Heart's A Mess T#2 TSR PG 144 27/10

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Sasak,

A beautiful update, short but you really achieved the desired effect.

Arnavs' heart rate went up once her presence was felt, love can heal all...

Khushi herself cannot bear to see him like this, but I cannot figure out why she told him that she cannot see him again...

I will not even try to guess as without a doubt you will provide an update with something we never expected., The song was very apt..and I thank you for letting us know the next update will the last sad one...will keep a box of tissues near by..

Crying at work is so unprofessional but waiting to get home and read this update simply was not on ...

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anjali2427

@anjali2427

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

sorry for late reply...such a beautiful story😊the emotions of each individual is ver y beautifully written.Keep going

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shona-li

@shona-li

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

It was a beautiful update. The emotions were running high. Gosh you know how to tug them heartstrings! I cannot imagine the heartache (pun intended) the two of them are going through right now. Argh!

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preethi28

@preethi28

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

My eyes misted while reading this update.
😭
The most beautiful part was Arnav's heartbeats quickening when his eyes fell on Khushi.
I have my semester on May 11 and internals,model and what not starting this monday.I will not be able to keep up with the story till my semester ends but I will try to steal some time to catch up inbetween. 😊

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Khushi he needs you, do not push him away now..., one way I can understand her , she barely knows his world, and he is still a mystery to her, and she is not sure how much right she has on him, and all lied to her, and no one for once thought of her view point, It was really heart breaking again. "I can't ever see you again", she has been in sadness and alone all along, and now she is trying to hardening herself, now where do we go from here...

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g17jas

@g17jas

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

she has to see him again!!! my heart's a mess now!

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

i cant tale this anymore. Cant see them this way. Cried reading a storyafter a very long time

Waiting for the next update. She has to see him

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archa2810

@archa2810

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Absolutely loved it.. Khushi is feeling like she knows nothing about arnav... N arnav's heart beat increased as he fet khushi... Aweww

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Sandhya

@cindistan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

wow!!! that was a very emotional update...😭 and though the update was very small, it certainly had the desired effect at least on me...hats off to you...the way you play with the words...its like everything is happening in front of my eyes...this is gng to remain my fav FF forever...👏

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Intensly emotional update...though it was a short one...

So many emotions conveyed with so little words...

My heart broke for Khushi...I can't say I blame khushi...Her world has been turned upside down...She gave her heart away for the very first time...to him and now its broken...She is feeling betrayed by the fact that everyone hid the truth from her...Maybe she is thinking he lead her on...She does not doubt that he loves her very much...Its just the thought of Arnav no being with her in the future...of losing him...that is just tearing her apart...

I don't blame Arnav either...U can't say when and with whom you fall in love and he fell hard for khushi...Despite knowing the truth...trying his level best to stay away he just couldn't...He loves her dearly and truly...the only thing that he shd have done is tell Khushi the truth sooner...

"Her legs gave way at the sight of him"...isn't it evident just how much she loves him...

Felt so bad when he wanted to hug her and she wanted the same but she said " I can't"

You made me cry again...Its just that I have gotten so emotionally involved with Arnav and Khushi that their pain brings tears to my eyes...

I am going to say this in every comment I post...I just can't help it...Please don't let Arnav die...

Edited by musicfan5 - 12 years ago