Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 96

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Now this is known as superb reading...
Just loved at least someone read it completely. you know what, first i had written jungle/Stable scene on friday...but i found this idea better..jail scene will be something different than ipk1...so i went for Jail scene and wrote motel part and police raid in fifteen minutes now..
thanks a lot dear...

ya the jail and motel idea is better than the jungle one
and its more funny to read

Originally posted by: latha_555

once again very nice update.  I love the bonding between the two.  Police raid...poor ashlok!!! They will probably need to call Niranjan. Please update soon.

Thanks a lot dear... Ek bar to they are stuck badly...umm...may be they will get someone else... just wait dear..what next...

Originally posted by: niki795

ya the jail and motel idea is better than the jungle one
and its more funny to read

And it is going to be a bit different as jungle scene is normally shown in tvs and movies...
Will just try to write good...

Originally posted by: niki795

see I'm spamming from now itself...

Thanks a lot dear.you are such a sweetheart. my new thread will be dedicated to you only...by the way where are you from? i think not from India

Originally posted by: jeenia123

And it is going to be a bit different as jungle scene is normally shown in tvs and movies...
Will just try to write good...

I thought the same
jungle scene is shown many times in TVs and movies

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Thanks a lot dear.you are such a sweetheart. my new thread will be dedicated to you only...by the way where are you from? i think not from India

I stay in US ... I'm from India..

Originally posted by: niki795

I stay in US ... I'm from India..

K... thats why you use to say, i am going to sleep, when i m in office...nice to find friends like you...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

K... thats why you use to say, i am going to sleep, when i m in office...nice to find friends like you...

yes... Same here 
where are you from 

Originally posted by: niki795

yes... Same here 
where are you from 

Am from India... Punjab., Electrical Engineer...A govt officer who is too much free in office hours for writing stories to update daily...😉

Originally posted by: jeenia123

Am from India... Punjab., Electrical Engineer...A govt officer who is too much free in office hours for writing stories to update daily...😉

lol... Ok will catch up latter
going to sleep😊