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Posted: 18 years ago
omg.. first of all EXCELLENTT!! i loved how he controlled himself tho i wanted one two slap across naina's face!!lolz

second.. i hope ur dad feels better.. people are so selfish sometimes!!i will pray for his foot to get better

also its okay if u dont update as frequent cuz i get it.. ur bzy. and ur dad.. its okayy

hope he feels bettr and hope u continue when u can..
no pressuree
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Posted: 18 years ago
hope ur dad get well soon all the best wishes for him
and awsome part and con when ever u can take care
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part!! hope ure dad feels better/gets well soon! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap:
just getting ready for concert!!!

starting now:*************************

concert!!

ok a lady walks out and says on the mic:
Today as our host we have a special a very special guest which came from bollywood....any guesses?

and its Bipasha Basu!!


👏

ok

bipasha:welcome everyone

everyone cheers

bipasha: nice cheer!!! 😃

bips:lets start now to a great evening!! Today our favorite angad and kripa will be here tonight!!
I eill be your host!!the first performance will be by me since angad and kripa are getting ready still!!

then all of a sudden its dark and then the starting of BEEDI comes on!!

Bips then dances on BEEDI!!

Naa ghilaaf
Naa lihaaf
Naa ghilaaf
Naa lihaaf
Thandi hawa bhi khilaaf Sasuri
Naa ghilaaf
Naa lihaaf
Thandi hawa bhi khilaaf Sasuri
Itni sardi hai kisi ka lihaaf lei lay
Jaa padosi ke chulhe se aag lei lay
Jaa padosi ke chulhe se aag lei lay

Beedi jalai lay
Jigar se piya
Jigar maa badi aag hai
Beedi jalai lay
Jigar se piya
Jigar maa badi aag hai

Dhuan naa nikaari o lab se piya
Ah haa
Dhuan naa nikaari o lab se piya
Je duniya badi jhaag hai

Beedi jalai lay
Jigar se piya
Jigar maa badi aag hai

Naa ghilaaf
Naa lihaaf
Thandi hawa bhi khilaaf Sasuri
Itni sardi hai kisi ka lihaaf lei lay
Jaa padosi ke chulhe se aag lei lay
Jaa padosi ke chulhe se aag lei lay

Naa kasoor
Naa fatoor
Naa kasoor
Naa fatoor
Bina juram ke hujoor
Marr gayi
Ho marr gayi

Aise ek din dupahari bulai liyo re
Baandh ghungru kacehri lagai liyo re
Bulai liyo re
Bulai liyo re
Dupahari
Lagai liyo re
Lagai liyo re
Kacehri

Angethi chadahi le
Jigar se piya
Jigar maa badi aag hai
Beedi jalai lay
Jigar se piya
Jigar maa badi aag hai

Na toh chakkua ki dhaar
Na daraati na kataar
Na toh chaa-kua ki dhaar
Na daraati na kataar
Aisa kaate ke daat ka nisaan chod de
Je kataai to koi bhi kisaan chod de
O aise… jaalim ka chod de makaan chod de
Re billo
jaalim ka chod de makaan chod de
aise jaalim ka
o aise jaalim ka
aise jaalim ka chod de makaan chod de

na bulaya
na bataya
na bulaya
na bataya
mhane neend se jagaya hai re
aisa chaukail haath mein naseeb aa gaya
woh elaichi khilai ke kareeb aa gaya

koyla jalai le
Jigar se piya
Jigar maa … aag hai

Itni sardi hai kisi ka lihaaf lei lay
O Jaa padosi
O Jaa padosi
Jaa Jaa Padosi
O Jaa padosi ke chulhe se aag lei lay

when shes done she comes back as host: how did you likew that?

audience: 👏 👏 👏

bips: now everyone the time has come!!!
angad and kripa are gonna perform on my song which is my fav too!

TOUCH ME!!!!!

eekhi teekhi teri akhiyaan,
chhooke chhooke behkati hai,
dekh dekh naa yun mujhko,
hosh hosh le jaati hai,
deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,
humse khafa koi ho jaye naa
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa - 2

chhod chhod meri raahon ko,
taubaa taubaa dar lagtaa hai,
aisi vaisi teri baaton se,
ishq vishk saa jagtaa hai,
deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,
humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa - 2

roke naa ruke, mere yeh kadam
tute naa kahin, jaanaa har kasam
rehne de zaraa, thodaa paas laa
paagalpan kare mann hai manchalaa
deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye na,
humse khafaa koi ho jaaye naa
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa - 2

naa main hosh mein, naa tu hosh mein
behke naa kahin dono josh mein
sine mein kahin sholaa saa jale
yaaraa ishq pe kiskaa bas chale
deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,
humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa - 2

teekhi teekhi teri akhiyaan,
chhooke chhooke behkati hai,
dekh dekh naa yun mujhko,
hosh hosh le jaati hai,
chhod chhod meri raahon ko,
taubaa taubaa dar lagtaa hai,
aisi vaisi teri baaton se,
ishq vishk saa jagtaa hai,
deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye na,
humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa

angad and kripa look fantastic!!!

