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Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15* - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
Plz plz plz don't bring out the criminal in me...πŸ˜’ You know what I wanna do right now?? I really wish I could pull his hairs till nothing's left on his beautiful head or I could strangle his delectable neck or kneel him on his guts...😑 Or better, I could burn that Sheetal to ashes.. Damn it!

But how dare he say THAT to Khushi? I know she was a bit insecure but it was all his fault in the end.
"MAYBE I SHOULD HAVE! I can, even now, you know! But I am stuck with you!" 
This line brought shudders to me... He's going to regret this really bad and I know he didn't mean it but it's too late. Those words are already out of his mouth. Anger took better of him, this time too. Nk was right after all. He takes his dear ones for granted.

That was really really heart  breaking..πŸ₯Ί Poor Khushi..😭 Does he really have to be this insensitive...😭 I really wanna know what's going to happen next and I CAN'T wait for that..

Do you really write this good during your exams??😲 If yes then I wish... ahh umm I better not say that...πŸ˜†

Helee, I hate you for making it so painful (Pun intended) but I really love you for writing this so wonderfully. I have seen many stories on Sheetal's Plot but I must say this is the best one I've ever read.

Bang on update.. Couldn't help but comment on this part first before unresing my previous res...πŸ˜ƒ

Update soon..😊

XOXO...πŸ€—

P.s- Waise, when is your last exam??

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vaughn thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome! i wishe they explored it in the show more and teach arnav a lesson!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
feeling bad for khushi
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 10 years ago
holy cow!!! that is as realistic as any fight between husband and wife would be if it was over a third person in the relationship...

the lyrics of Beyonce's song suits this so well:

If I were a boy, I think I could understand
How it feels to love a girl
I swear I'd be a better man.
I'd listen to her 
Cause I know how it hurts
when you lose the one you wanted
Cause he's taken you for granted
And everything you had got destroyed
...
"why are you so jealous, its not like I am sleeping with the girl"
...
But you're just a boy
You don't understand

Edited by vinu.sr - 10 years ago
ASRphanki thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Extremely wonderful 2 shot...
The emotions are very well described..
Very eager for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Feeling very bad for her how he say such hurtful words to her. Hope she leave the house and then he realize his mistake. I have one request plz make 5 shots instead of 3 i want to read more. Nice update. Thanks for quick update.πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice dear😊

arnav does nt understand even he hurts hr😑

khushi hurt very much ths time what arnav told hr
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just checked my pm!
And my, oh my!!

This is just mind blowing, jaw dropping awesome.
You know what?

I dont care that Arnav said the stuff he said in his guilt or in anger.
I dont care that he didnt mean them.

I believe that he is a super-jerk and Khushi is far far  too good for him.
Its what he has always done. Taken her for granted.

And no, I dont agree that he does that with everyone else.
Anjali for example, just has to sneeze for him to come running to her.

So why Khushi then?
And him behaving as if he has been short-changed by getting married to Khushi??

If I had known Khushi, I'd ask her to leave.
He needs to realize how extremely lucky he is to have a wife who understands him, AND loves him, after everything that he did to her.

And he just cannot move past her education or her background.

Has he forgotten, that she was the one who saved his company from those con-men?
Pretty smart for an uneducated, embarrassing wife, yes?

I don't care if it is Arnav and Khushi, I just don't condone such behavior. 

Oh, she's my wife! That's alright then. she HAS to take care of all my whims. So why not spend all my time with the hot Sheetal and make my wife feel like shit? Oh, and also, when she questions me about it, I'll just show her, her aukaat, and that will shut her up. And for the cherry on the cake, I'll even tell her, I wish I had married Sheetal.
Such a prize for a husband, aren't I??
Arnav Singh Raizada, the multi-millionaire.

Oh, yes Arnav! We can clearly see that you are. ._.

Anyways, I will go on and on, if i don't stop now.

Also, update soon please???

Richa.

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome updt

poor khushi

luvd it
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Posted: 10 years ago
πŸ‘Edited by luv_panipuri - 10 years ago