Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 95

awesome update
loved it
their car broke down and they took lift...
they both are really fighting like husband and wife😆
then they danced on road
the motel scene is superb... He punched the manager😆
and they slept with pillows in middle
then the police ride
superb update

the precap is interesting
first shlok slapped the police... Then astha also did it wantedly😆🤣
now both in jail
continue soon😊Edited by niki795 - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: roshanii

gr8 like jab we met

Ya, it looks like but will be quite different... Thnaks a lot dear

Originally posted by: niki795

me first again

you are always first dear... thanks a lot...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

you are always first dear... thanks a lot...

thank u

Both in same room, bed and next jail cell. Really awesome, you can really come up with cute romance. I love the car fight, very hubby, wifey moment w/o they realizing.

once again very nice update.  I love the bonding between the two.  Police raid...poor ashlok!!! They will probably need to call Niranjan. Please update soon.

and I want the next update tomorrow only plz

see I'm spamming from now itself...

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
their car broke down and they took lift...
they both are really fighting like husband and wife😆
then they danced on road
the motel scene is superb... He punched the manager😆
and they slept with pillows in middle
then the police ride
superb update

the precap is interesting
first shlok slapped the police... Then astha also did it wantedly😆🤣
now both in jail
continue soon😊

Now this is known as superb reading...
Just loved at least someone read it completely. you know what, first i had written jungle/Stable scene on friday...but i found this idea better..jail scene will be something different than ipk1...so i went for Jail scene and wrote motel part and police raid in fifteen minutes now..
thanks a lot dear...

Originally posted by: Ladygirl

Both in same room, bed and next jail cell. Really awesome, you can really come up with cute romance. I love the car fight, very hubby, wifey moment w/o they realizing.

Thnaks a lot dear... did i say they will be in jail cell?
Just wait for tomorrow dear (if i update after reaching new thread)... you will get some surprises...