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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Wonderful update 👏
I thought no ruhi in this story. But i'm glad she is there and because of her they met again
All raman neighbor's had to be weird 😆 Seems ishita has competition already

Can't wait for the next part and ishra convo


P.S. My name is Sowmya.

Consider me your pankhi 😆 I read and loved all your writings 😳 So no surprise i'm here for more



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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: MayurnASYA

Wonderful update 👏

I thought no ruhi in this story. But i'm glad she is there and because of her they met again
All raman neighbor's had to be weird 😆 Seems ishita has competition already

Can't wait for the next part and ishra convo


P.S. My name is Sowmya.

Consider me your pankhi 😆 I read and loved all your writings 😳 So no surprise i'm here for more




Haha pankhi, I like that! Thank you!
Sowmya, the neighbor has no choice really when Mr. Bhalla lives next door and is the sought after man with the money and fame. Ishita's life is not going to be as easy as it used to be earlier and ruhi is such a darling that I prefer not to miss her character in my stories. She is actually the reason I started liking the show in the first place. The one actress who kept me hooked with her innocence and ease on screen.

Thanks again sowmya!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"He hung up the call, kept the child in the middle of the bed and fixed his tie. "Please just calm down Ruhi, just today. Please." He talked more to himself looking at his reflection in the mirror than the cying baby."

Ruuhhh is here 😳 She's still a baby though, awwiee, Raman has to handle her alone.

"Natasha was not only his next door neighbor but also a gym trainer who looked for every opportunity to flang herself onto him after he had ignored all her tactics to go out with him."

🤣 I don't blame her though. RKB is hawt😆😉

"Perhaps she didn't have any secrets like he did, he mustered as he got in the car and drove to his work place."

Now now, dark secrets Raman😲 Aamna don't give us any heart attack haan, please 😆

He's such a no-nonsense businessman and the way you described his personality, can he become alive? Address do uska

"For a brief moment he just stood there in his living room, trying to make peace with the fact that this filthy house was in fact his and he had to make do with its current state for now. "

Cleanliness freak 🤣 I feel for him man, I can so feel for him. See am telling you this Raman and I are made for each other. You just took my dream man and put him in your story. 😆😛

"It was Ms. Iyer from his hometown, only today she was in a disheveled form and her designer black jacket had a smudge on the elbow and her nude pumps were dusty as if she had walked to his house instead of using her car."

😲😲 *ouch* Wth happened to her? The mere image in my mind made me flinch.

""I am here for the job of a nanny. Mr. Bhalla?" She inquired."

Now what compelled her to become a nanny is my ultimate question.. But.. She doesn't recognise him now, does she?
🤔

Hola dear, an absolutely intriguing one, am a lover of mysteries 😆

Continue soon 😳

Your fan 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: aaminah123


Hey Lia, first of all thank you for a detailed comment!
Mr. Bhala is charming all right, and with such a beautiful and sweet girl who would actually talk to a shopkeeper, its hard to ignore. Being in slums have taught him some lessons a and thus he sort of has it against her class who has all the money but what he doesn't know is she also has her share of secrets which will be revealed soon.

Clothing is the first thing people notice and it's true it hides the dark thoughts and the painful past if you are able to pull it off. Grey blazer, indeed, I have thus thing for jackets :D is it the same overcoat where the protagonist leaves some money in the pocket of the overcoat when he leaves his girlfriend?

They have met in the next chapter, hope you enjoy their first meeting after the leap.

Thanks again Lia!



Ayye, he has a grudge against people who get all easily and is behind making himself successful post that life. Nice. 😳

Ishita is a nice soul 😳 Haha, me too, people find it weird that when I go out shoppng my eyes and feet reach the jackets first, mostly men's😆

Nope, it's about a man with an expensive overcoat, his umbrella and pipe. Everyone look upto him as an aristocrat as he walks the roads with a charm. But he gets an accident, and upon undressing his overcoat in the ambulance, the nurses find a man with the dirty vest, torn shorts without any ID or money, and a sick body.

Something was there about it was written or about the way we were explained 😆 But that story never leaves me.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Liashna

"He hung up the call, kept the child in the middle of the bed and fixed his tie. "Please just calm down Ruhi, just today. Please." He talked more to himself looking at his reflection in the mirror than the cying baby."

Ruuhhh is here 😳 She's still a baby though, awwiee, Raman has to handle her alone.

"Natasha was not only his next door neighbor but also a gym trainer who looked for every opportunity to flang herself onto him after he had ignored all her tactics to go out with him."

🤣 I don't blame her though. RKB is hawt😆😉

"Perhaps she didn't have any secrets like he did, he mustered as he got in the car and drove to his work place."

Now now, dark secrets Raman😲 Aamna don't give us any heart attack haan, please 😆

He's such a no-nonsense businessman and the way you described his personality, can he become alive? Address do uska

"For a brief moment he just stood there in his living room, trying to make peace with the fact that this filthy house was in fact his and he had to make do with its current state for now. "

Cleanliness freak 🤣 I feel for him man, I can so feel for him. See am telling you this Raman and I are made for each other. You just took my dream man and put him in your story. 😆😛

"It was Ms. Iyer from his hometown, only today she was in a disheveled form and her designer black jacket had a smudge on the elbow and her nude pumps were dusty as if she had walked to his house instead of using her car."

😲😲 *ouch* Wth happened to her? The mere image in my mind made me flinch.

""I am here for the job of a nanny. Mr. Bhalla?" She inquired."

Now what compelled her to become a nanny is my ultimate question.. But.. She doesn't recognise him now, does she?
🤔

Hola dear, an absolutely intriguing one, am a lover of mysteries 😆

Continue soon 😳

Your fan 😃


Dear fan,

Thank you for the word of praise.
Until now, Raman is pretty much done worth his dark past and I know I have enough requests to go easy on him now so no more heart attacks in this one I promise.

Haha I will share his address as soon as I find him alive on this planet!
The cleanliness freak, dont forget lia that the mess was created by the man himself although he prefers his place to be immaculate.

The mysterious case of ms. Iyer is explained in the next update lia. I am glad you have liked the story so far. Thanks agan!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76


Ayye, he has a grudge against people who get all easily and is behind making himself successful post that life. Nice. 😳

Ishita is a nice soul 😳 Haha, me too, people find it weird that when I go out shoppng my eyes and feet reach the jackets first, mostly men's😆

Nope, it's about a man with an expensive overcoat, his umbrella and pipe. Everyone look upto him as an aristocrat as he walks the roads with a charm. But he gets an accident, and upon undressing his overcoat in the ambulance, the nurses find a man with the dirty vest, torn shorts without any ID or money, and a sick body.

Something was there about it was written or about the way we were explained 😆 But that story never leaves me.


I wanted to explore the different aspects of individualss who come from different background and social class yet they find their reflection in each other despite the vast differences.

Oh okay. I was thinking about the movie perhaps, raincoat.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Loved it!!
Please update more often.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Raman is successful n single with Ruhi. He is searching for a nanny. Ms.Iyer is the nanny.That is Ishita? Interesting story line.Nice.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: katiecastle

Loved it!!
Please update more often.


Thank you!
Will update tomorrow insha Allah :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: felciya

Raman is successful n single with Ruhi. He is searching for a nanny. Ms.Iyer is the nanny.That is Ishita? Interesting story line.Nice.


I'm glad you liked the story line, thank you!

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