

It's getting late she murmured while he kept staring at her. Finally he held her chin and made her look up and slowly as their eyes met both of them came closer and he bent his head capturing her lips in a kiss. They stood under the moonlight lost in each other enjoying their first kiss as a couple while the stars looked down upon them

It had been a tough journey filled with obstacles, tears, separation and everything that threatened their very existence but they both persevered and held on to their beliefs - for once Ajabde wanted to give up as she was told that the person whom she will marry will die a painful death and the mere thought of being the reason for Kunwar Pratap's pain was so unbearable that she ran away from her home leaving behind everyone but he came looking for her. Searching through all the kingdoms for her his love without whom he refused to have a life

She still remembered the emotions she felt at seeing him in the same temple she visited daily to pray for his health and happiness- to see him in flesh after a long time it was like she had found her heaven but then the priest's words came ringing back and she walked away using all of her self-control and a prayer for his well-being on her lips totally unaware that he had seen her and was following her quietly and stealthily. She had created a small but happy life for herself - she had adopted two orphans as her own siblings and they lived in a small cottage near the river- she had a cow, a goat, two rabbits and many other animals came by their cottage as they pleased. The villagers loved her and all the kids called her Jija. She was spending her life helping as many people as she could - no one knew that she was the princess of Bijolia whose twin brother died while she survived childbirth, they didn't know that her father despised her from her birth due to the loss of his first son, they didn't know that she was asked to observe all sorts of rituals and fasts because they felt she was a bad omen for everyone around and they didn't know that she had fallen in love with a man whom the entire nation was proud of - a man well respected and loved by her parents, a man of principles who always came to her rescue, a man who made her self-centred friend fall for him- a man who was going to be the next Rana of Mewar

After some time they broke of the kiss to take a breath, she was all red from the blushing while he kept her in his arms. He kissed her head and slowly made his retreat as they needed to be up early for the puja. She smiled while touching her lips and went to her bed to get some sleep

Kunwar Pratap the brave warrior son of Mewar was a happy man after all he had won the war against the Afghan forces, sorted out a peace treaty with Marwar, had got rid of all the traitors in his family and most of all he was about to marry the love of his life. Ajabde Punwar had worked her way into his heart gradually and when he realised it after watching her get hurt - the anger that ran in his veins seeing her soft skin broken with blood oozing out had nearly destroyed everyone standing in his way including his own family members and worse was seeing her looking all broken and alone after everyone blamed her for his silly mistake on the battlefield though his Guru had given him a good scolding but when Chakrapani told him that DheerBai had blamed Ajabde for his wounds he had rushed to the palace to find her gone with only a piece of her dupatta left behind which held her Rudraksh mala. The mala had broken while he was fighting against the Afghans and she had repaired it and left it for him as a present. He picked it up and touched it to his eyes making a resolve to find her at all costs and when he did the first thing he would do was to marry her

The epic face off he had with his father was the best and worst - best because for once he spoke up for his desires and not did anything he told him to do like a puppet and worst because he broke his ties with the family. Well he had to after all DheerBai Bhatiyani was the worst woman he had met and she was one a snake who didn't hesitate in eating her own eggs. He found out about her true self and before he could do anything she had already made his father against him so even he stood up against him and said:

Today I stand not against my the person who is neither my father nor fit to be called the Rana of Mewar- the man standing in front of me is an addict who cannot see the difference between right and wrong. The man I knew to be the Rana never made decisions under the influence of any sort instead he would thoroughly investigate manners and then take a sound decision but you are not that man because if you were then you would realise that it was DheerBai Bhatiyani who put the blame on Ajabde every time any incident took place - before and after she made sure that Ajabde was blamed when in reality Ajabde never did anything wrong except pray for Mewar's victory and well-being of this family and if you investigated everything properly then you would have found out that a certain amount of gold coins is being made monthly to three people including the priest who deemed Ajabde as a bad omen was being paid under Dheer Bai's name. DheerBai looked stunned as she never used her real name when paying the servants and Pratap saw her: I followed your trustworthy servant Choti Rani Sa (emphasizing the word Choti Rani Sa clearly) Dhaman Singh is a loyal servant but he is even more concerned with his self-preservation thus he spilled all the beans on all of your acts and tricks and schemes

Rana Uday Singh had never seen his son so passionate about anyone forget a person Pratap had never been this passionate about a thing except for his duty but now his son stood up to him to defend a girl he had met barely a few months earlier and the evidence against his third wife was overwhelming as well but she would not do that after all she cared for Pratap- Enough he roared at his son who looked at straight into his eyes and said

You are right it is enough and that is why today I break all my ties with you and your hypocritical ways - Did I not always do what was asked of me? Did I not perform every duty required of me? Did I ever say No to you? But for once in my life I asked you to grant me one wish but you had to go and ruin it for me because for you I'm not a human being but an object to be sold for the best alliance Ranaji

Jaiwanta knew her son had been hurt badly and there was no way he would overcome this pain and betrayal. She had known about Dheer Bai's poisonous schemes for some time but never thought that she would stoop so low to hurt an innocent child- Ajabde had left them all and with her taken away all the happiness, luck, prosperity and her son's heart with her

US, RM, Rawatji all the council members were stunned at the crown prince's burst of anger and understood his pain well US was still involved I himself (egoistical dude I tell you)

Pratap moved towards his mother and seeked her blessings - I'm going to look for Ajabde and will not return to Chittor without her and when we will return she will come with me as my wife and we won't be staying in the palace after our return
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh God ! I had only just finished reading your last story...itni jaldi aapne nayi story ka first chapter bhi likh daala 😲😲...Anyway, beautiful start, Garima !! 🤗 And thanks for writing such awesome stories and sharing it with all of us 🤗🤗
And And And...

