Manan FF : Our Love Story ( last part pg 48 ) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
🤗 for u dear... liked it.. 👏
but monster ne nandu ko lock kia par khud ko kun nehi?
store room pe toh dono ka copy right hai? 😉hhai na?
may be in next update i will get store room scene...😉
waiting for next. update asap,,,,,,,,,,😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: musicialtie

🤗 for u dear... liked it.. 👏

but monster ne nandu ko lock kia par khud ko kun nehi?
store room pe toh dono ka copy right hai? 😉hhai na?
may be in next update i will get store room scene...😉
waiting for next. update asap,,,,,,,,,,😊

wait for the next update U will get to know why manik did not locked himself
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
awesome one..
i love cabir and manik convo about pari..
cont. soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
sorry guys for the delay actually i am not well so i am not able to concentrate on the story i am back with an update and i will try to update 2 parts tomorrow. here we go...

Mukti house

mukti -yaar manik tu late kyu ho gaya tere ko hamne bahut miss kiya

manik-sorry guys i stuck some where koi baat nahi lets party

dhruv-koi baat nahi buddy chalo guys party

everyone was enjoying and were drunk but there was some one who was lost in his own thaughts that some one was nor other than Manik

manik (to himself)-yaar meine kuch jyada nahi kar diya usne toh sirf muj par chilaya tha aur meine usse lock kar diya woh bhi store room mein.main aisa kyun soch raha hun uski galti hai usne galat bande se panga liya nan phir .but phir bhi kuch jyada toh nahi ho gaya .


same time college (store room)

nandini-manik open the door lagta hai chala gaya ab mein kya karu is ladke ka kuch nahi ho sakta jab dekho mujhe pareshan karta rehta hai

suddenly she felt something at her leg (it was a rat)
nandini-aaa (she started screaming) shooo shoo go away ayyappa kha phasa diya is manik ne shooo shooo she was so scared that she felt dizzy

some one opens the door

manik-NANDINI

but she doesnt responds

manik-nandini uttho

he tried everything to wake her up but all in vain...after some time she came into her senses

manik-nandini tum theek ho na aur tum bbehosh kaise ho gayi

nandini - tum toh baat hi mat karo mujse.tum khud ko samajte kya ho jab chaho mujhe lock kar do aur jab chaho mujhe un lock . aur tumne mujhe lock kyu kiya just because your ego was hurt.keep aside your ego or u will get into a big trouble you just left from here aur tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha mere baare mein

manik was feeling guilty

manik- i am really sorry nandini i promise that i will never hurt you aggain plz forgive me i am really very sorry
(he hold his ears and was looking really cute that nandini couldnt hold her anger )

nandini-ok abhi ke liye maaf kiya but agar phire tumne aisa kiya na toh i will not forgive u

manik-pakka wala promise i will never hurt you again

'FRIENDS'
he extends his hand for a hand shake

nandini after thinking for a while said

'FRIENDS'
and shook hands with him

manik-ok its too late i will drop you home

nandini-ok

they left the college nad manik dropped her home

nandini-thanks

manik-be ready for tomorrow i will come to pick u and alia so be ready


next day
alia home

manik rang the door bell

alia-manik tum yaha woh bhi itni jaldi

manik - kyu nahi aa sakta woh actually meine nandini ko phone kar ke btaya tha ki i will come to pick u both bataya nahi kya usne

nandini came there to see who is there

nandini- manik tum yaha

manik-nandini tumhe yaad nahi ki meine tumhe kaha tha ki mein tum dono ko pick karne aaunga aur tumne alia ko bhi nahi bataya

nandini-oh ha sorry woh manik ne call kiya tha but maein bhul gayi batana actually tum mukti ke ghar se late aai thi is liye bhi nahi bta payi

alia-its ok nandini koi baat nahi chalo tum ready ho jao and manik u wait for some time

manik and nandini in unison ok

nandini got ready and the trio came to college

college

the trio enters the jam room where cabir dhruv and mukti was waiting for them

mukti-finally u r here itni late kyun ho gaye

manik-mein toh time pe tha but yeh nandini ne late kara diya haina nandini

nandini- sorry guys woh main bhul gayi thi ki manik hamein lene aane wala tha

cabir-woh toh thikh hai but tum dono ko kya hua kal tho itna jagadh rahe the ajj kya ho gaya itni achhi tarah baat kar rahe ho

dhruv- ha ek din mein tera hariday parivartan kaise ho gaya

manik- aisa kuch nahi hai hum dono bas friends banane ki koshish kar rahe hain yeh sab chodo ajj practice karte hain kitna time ho gaya hai

dhruv goog idea nandini tum bhi hamein join karo na

nandini - soory guys you carry on

manik- comon nandini chalo itna bhav kyun ka rahi ho

nandini-manik plz maine kha na plz dont force me

after saying that she left the room and she was crying

manik-isse kya hua

alia-woh nahi gaye gi guys aur plz use force mat karna mujhe bhi uski awaaz sune 8 saal ho gaye hai pta nahi uski music se kaisi buri memories judhi huin hai aur woh mujhe bhi nahi btati hai

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FAB FIVE (MUMBAI)

mukti-saale tu ne use room mein baandh kar diya pagal hai kya aur ab samaj mein aaya ki tu us din itni jaldi jaldi mein kyu bhaag gaya tha apni love ko jo bachana tha

manik (blushing)

manik - tabhi tumhe aapni love story nahi bta raha tha

dhruv-woh toh thikh hai but woh gana kyu nahi gaati thi yeh baat toh usne kisi ko nahi btai thi

alia - dhruv is right woh gaati kyun nahi thi

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NANDINI AND NATASHA (AIRPLANE)

natasha - haww usne tumhe store room mein baandh kar diya very bad

nandini- tumhe kya laga mein use yu hi monster kyu bulati hun

natasha-aur tum gana kyu nahi gaathi thi

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thats for now suggestions and criticism is most welcome and will try to update two parts tomorrow

thnks

buddy me for pms

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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
wow...awesome update...loved it so much...eagerly waiting to read more...continue soon...
get well soon dear...take care
thanks a lot for the pm...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
awesome update..
cont. soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Wow.. Awesome stry yar..
I m loving ur updates 😛
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Hey really nice update, enjoyed it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
aweosme
cont sooon with bigger update plz plz
musicialtie thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Hey dear awesome update. ..👏
and thanks for my store room scene ...
U ve no idea how much I love store room and shower scene of manan 😉
awaa my manik I'd shooo Cute. ..
I will never get tired loving them...my MANAN
plsss the Update ASAP. .. Plzzz i need morning update okkk😎

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