sorry guys for the delay actually i am not well so i am not able to concentrate on the story i am back with an update and i will try to update 2 parts tomorrow. here we go... Mukti house
mukti -yaar manik tu late kyu ho gaya tere ko hamne bahut miss kiya
manik-sorry guys i stuck some where koi baat nahi lets party
dhruv-koi baat nahi buddy chalo guys party
everyone was enjoying and were drunk but there was some one who was lost in his own thaughts that some one was nor other than Manik
manik (to himself)-yaar meine kuch jyada nahi kar diya usne toh sirf muj par chilaya tha aur meine usse lock kar diya woh bhi store room mein.main aisa kyun soch raha hun uski galti hai usne galat bande se panga liya nan phir .but phir bhi kuch jyada toh nahi ho gaya .
same time college (store room)
nandini-manik open the door lagta hai chala gaya ab mein kya karu is ladke ka kuch nahi ho sakta jab dekho mujhe pareshan karta rehta hai
suddenly she felt something at her leg (it was a rat)
nandini-aaa (she started screaming) shooo shoo go away ayyappa kha phasa diya is manik ne shooo shooo she was so scared that she felt dizzy
some one opens the door
manik-NANDINI
but she doesnt responds
manik-nandini uttho
he tried everything to wake her up but all in vain...after some time she came into her senses
manik-nandini tum theek ho na aur tum bbehosh kaise ho gayi
nandini - tum toh baat hi mat karo mujse.tum khud ko samajte kya ho jab chaho mujhe lock kar do aur jab chaho mujhe un lock . aur tumne mujhe lock kyu kiya just because your ego was hurt.keep aside your ego or u will get into a big trouble you just left from here aur tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha mere baare mein
manik was feeling guilty
manik- i am really sorry nandini i promise that i will never hurt you aggain plz forgive me i am really very sorry
(he hold his ears and was looking really cute that nandini couldnt hold her anger )
nandini-ok abhi ke liye maaf kiya but agar phire tumne aisa kiya na toh i will not forgive u
manik-pakka wala promise i will never hurt you again
'FRIENDS'
he extends his hand for a hand shake
nandini after thinking for a while said
'FRIENDS'
and shook hands with him
manik-ok its too late i will drop you home
nandini-ok
they left the college nad manik dropped her home
nandini-thanks
manik-be ready for tomorrow i will come to pick u and alia so be ready
next day
alia home
manik rang the door bell
alia-manik tum yaha woh bhi itni jaldi
manik - kyu nahi aa sakta woh actually meine nandini ko phone kar ke btaya tha ki i will come to pick u both bataya nahi kya usne
nandini came there to see who is there
nandini- manik tum yaha
manik-nandini tumhe yaad nahi ki meine tumhe kaha tha ki mein tum dono ko pick karne aaunga aur tumne alia ko bhi nahi bataya
nandini-oh ha sorry woh manik ne call kiya tha but maein bhul gayi batana actually tum mukti ke ghar se late aai thi is liye bhi nahi bta payi
alia-its ok nandini koi baat nahi chalo tum ready ho jao and manik u wait for some time
manik and nandini in unison ok
nandini got ready and the trio came to college
college
the trio enters the jam room where cabir dhruv and mukti was waiting for them
mukti-finally u r here itni late kyun ho gaye
manik-mein toh time pe tha but yeh nandini ne late kara diya haina nandini
nandini- sorry guys woh main bhul gayi thi ki manik hamein lene aane wala tha
cabir-woh toh thikh hai but tum dono ko kya hua kal tho itna jagadh rahe the ajj kya ho gaya itni achhi tarah baat kar rahe ho
dhruv- ha ek din mein tera hariday parivartan kaise ho gaya
manik- aisa kuch nahi hai hum dono bas friends banane ki koshish kar rahe hain yeh sab chodo ajj practice karte hain kitna time ho gaya hai
dhruv goog idea nandini tum bhi hamein join karo na
nandini - soory guys you carry on
manik- comon nandini chalo itna bhav kyun ka rahi ho
nandini-manik plz maine kha na plz dont force me
after saying that she left the room and she was crying
manik-isse kya hua
alia-woh nahi gaye gi guys aur plz use force mat karna mujhe bhi uski awaaz sune 8 saal ho gaye hai pta nahi uski music se kaisi buri memories judhi huin hai aur woh mujhe bhi nahi btati hai
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FAB FIVE (MUMBAI)
mukti-saale tu ne use room mein baandh kar diya pagal hai kya aur ab samaj mein aaya ki tu us din itni jaldi jaldi mein kyu bhaag gaya tha apni love ko jo bachana tha
manik (blushing)
manik - tabhi tumhe aapni love story nahi bta raha tha
dhruv-woh toh thikh hai but woh gana kyu nahi gaati thi yeh baat toh usne kisi ko nahi btai thi
alia - dhruv is right woh gaati kyun nahi thi
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NANDINI AND NATASHA (AIRPLANE)
natasha - haww usne tumhe store room mein baandh kar diya very bad
nandini- tumhe kya laga mein use yu hi monster kyu bulati hun
natasha-aur tum gana kyu nahi gaathi thi
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thats for now suggestions and criticism is most welcome and will try to update two parts tomorrow
thnks
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