angad then takes the mic: how did you liek that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


❤️

kripa:thats great becasue there is more!!

bips:now mille ho tum toh ....humsafar!!!

mile ho tum toh humsafar
bichhad ke udaas se mat karna
mile ho tum toh humsafar
bichhad ke udaas se mat karna
dil diya hai tumhen - 2
durr iss dil se naa rehna
(na na na nana - 3 na re) - 2
mile ho tum toh humsafar
bichhad ke udaas se mat karna
dil diya hai tumhen - 2
durr iss dil se naa rehna
(na na na nana - 3 na re) - 2
mile ho tum toh humsafar

maine kaha socha tha dil yeh machal jaayega
teri adaa ka jaadu mujhpe yun chal jaayega
lamha badal jaayega tujhmein yun dhal jaayega
dil diya hai tumhen - 2
durr iss dil se naa rehna
(na na na nana - 3 na re) - 2
mile ho tum toh humsafar

mere haseen khwaabon ki manzil teri raahon mein
mujhko toh ab rehna hai bas teri nigaahon mein
tera hi tasabbur hai meri inn duaaon mein
dil diya hai tumhen - 2
durr iss dil se naa rehna
(na na na nana - 3 na re) - 2
mile ho tum toh humsafar
bichhad ke udaas se mat karna

the concert goes on and on with different songs till the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the concert has a great outcome,.....
but will they stay happy??????

****************************************

outside everyone is congrating angad and kripa!!

they are happy till one hand shake.
but it wasnt a hand shake!!

angad gets hugged!!

kripa looks at angad and see "MISHTY" hugging angad!!

kripa doesnt know what reaction to take.
is it a sad reaction or happy, or mad.

angad pulles her off..

angad:Mishty tum?

Mishty:haan angad, main, mishty, i love you!!

angad:mishty, thats fine but here is kripa ,

Mishty: kripa ko choro, tum kaise ho?

angad" im fine


angad is not affended but thinks mishty as a friend.

****************************************

angad and kripa room!!

kripa:angad, mishty ab kaise ayi

angad:well its nice to meet an old friend, and yes mishty has invited us to some hall, get ready tommorow'

kripa:ok

***************************************

mishty room

mishty thinking""ab main angad ka dil churake rahoon gi, par kripa ko kisi aur jaga bejna hai, maybe tell her about some important work"

*******************************************

Next day

ring ring

kripa pics phone: hello

person:hi maan

kripa:hi

person: main aapko batana chata hoon ke aaj bahut imprtant meeting hai, 8:30 pm

kripa:mujhe kahin jana hai

person:toh kya aap angad ko begdi ge

kripa:i cant sorry

person:if you dont come then your studio will lose thousands

kripa:fine main atti hoon
par yeh kya hai?

person:yeh meeting studio ko promot karegi aur aap sign karna hai aur doosere bigger comapnies aapko select karsakti hai aur aap thousands ki concert millega, bahut famous aur people ayenge.

kripa:ok, i wil come

angad: kya hua

kripa:main nahin jasakti

angad:why

kripa:kyun ki mujhe"""telles everything""

angad:are you sure

kripa:go with mishty, she will be mad

****************************************

mishty: good, you brought this offer faster!!!

person: no problem!!

(so this offer is real ok, but it was suppose to come later on)

*****************************************

at night!!

angad comes alone to mishty in hall!!

mishty: hi angad!!

angad:hi

mishty : you seem sad

angad:kripa

mishty:ye

angad:how do you know

mishty: oh yes why she didnt come?

angad: '''telles story'''

mishty:oh too bad

**********************************

now its about 12:30am

kripa is at home: yeh angad itni late vahan..

kripa lays down and reads a book..

1:30am

kripa:ab tak nahin aya?

2:45

kripa:itni late hogaya

3:15

kripa: angad ka phone try karto hoon, pick up nahin karta

**************************************

angad is very drunk and cant see

mishty: angad...

angad"haan kripa

mishty:chalo

mishty takes angad to room but angad goes to sleep right away.

mishty: shit

mishty wakes angad and tries to act likr kripa

"angad,""

angad:kripAAA

angad hugs her: i love you your my life kripa

once again angad sleeps..

mishty why is he keep sleeping

***************************************

morning

kripa:angad puri raat nahin aya

****************************************

angad wakes up

he sees mishtyL: tum, main kahaan hoon?

angad:tumare saat puri raat, WHAT THE HELL

mishty:angad, main kya kahoon

angad:whats wrong with you, I HATE YOU

mishty loves angad and she says: hum dono ne kuch nahin kiya

*********************************

angad returns homa and hugs kripa

kripa:angad tum puri raath kahan the?

angad:mishty ke saath, par hum dono ne kuch nahin kiya, i got drunk , she took me to a room and she slept away form me

kripa still doesnt feel right....

