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Originally posted by: Urmila11

Thank you very much didi 😊 I'm so honoured that I could make you visualize all these 😊

Originally posted by: naq5

so sorry have not been able to read updates since a long time . i missed few in between n waned to read everything at one go n was not finding time for it. im reading now from yudis coronation.

chapter 15. it was divine. the shlokas the ceremony described in so much detail. it wud have taken so much effort from your side to put together all that. And the krishna connection to yudi it was beautful

chapter 17 what a sly dhritarashtra was. ok so what dos the epic say did he know tht his son was planning to murder the pandavas? and did karna have a hand in this too😕. poor yudi he is in dharmsankat as to weather take his responsibilities as crown prince or listen to his uncle. big decicion it was. makes me wonder if the kurushetra war have hapened if he had taken a decicion of not going.😕 vidur yudi convo was well done. i love his riddles.

chapter 20 .. so hidimbaa comes. was it really her who fell for bhim .. well she is so courageousaccepting her love in front of every1. kuhd hi rishta le ke aa gyi😆. poor bhim it was hilarious how his eyes became bigger knowing a rakhshasi had fallen for him😆

chapter21 baby ghatotkach. hes attracted to arjun the most. made me sad to know he will be sacrifices for him in the war. loved the bantering the twins n bheem have between them😆

and this is so true Happiness resides within us; we just need to feel its presence even in worst situations! Why should we allow situations to rule over us? We should learn how to become satisfied with little! If we can do so then no pain of discontent will be able to touch us!"

devi hidimbaa wow bheen has newfound respect fr his wife😆 but its sad how much both hidimbaa n her baby had to sacrifice you expressed this so well There was the lovely kid of our family, and we were snatching his most precious throne---his father's lap, from him!! Instead of it he was forced to sit on such a throne which would destroy all his juvenile instincts!!

chapter 22 wow so krishna enters thru yudis imagination it was beautiful. loves the way he smiled different smiles at yudi. reminded me tht SRJ did tht part so well different smiles. n tht poem was beautiful. m arjun krishna tht was way before established in yudis mind even before this duo met.even i feel a certain magic in these two words when taken together

one day i would like to read a FF thru sahdev's POV. it wud be v interesting

chapter 23 aww so krishna's real entry. loved how yudi spotted him n connected with him. krishna's naughty smile n loving gaze towards draupadi. no noticing Arjun he was his soulmate. And so yudi remembers his cousin krishna not knowing he is the same who he was meeting in his imagination

so yudi waiting for the god to come n win the princess.. well but god had choosen arjun for it n yudi at last finds someone he can turn to in dilemma. feeling happy for him. loved how he immediately turns to krishna to seek aprooval😊

Originally posted by: sankadevimaha

I knw m late... sry di... ws soo stucked up wid dese exms.. nd nw m eligible fr internship n a company.. I hope I clr n dt too so dt I cn relax.. Nd nw my lord hs appeared n ds ff Before dharmaraj... wowww... awesome coincidence.. I ws waiting fr ds update fr a long tym.. bt nw I am late.. sry sry.. I jus nw gt free a little.. I hope I ll b able to read ur update n ds free tym.. nd my heroine nd d real hero f mahabharat hs appeared n ds update.. wowww.. beautiful update di... thank you soo much fr d pm.. 😳

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

UrmilaDi...Very beautiful update!!.I was waiting for this update eagerly n now U have done..👏👏

So,Pandavas were ready to enter the swayamvar place n of course they should..

Nakul's joke about Bheem was hilarious..hehe..😆

Woohhh...Yudi watching Kanha.😳.but do know who he was!!..after hearing the word Krishnaa,Yudhi's mind was revolving around His Name..Fantastic!!

Ur words about Pride..wow..Very True!!

Angaraj's part...U have written it in a neat n crisp manner.👏

Yudhi's n Kanha's silence conversation through their eyes...are wah..Loved it very much..Kanha giving assurance through his captivating eyes itself..awww...😳😳

Arjun..He proved..👏

Then VaraliDi's words about Panchaali's feelings...Awesome..

But My most Fav scene in this part was YUDHI N KANHA'S SCENE..I can visualise each n every scene 😳😛..Thanks a lot for giving this Wonderful update n for PM..

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Just because you are writing an ff on Yudhi , you would transfer even the Krishna-arjun interaction like exchanging looks etc,to Yudhi Krishna thing...How apt it is you yourself should ponder over it.If you are writing a kaliyugi fiction, it is still ok. But claiming to write an ff based on the greatest epic of India, it should not be so.You can very well keep the basic identity and character of Yudhi as it is and glorify him.That is why the swayamvara episode lacks the shining lustre of the original.You did not bother to write the garlanding of Arjuna by Draupadi even in draupadi's musings.Vedvyas uses the word utsmayanti, which means smilingly.Draupadi smilingly placed the garland.Distortion of characters and relationships especially while dealing with god's relationships unwarranted.As Indians we should save the soul of the epics.Krishna will never share his love for arjun with anyone leave alone yudhisthir.Sorry if I hurt your feelings.Cant keep quiet on seeing innocent fellow readers mislead by the portrayal.
Welcome back dear 🤗 I was missing you 😳 Thanks to Krishna that you have arrived here with His arrival 😃 I always long to meet Krishna fans 😳
I knew that you would like Krishna-Yudhi connections, I told you na, they really shared a cute relationship which is less known and less discussed.
And Dhritarashtra wanted to banish Pandavas from HP. Yes, Karna too was involved in the lakshagriha conspiracy. Our Yudhi is always so good to everybody which makes him suffer 😭
Now Hidimbaa, yes she proposed Bheem 😆 simple & sweet girl she was 😳 and yes, poor lady had to sacrifice a lot 😭 that's why there is a temple of Hidimbaa in North India.
Ghatotkach, lucky boy he was, sacrificed his life for Dharma's service 😊
Glad you liked Krishna's smile, He is always Manmohan...mesmerizer of hearts 😳 and He noticed Arjun too but Yudhi could not notice Krishna-Arjun eyelock 😆 he was busy watching swayamvar 😉 and what do you think, Arjun stood up by his own wish? Certainly Krishna gave him an indication through His lotus eyes sadly I could not show this because it is Yudhi's pov, not Arjun's 😔 but yes, I do feel their connection.
And see, Yudhi still does not know that his Saviour is none but his brother Krishna 😆 just imagine what a surprise he is going to get 😆
Thank you for your long comment dear 😊
As for your question, I think I have written it wrong. Bheem learned mace from Balaram when the later was in Mithila, and Kanha was not with him at that time. Harivamsa says such a situation appeared. I have to check it once again.

Originally posted by: Mohiniapearl

Beautiful! At one time I just forgot that I ws reading rather thought I was watching... The set up was quite similar to starbharat.
The dependence and finding of problem solver, that was the most amazing part!
Oh my innocent yudi doesnt know, where krishna was...
The karna's part also was short and sweet.

Another thing Draupadi's thoughts nd feelings werr also marvellously written very much like an ordinary girl yet very special.
You and varaali di write too good together.. (even that Yudi Arjun os was also fantastic)
Kudos to you... eyes waiting fr nxt update! ⭐️

Originally posted by: ltelidevaralak