Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18)

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SAM

@kkyajo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

its my 100th post n i was holding for this just for ur ff...i loved it alot...start was really cute n awesome...their sleeping postures were reflecting nature of one...love the conv of sumer n ladoo...u r an amazing author...love u reading.plz update soon...waiting eagerly 😊

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shubhi7

@shubhi7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

hayeee Arnav hugging Khushi while sleeping that was the best part...loved it

it was an lovely update!! I want more Arshi moments

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

fantastic!!

Awesome and brilliant!!

For now am going off in IF until my exams are over so technically this is my last day here!!

Will read your next update once am back!!

Pls do send me email!!

And also cont soon!!

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Awesome superb update. .. hahaha such a soft n warm update god! buddy ur way of describing things in smooth flow is just TOO good! like while describing how good Arnav felt with his PILLOW n the smell of dat PILLOW the way h switched to the groaning of it it was just hilarious.

her posture so languid and so...so...
nice, yeah nice was the word he'll
stick with because other words
erupting in his sleepy mind were
outright scandalous.

lol pati ho ap us k haq hai apka us pr n in saray scandalous words sochnay pr btw the word was sexy right Mr.Raizada

Making herself comfortable, she
purred in extreme satisfaction before
succumbing to slumber again. Her
husband gulped, wide awake
now. Pervert , he chided himself the
next moment and tore his eyes away.

🤣 🤣 🤣

I myself doesn't sleep like a lady but my sleep is not sound I wake up too easily.
when he told her abt when he woke up her reaction was millions dollar but then relief came to her rescue tht she didn't disobeyed buaji Arnavji woke up quite early n wao what an answer she gave to buaji lol loved it. Khushi her speed of talking u ask her abt one simple thing n see her reply making 2+2=11 n then back to four n thts wht I just adore of MKM's khusji. She just warm up ur heart see she warmed up Arnav's too. Just loved the update. plZZ continue soon

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

WHAT? WHY did you get up so early? '
she looked at him incredulously.
Subject him to Chinese torture
and he might think about telling her
the reason why he woke up THAT
early. Not a chance before that. So he
just shrugged.
Chinese torture 🤣 🤣 🤣
awesome 👏 👏 👏

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smiley-shiney

@smiley-shiney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

Congrats on the new thread

Fantastic update

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#327

nice update

khushi will definitely change arnav for good

the small boy who craved for his parents love is still buried somewhere under teh hard exterior

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#328

lol.. congrats on new thread

awesome update

aww... loved the starting when arnav was hugging khushi thinking it's his pillow!! and what he found next create havoc in his sanity.. bechara, pervert ban gaya

loved how she is affected him

lol.. I loved they both thought same thing once waking up!! that is, recalling their marital status and change in their life style

I loved how khushi was arranging herself!! and how arnav make her speak!! and ended the silence and awkwardness!!!

loved khushi's reaction after knowing what times he wakes up, but she don't the reason for it, hope she will be arnav himself!!

lol.. love that scene too, when arnav thought mehndi is permanent too!!

loved breakfast time.. and buaji scolding khushi and her reason

arnav is thinking, no giving a thought that probably what he did, can happened in a bteer way, well whatever happens he got khushi and now she has time to woo her, make her fall for him but arrgh for that he sould realized his feeling stoo.. which he couldn't do it so easily, afterall ASR is arnav also, and his thick and sharp brain cannot easily know about him... first he should do it, and thier relation had long way to go now

loved how khushi is all the blushing and behaving like newly married, which she is, but reason is all the more different!!

glad sumer decided to talk to khushi about arnav's past and was also glad he didn't tell her everything but thing which is important for them!!! hope arnav will tell her all this himself, but again it has also long way to go!!

but now khushi is determined to give arnav and their relation a chance and will try to understand him more!!! what's more I need!!

very beautifully written update as always!

continue soon

thanks for the pm

PS: sorry for the delay😊

Edited by jas0308 - 12 years ago