CONGRATS on becoming a "GOLDIE"
Edited by rinall - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yayyy..!! first to comment.. 🥳

the story was truly awesome... 👏 well thnk u for writing such beautiful stories for us dida... love u loads.. ❤️ 🤗

& what's this.. itni jaldi goldie bhi ban gayi...😆 well then.. congratulations and celebrations...🥳 🥳

Now update ASAP... 😛


(😛 OK... I'm not first to comment..)
Edited by ApekshaM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinall

Oh God ! I had only just finished reading your last story...itni jaldi aapne nayi story ka first chapter bhi likh daala 😲😲...Anyway, beautiful start, Garima !! 🤗 And thanks for writing such awesome stories and sharing it with all of us 🤗🤗

And And And...

CONGRATS on becoming a "GOLDIE"



Dhanu meri jaan Thank you 😃

Arey aapke liye jaldi hai warna baaki sab toh keh rahe hain late ho gaya update karne mein😛
Thank you for enjoying my work 😃
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Originally posted by: ApekshaM

Yayyy..!! first to comment.. 🥳

the story was truly awesome... 👏 well thnk u for writing such beautiful stories for us dida... love u loads.. ❤️ 🤗

& what's this.. itni jaldi goldie bhi ban gayi...😆 well then.. congratulations and celebrations...🥳 🥳

Now update ASAP... 😛


(😛 OK... I'm not first to comment..)



Baccha meri shaitan iss baar first comment aapka nahi hai 😆

@Bold: Abhi story baaki hai 😛

I love you too baccha 🤗
Next update is up !!
Edited by twilightlover29 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Second Update for the story is here!!

PART II

He had left Chittor with his friends following him in his quest to find his beloved. After three months of no result he got the news that his mother and Maajli Maa had moved out of the Chittor palace into a new smaller one where they were waiting for him and Ajabde. As per their instructions he would bring Ajabde back straight to the new palace where they would be married as per the traditions and rituals and if he failed then he would be facing wrath of not one but all his mothers, JB made a case for Hansa Bai who wished to see her daughter dressed as a bride- Hansa had all rights to be angry with the Mewar family but she always abided by what was asked of her and for that she kept silent when her daughter left her. JB requested Pratap to not take that one happiness away from Hansa

Pratap searched everywhere- the entire Mewar to all its surrounding neighbours but then he found her in a remote village a few miles ahead of Vrindavan. HE had gone there to participate in a special puja hoping that maybe Eklingji would guide him and he did - he saw her in the temple wearing a simple dress with her hair in a braid in the front surrounded by children whom she was giving the Prasad from the puja. She then took blessings from the priest and slowly walked away - he followed her to her small cottage where she resided with two children. He kept a vigil over her for three days before making his presence known and as he guessed she saw him and for a second it felt like she wanted to reach out but then a flash of recognition fell on her face making her stop in mid-way and them with one glance she left but this time he was not letting her go - he followed her and as he knew she assisted the village Vaid in treating people he cut his hand and reached her cottage for help

Two kids - a boy and a girl ran out to see who was standing at their doorstep

Girl: Who are you?

Boy: He is a warrior look at his clothes

Girl: He is wearing ordinary clothes bhai

Boy: yes but he has a sword besides look at that expression on his face that is on warriors

Girl: Looks like he is in pain to me

Boy stares at the girl and slaps his head when Pratap intervenes

Pratap: I have hurt my hand may I please get some assistance

Girl: I told you he was in pain... Jija Jija a man has hurt himself she screams

Ajabde comes out to see and stands frozen on seeing Pratap standing at her doorstep

Boy: Jija this brave warrior is hurt we need to help him

Girl: I'll get the bandages Jija

Boy: then I'll fetch the water

Pratap and Ajabde have a staring competition going on - both feasting on each other's presence after the separation. She slowly moved towards him as if hoping that it was a dream but then also praying for it not to end. Both the young kids look at their Jija who seemed lost but at least she moved towards the injured man

Pratap: Ajabde... He called out her name like saying a prayer making her stop in her tracks again but this time her eyes fell on the blood flowing out of his cut making her brain go into overdrive. She tore her dupatta and tied it to the cut and told the kids to arrange for the medicine then she brought Pratap inside the cottage made him sit on a bed while she started cleaning up his wound

Chakrapani met his friend the next morning to accompany him to the puja. He had been with Pratap for so long that he claimed to understand him better than anyone else well except for Ajabde Bhabisa - she was the one person who could handle Pratap like a pro and even Pratap agreed to the fact. Chakrapani was really happy for the both of them as they deserved all the happiness in the world but he was worried as well because their fathers were still at logger-heads and no amount of logic, pleading had worked on them

