Manan FF : Our Love Story ( last part pg 48 ) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys thanks for liking my story actually i want ro change the name of my ff so u all can suggest names
and i have one if u all like it
OUR LOVE STORY
u all can suggest too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhariya_

Hi guys thanks for liking my story actually i want ro change the name of my ff so u all can suggest names

and i have one if u all like it
OUR LOVE STORY
u all can suggest too


nice one... love it... suits with the story line...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

Hi guys thanks for liking my story actually i want ro change the name of my ff so u all can suggest names

and i have one if u all like it
OUR LOVE STORY
u all can suggest too



OUR LOVE STORY i think this name is perfect for ur story...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Our love story is the perfect name..
Awesome..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
ya u should let me try manan ss:our love story wat say
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
ok guys I will keep this name
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
. . . . . . . . . . CHAPTER 4. . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . Music bock ( stairs)
Nandini was crying and some one patted on her shoulder so she wiped her tears
Manik- nandini tum thikh ho na
nandini- ha mein thikh hun tum yaha koi kam hai
Manik- nandini tumhe pta hai na ki tumhe jhoot bolna nahi aata toh try bhi kyun kar rahi ho tumhare yeh aasoo bta rahe hai ki U R not fine
Nandini broke down in front of him and started crying badly
Nandini- manik tumhe nahi pta ki mere saath kya hua tha I have really bad memories regarding music mein toh is college mein bhi nahi aana chahthi thi but Alia ne kha ki I should join so I came
__________flashback_____________
Music class
Nandini- good morning pandit ji
Pandit - good morning
Nandini - let's practice
Nandini started playing her veena suddenly she felt an unwanted touch on her hands
Pandit - nandini tum galat raag bja rahi ho
Nandini again started playing her veena ignorning about pandit pandit places his hands on her waist and pulled her towards him
Pandit- you are beautiful
Nandini - pandit ji what R U doing leave me
Pandit ji leans to kiss her but she slapped him on her face and ran from their
______________flashback ends_____________
Nandini -mein waha se bhaag toh gayi thi aur us waqt strong dikha de rahi thi but andar se bahut jyada tuut gaayi thi I was shattered and I was feeling so lonely that I wanted to oil my self
( manik hugged her)
Manik - shhhnandini chup ho jao tum us pandit ki galti ki saaza apne so ko kyun de rahi ho tum itni weak nahi Alia ne btaya tha ki U sing really wel so shayad music tumhe heel kar sake shayad music tum he woh daard bhulane mein help kare
Nandini- manik I think U R right shayad music mine heel kar sake pta hai bachpan mein jab mein upset hoti tho music hamesha mujge heel kar deta tha
Manik - that's god chalo lets practice together
Nandini- ok chalo
. . . . . . . . . . Jam room . . . . . . . . .
Manan enters the room and manik said not to ask any ques from her in his gestures
Manik - guys lets practice and nandini will also sing haina
Nandini - yup
Manik- so lets start
Manik started singing
Matlabi ho ja zaara matlabi
Duniya ki sunta hai Kyu
Khud ki bhi sun le kabhi (2)
Kuch bat galat bhi ho jaye
kuch der yeh dil bhi khojaye
Befikar dhadhkane kuch is tarah se chaale
Shor ghunje yaha se waha
Soraj dooba hai yaaroon
Do ghut naashe ke maaro
Raste bhula do saare ghar bhaar ke
Soraj dooba hai yaaron
Do ghut naashe ke maaro
Gum tum bhula do saare saansar ke
nandini sings
Ask me for anything
I can give you anything
Raste bhula do saare ghar bhaar ke
Ask me for anything
I can give you anything
Ghum tum bhula do sare sansaar ke
Ata pta rahe na kisi ko hamein
Yeh hi kahe yeh pal zindagi ke hameein
Manik sings
Ataa ptaa rahe na kisi ka hamein
Yeh khudgarz so kwaish likhe
Behsaas bhi hum tum jiye
Hai gulabi gulabi samaaa
Sooraj doobha hai yaaron
Do ghut naashe ke maaro
Mukt - U two R too good and nandini U sing so well
Manan in unison
Thanks
___________________________
. . . . . . . . Fab five ( mum)
dhruv- oh that's why she first sing I feel bad for her
Alia me too
Mukti me too
Cabir -chodo guys manik be use sambahl liya tha na so chill
Manik ryt
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That for now sorry guys I am not well so won't be able to upload next part today sorry and sorry for the typos
Edited by Dhariya_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Argh.. Tht creep pandit.. Hate him
Awesome update man.. Jst loved it..
N ya dere r sum typin errors.. So u edit this piece.. Thts jst an advice..
Corn soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: manan58

Argh.. Tht creep pandit.. Hate him

Awesome update man.. Jst loved it..
N ya dere r sum typin errors.. So u edit this piece.. Thts jst an advice..
Corn soon

thanks for telling and I have edited it
and thanks for liking my story😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
awesome ...loved it...manan ..so cute...continue soon dear...
take care...thanks a lot for the pm...
get well soon...😊

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