**************************

THE END

what will happen?
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was an awesom part hon!!! 😛 ...sorry i read it earlier but forgot to comment 😊 mishty is gonna cause problems, isnt she?? do continue soon!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
i just got time to coment.. it was awesome!!

misthi beter no her limits or i will come and show it to her! im glad angad told kripa the truth and mishti told angad! but it better not happen again!!

continue sooon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

i just got time to coment.. it was awesome!!

misthi beter no her limits or i will come and show it to her! im glad angad told kripa the truth and mishti told angad! but it better not happen again!!

continue sooon!!!



come show mishty!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg nooooo plzzzzzzzzzzzz i want ak together kimi!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap:angad returns homa and hugs kripa

kripa:angad tum puri raath kahan the?

angad:mishty ke saath, par hum dono ne kuch nahin kiya, i got drunk , she took me to a room and she slept away form me

kripa still doesnt feel right....

*******************************************************

angad lets go of kripa,

angad sees that kripa still looks worried.

angad:kripa, do you not trust me?

kripa:......

angad: kya tum mujhe pyar karti ho?

kripa:angad yeh kaisa sawal hai.

angad:see you dont love me you dont trust me. (kiddish way)

kripa:angad , i do trust you and i do love you, par istarhaan jo tumhe aur mishty ne kiya, mujhe buraa lagaa

angad:sorry baba, i promise i will never stay with mishty without you being there, ajeeb baath yeh hai ke mujhe yaad nahin ke main us room main kaise poncha,

kripa:really, yeh toh ajeeb hai

*************************************************

Misthy in her room,

Mishy: koi baath nahin aunty, maine angad ko itni asani se mere room main leayi toh main kuch bhi karsakti hoon.
par aap dekho Mishty Bose ka kamaal Angad Khanna pe kaise jadu jaise parta hai. I promise that Angad will never even look at Kripa.

(who would she be saying this to?)

*******************************************************

ring ring)******

angad picks up his cell:
hello

Mishty: ANGAD ANGAD MAIN MISHTY BOL RAHI HOON, HELP ME KISNI NE MUJHE YAHAAN KIDNAAP KARLIYA HAI.

angad: what??? kahaan?

Mishty: i think its some forest, beside that temple, hurry.

angad:im coming

kripa paases by angad: kya hua angad

angada:mishty ko kisine kidnaap karliya hai

angad runs out

kripa:ANGAD, waittttttttttt

kripa is left alone: ong yeh mishty ko kisne kidnaap karliya hoga???

**************************************************

angad goes to this temple and beside it sees a forest,

ANGAD runs in there,, looking and looking everywhere,

angad:MISHTYYYYY, KAHAN HO?:???MISHTY

mishty: ahhhhhhhh, angadddddddddddddd

ANGAD LOOKS BACK AND MISHTY IS THERE NOW SHE FAINTS**
(dont worry she is not gonna be a mother of angad's child 😆 😆 )

angad:Mishtyyyyyyy

angad goes to mishty and picks her up, takes her in his car, takes her to hospital.

******************************************8

HOSPITAL.

doctor comes out

angad:kya hua inko

doctor:she has just a fracture in her foot and she just needs to have this speical needle.

angad:ok, can i go in?

doctor:wait.

angad gets a call on his cell and is about to walk out when he sees mishty talking to the soctor and gives him money.

angad:kya iska matlab hai ke mishty natak kar rahi hai?

main uske milke aata hoon

*******************************

angad goes straight into the room.

angad:mishty, kaisi ho?

mishty:tori si better hoon

angad: jo tumko kidnaap karliya tha, kya tumne uska chera dekha?

mishty: nai

angad;ya koi nahin tha

nishty:what are you saying angad?

angad:aur kya kuch baat thi jo tumhe doctor ko itne paise dene pare?

mishty:voh..

angad:voh kya? why are you doing this?? angad pretends to leave

mishty gets up and says angad wait

angad turns and looks at her foot, : tumhe toh foot mein fracture tha na? ab kya hua?

mishty quickly sits

angad: Natak karne ke liya koi zuraath nahin hai mishty,
maine socha tha ke maybe kripa is wrong, that she thinks you have some plan, but i was wrong , YOU WANT TO EARN SOMETHING, but remember main tumse kabhi nahin pyaar karoonga. aag main tumko doodne liye aaya kyunki main sochta tha ke tum ek acchi larki ho, par nahin.

mishty: angad im sorry, please forgive me and i will forget everythinmg and start a new life, please forgive me.

angad leaves,

*******************************************

Mishty goes home and since this problem wasnt major police didnt find out about it.

Mishty picks up the phone:
Aunty, aag maine ek bahut baari mistake ki par dehko main kya kya karti hoon ab

*******************************************8

There are 2 questions.

1.Who does Mishty talk to?
2.Will she be able to succed in her plan?
remember it could be yes or even no. just because this is a FF doesnt mean that Mishty have to succed in everything. but lets just see what happens!!

Enjoy!


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Posted: 18 years ago
pathetic mishti...anyway i guess its naina aunti...no

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