Chakri: Baujiraj we have news from Chittor and Bijolia and it's not good

Pratap looks at him and nods his head

Chakri: Ranaji went ahead and married Veer Baiji she is a Samant's daughter and her elder sister is married to Rao Maldev. Maharani Jaiwanta Baiji and Rani Sajja Baiji know about it and have not yet made any attempts at meeting the new wife. Hansa Baiji has also moved out of Bijolia palace with her son and at the moment she is staying with Maharani sa in the new palace, Rao Mamrakh ji has focused all his attention I raising a strong army that will assist Mewar in times of need

Pratap: So Ranaji went ahead and got married for the fourth time. I'm sure he must have a political alliance in his mind

Chakri: That's not the real reason Baujiraj - DheerBai was found guilty of all charges and was punished for them heavily and then the walk-out by Maharani JB and Rani SB left Ranaji all alone and depressed so one of the council members advised him to marry again for the sake of your younger siblings

Pratap: Ranaji does not need council members to tell him when to marry and when not to Chakrapani. I have heard of Veer Baiji - she is half his age. I met her at one of the puja we attended with Phool and the family. She had dreams of a bright future and now she is stuck with my father

Chakri: Baujiraj that is not what I'm concerned about - I'm worried that if Ajabde Baisa found out that her mother moved out and your father has remarried then she would blame herself for all of it

Pratap: Don't I know that - she is one of the most self-less people I have ever met and if Ranaji saw her now and told her to stay away from me for the betterment of Rajputana she would do it - look where we found her in a remote village helping as many people as she could while staying with two kids who love her dearly

They had reached the temple where the head priest performed the pre-wedding puja. Pratap was sure of one thing - he would return to Chittor with Ajabde as his wife

The two young kids in question were following Pratap like spies thinking of their every move so clever unaware that Pratap knew of their presence so when he suddenly stopped mid-way they ended up colliding with his legs

Pratap: May I know what are you two doing following me? Huh Patta, Ratan?

Ratan: We were making sure that you were fine

Patta: You already knew we were following you

Pratap shook his head in amusement and said

Yes Patta I was aware and Ratan I'm doing all fine so tell me the real reason now

Ratan looked at her brother and then back to Pratap: Everyone keeps telling us that you are going to marry Jija

Pratap nodded his head waiting for her to finish

If you marry Jija then that means she would be your wife and as your wife she would be required to stay with you which

Patta intervenes: That means that we will be left behind all by ourselves because you will take Jija with you back to your home

Both kids were scared of losing the one person who loved them dearly and Pratap understood their fear

Pratap: Well it is true that I'm marrying your Jija but that does not mean that we will leave you behind. Your Jija will move earth and heaven before she leaves you two - you are going to be coming with us back to my home- Chittor where you will meet your grandmothers, cousins and

Ratan: We get to come with you so we don't have to stay away from Jija she looked hopeful and

Pratap pulled her in his arms and said: Yes after all you are my sister as well now well you will be after I marry your Jija making her hug the huge man (well he was huge for her size)

Patta looked contemplative: Will I get to learn all skills of a warrior at your home?

Pratap: Yes you will and you know I will teach you everything I know making the boy happy as well who ran to him and held him tight

When a third voice joined in: Everyone is looking cosy

They turned around to find Ajabde standing there looking all pretty- she had returned from her puja when she saw Patta run into Pratap's arms and then both kids ran to her and started talking about the sweets they were going to eat and all the fun they would have when they went back to Chittor. All four walked back to the cottage as they needed to make final preparations before the wedding
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo new Goldie In town😛 and congo for new story too🤗
awesome beginning😃
I loved the epic face off the most in this part😉

the man standing in front of me is an addict who cannot see the difference between right and wrong😛
aisa toh kabhi serial mein hone se raha🤣

This reply is for first part,after i posted,i found next part is also updated😛🤣
Edited by dsm123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have observed a pattern in all your stories 😉... It's not surprising , though 😃... the pattern is that US is a hopeless man and his son Pratap is, thankfully, smart and wise and sane and thinks with his brain 😆... if only Pratap were like this in the show koi nahi... humaare wishes ko pura karne ke liye, we have you and these stories 😃🤗
Oh and one more thing... DB...hmmm... that woman always manages to surpass my expectations...i always think, ki bas yar, ab ye aurat isse zyaada nahi gir sakti...but no... her evil ways keep spiraling out of all known boundaries and limits... 🤢
anyway, awesome update 🤗👏⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29



Dhanu meri jaan Thank you 😃

Arey aapke liye jaldi hai warna baaki sab toh keh rahe hain late ho gaya update karne mein😛
Thank you for enjoying my work 😃

Garimaaa !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲
ye reply maine likha...Dhanashree ne nahi 😲
chalo koi nahi... confusion ho gaya hoga 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update😊
omg look how pratap is talking about his father😉😆 i just loved his words👏👏
ajab and her bond with kids⭐️

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