(ak) Fell in love in school.PAGE 65.END - Page 25

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Posted: 18 years ago
awww that was really nice...btw cont sooon cuz i wanna knoe the name!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome fanfic, great part!! 😛

I remember it was a girl 😃

Continue sooooonnn!!! 😃
Edited by .:Kiran:. - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: .:Kiran:.

Awesome fanfic, great part!! 😛

I remember it was a girl 😃

Continue sooooonnn!!! 😃



so it was a girl ...ok!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks to kiran i know its a girl!!wow she knows my fanfic more than i do 😳 !!!!

Recap:
dadi has baby


angad: hello everyone. main i mean Humbahut khush hai ke
aaap sab yahan humari khushi aur par ki nashan ko mubarak karne aaye ho. ab hum baache ke naam decide karenge.

Starts now:

angad:So now look to your left where there are papers and pencils there and pic one papaer and write a GIRL name on it. aur please acha naam dena please. (kripa hits angad)
Joking Joking.Ok then put it in the basket on that table.

then anita inturps and sayd: Bhai phir tumari aur kripa ki proformance.

kripa:what?

anita:come on

angad & kripa: fine

SO EVERYONE IS DONE IN ABOUT 10 MINS!!

there it goes

kripa: we are going to pick 3 names then we will vote for them ok.

first name: Suneri from Manik and anita

secind name: Sur from DADI

third name: fariya from rohit and his wife

then he says VOTE!!

everyone says SUR!!

SO THEn they say her name will be sur!!!!

anita: now please please perform!!!

the song they do is Touch me from dhoom 2
(i was listetning to it and decided yo put that)


Kripa walks out and a bunch of girls which are aniya, anita, DADI 😆 , rohits wife and a bunch of other gilrs there go around her and go : OHHH BABY OHH BABY

angad: teekhi teekhi teri akhiyaan,
chhooke chhooke behkati hai,
dekh dekh naa yun mujhko,
hosh hosh le jaati hai,
deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,
humse khata koi ho jaye naa-2
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa - 2

kripa: chhod chhod meri raahon ko,
taubaa taubaa dar lagtaa hai,
aisi vaisi teri baaton se,
ishq vishk saa jagtaa hai,-2
deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,
humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa - 2

angad:roke naa ruke, mere yeh kadam
tute naa kahin, jaanaa har kadam

kripa:rehne de zaraa, thodaa paas laa
paagalpan kare mann hai manchalaa

angad:deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye na,
humse khafaa koi ho jaaye naa
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa - 2

Kripa:naa main hosh mein, naa tu hosh mein
behke naa kahin dono josh mein

angad:sine mein kahin sholaa saa jale
yaaraa ishq pe kiskaa bas chale

kripa:deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye naa,
humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa
touch me don't touch me don't touch me soniyaa - 2

angad:teekhi teekhi teri akhiyaan,
chhooke chhooke behkati hai,
dekh dekh naa yun mujhko,
hosh hosh le jaati hai,

kripa:chhod chhod meri raahon ko,
taubaa taubaa dar lagtaa hai,
aisi vaisi teri baaton se,
ishq vishk saa jagtaa hai,

angad:deewaanaa dil kahin kho jaaye na,
humse khataa koi ho jaaye naa

kripa:touch me don't touch me come touch me don't touch me soniyaa-2

they get really shy especially kripa!!!
Then they finsih

everyone claps!!!

they are all happy till dadi asks: naina . dilip , karthick nahin aye?

angad and kripa look down.

The end!

i will try to post really soon!



Edited by kyph great fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
An add to look forward too!!!!



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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome can't wait for more pls conti soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome parts!!! cont soon.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow soo sweet hun...nice banner
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok!!!!i am continuing!!

ReCaP:they get really shy especially kripa!!!
Then they finsih

everyone claps!!!

they are all happy till dadi asks: naina . dilip , karthick nahin aye?

angad and kripa look down.

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Starting now!
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dadi:kya hua bete, tumare chere kyun niche girge?

kripa:voh dadi....(before is continues angad speaks)
angad:dadi uske saat mera koi rista nahin

dadi is horribly shcoked::Par bete kyun?

angad"mera evening kyun karab karna chati ho aap?

dadi: bete, nahin karna chati par yeh galat hai..

before she can continue angad left and went upstairs

dadi and kripa both looked at each other

kripa:dadi...vohhh..voh..main angad ke paas jati hoon

dadi:bete pehle mujhe batao kya hua?

kripa:ek minut aap ruksakti ho?please dadi? aapne humesha meri suni.ab please suno.angad pareshaan hain.main uske paas jasakti hoon?

dadi:poocne wali gal hai kya?

kripa wasnt smiling but she just left like angad did.

angad was in his room on his bed. very sad with his head down looking at the floor.

kripa:angad

angad still looks down

kripa sits right next to him with her hand on his arm.

kripa:angad, jo dadi ne kaha voh sehi tha

angad"WHAT??kripa you too?

kripa:angad meri baath to sunlo..please

kripa:angad, dadi ko to nahin pata ke mama ne kya kiya(tear flows down)

angad:kripa mama naihn...naina

kripa:angad, fine.usko nahin pata ke usne kya kiya. phir voh asi react kargi nah? pehle dadi ko batao phir voh kahgi ke tum sahi ho.

angad:fine kripa ....main dadi ko bataoonga...ok?
(you can tell angad was a bit teary but he hid it by grabing kripa and hugging her)

and behind it played kaisa yh pyar hai (Sad verson of kripa)

kripa closes her eys. then lets go.

kripa:main dadi ko bulati hoon

dadi: koi zaroorat nahin. main yahan hoon

kripa runs to dadi: dadi angad aur main kuch kehna chate hain

dadi:ok bete

dadi stands beside the door faced back. kripa is standing somwhere else and angad is in the same place as before.

krpa:dadi. mama ne

angad"kripa, bulgi kya?

kripa:ok angad. usne ...usne

angad:main batata hoon. mam..i mean naina wanted our child to die

dadi:KYAAAAA????

angad:haan dadi..jab main...

(tells whole story))

dadi:im sorry bete maine tumko galat kediya.tum galat nahin par naina hi galat hai.aur tumara pura hak hai ke tum kripa ki side leo aur naina ki nahin.

angad hugs dadi: thanks dadi thanks

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they all go back down.

angads friend says:angad tumari family nahin ayi kya

angad looks at kripa:i want to tell them eveeything

kripa:no angad

angad goes to front and picks up the mic.
he looks very mad.

kripa shaking head

angad:exsue me everyone.i want to tell you something very important,.............that is something i want to say....which is...............I LOVE YOU KRIPA


kripa shakes her head and blushes

eveyone:awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

kripa:angad////

angad:come heree

kripa goes there and angad hugs her.kripa feels good!
😳

The end
comments please

Edited by kyph great fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww great part!! lol...that was sscary tehre....if he wud've told everyone...that would be like....sad....lol 😆 ...cont soon 👏

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