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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Awsumm start..!! Quite interesting..!! Do continue soon..!! and pm me whenever u update plz..!

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Res :)

Edited on pg 11 😊😊

Edited by avni_19 - 11 years ago

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Liashna
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u owe me a pm girl.

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Hola Aamna.. Interesting one yaar.😳 Ishita is a fashionista. She sounds so beautiful while you described her and her dressing sense here and then there's Raman with his grey blazer

" "That depends what I observe but I work here." He was humble, all right. He looked no less than an owner of the store."

Aww, Ishita is looking at his appearance only. Sigh. How clothing is actually a medium to hide everything.. hide every weakness, and veil every shortcoming to portray another image. Reminds me of a story I read for literature. Overcoat.

"Some people have everything, Raman thought. Somebody like her only would say such a thing because she had money. She lived an opulent life, like it was her birth right. "

Am pretty much sure he's judging her😆 Everyone who's seen to have everything has something which is missing in their life which no money can replace.😳 Let's see what's the deal with her 😉

"Raman Bhalla was done living in the back ground, it was his time to shine and accomplish all that he had ever wanted since he got his senses"

Ah, this is getting way too gripping 😳 Excited to see the businessman Raman now. Make them meet soon.. Wanna see how they react once they know each other's harsh realities, if ishita has one that is. 😛

Too good. Just the prologue and am so into it already. 😳

Hey Lia, first of all thank you for a detailed comment!

Mr. Bhala is charming all right, and with such a beautiful and sweet girl who would actually talk to a shopkeeper, its hard to ignore. Being in slums have taught him some lessons a and thus he sort of has it against her class who has all the money but what he doesn't know is she also has her share of secrets which will be revealed soon.

Clothing is the first thing people notice and it's true it hides the dark thoughts and the painful past if you are able to pull it off. Grey blazer, indeed, I have thus thing for jackets :D is it the same overcoat where the protagonist leaves some money in the pocket of the overcoat when he leaves his girlfriend?

They have met in the next chapter, hope you enjoy their first meeting after the leap.

Thanks again Lia!

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: shavi2311
wht a chnge in lives of ishra...
seems very intrstng abt their past nd present...
nd the line abt credit card lol..
he identifed her...did she identifed himmm...
waitng fr nxt...

Shavi I am glad you liked the change, it has turned both their lives upside down but they will soon fix it! You will find out the identification game in the next update.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: nrn1486
Nice update dear.. 😊
Raman is his usual self.. successful, suave and with his share of secrets. I wonder what's up with Ishita, though.
Can't wait for the story to unfold😊😊

Thanks neethi. I couldnt imagine Raman otherwise and i have saved ishita's secret for the next update which will be up soon insha Allah 😊

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Rozy77
awesome part dear⭐️
raman would be successful, that i knew so am happy for him😃
jeez, i can only imagine what a disastrous state the house is in...😆
ruhi is here too. that's nice😊
i kind of guessed you'll do a reverse with ishita...
i was right in thinking you'd get her to be the nanny
this is interesting👍🏼
eager to see how it goes...😉

Thank you for the lovely comments rozy. Haha its hard to imagine him otherwise right? The hero has to have it all and that also include some rainy days when the housekeeper just vanishes!

Ruhi is the bridge between the two and it's hard to separate her from them and thus the idea of a nanny comes in because i want them to be together under the same roof for the romance to brew 😉

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: swathin
lovely updates
interesting and a diff story
if possible do pm me

I'm glad you liked the concept, thank you!

Please bookmark it, I am known for my laziness in sending pm.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: yhmmylife
very interesting and very intriguing..

i think the stories in the present will unfold before the past...

both recognised each other...what happened that changed the social status of Ishita..
we know about Raman..worked hard came up..

update soon

Thank you so much! Well I have a parallel approach in mind but lels see how it unfolds. This was only Rama's point of view, you will know about ishita's in the next. And her side of the story will also be revealed in the next update.