Heart's A Mess T#2 TSR PG 144 27/10

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tan2345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

really a sad update

hope arnav n khushi dnt separate

thanks 4 da pm

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narcy24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

You are killing me...AMAZING
Short but full of feelings...
Wonderful...
Arnav is surounded by people but when Khushi enters his heart becomes restless.
He loves her...he must fight for her.

Edited by narcy24 - 12 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Loved the part.

The way in which you have shown how khushi realised the different world of ASR. How arnav's heartbeat increased on just feeling her in the room.

Hope that khushi will be able to stand by arnav, fight with him and for him. She is the were doctor which he needs

After seeing Arnav's life may be she will be able to understand the reasons why arnav has keep the truth hidden

continue soon

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shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Oh painfully beautiful! And the music added to it, it was a heart wrenching Wow experience.

I know it's hard for both of them to not see each other. I hope they will face this together, they just have to! They are so connected, he just knew the reason of his fast heart beats! Please, please, please update soon, ab raha nahi jata.

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bea_rom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

so emotional and sad

but loved it

and the song, just perfect

you created the perfect ambiance

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saba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

very emotional update 😭

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john-angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

my hearts a mess too, khushi cannot handle this!

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Es tu Brutus?

straight thru the heart on that one

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jojo21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

You certainly achieved your desired effect. Every word had a purpose and so described so well. In essence i was walking with Khushi to his room hearing her heels on the floor. When she went on the room and stood on the corner it was like I was right there seeing and even feeling what she was.

Arnav's plea just about broke my heart and his feelings of uncertainty about their relationship so perfect so right and so painful to read.

Her proclamation at the end made me gasp but also knowing about some of her past it was unsurprising. Oh what an impactful chapter.

Perfection.