new SS -Hamara pyar ka Desh updated Chp 49/ pg 95 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

i am dreaming sanju premeer moment

prem ka pagalpan about his heer wowww

know what will heer do waiting sanju for next update ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the update ...
beautiful..loved it
premeer scsnes were awesome ...
waiting for the next update ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous chapter yaar.just wow 👏

while reading I was imagining the whole thing n i felt goosebumps which only premeer could evoke.loved it

p.s:miss them..hu hu hu hu 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow lovely update 👏
premeer scenes were ahem ☺️ no words 😳
pls cont soon
thanx for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

wow lovely update 👏

premeer scenes were ahem ☺️ no words 😳
pls cont soon
thanx for the update



Is this love wala update karo na.. and give more of premeer. please
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: midnight_blue

fabulous chapter yaar.just wow 👏

while reading I was imagining the whole thing n i felt goosebumps which only premeer could evoke.loved it

p.s:miss them..hu hu hu hu 😭



THANK U THNK U THNAK u...

I too miss them 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti



Is this love wala update karo na.. and give more of premeer. please

will update that SS..after AG's bdy 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

will update that SS..after AG's bdy 😳




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Posted: 12 years ago
common sanju smile...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Many Many More More Thanks for the appreciations and likes. 😛 😛 😛 😛

                                         Chapter 12

In the Morning... Prem opens up his eyes...

Prem- aahhh..!!! My head..!! ( tries to get up but couldn't since he notices some one head on his Chest, and hand around his waist. he looks shockingly and finds its Heer...) Heer..!!! ( he tries to move.. mean while Heer to open ups her eyes. both looks at each other... then heer Gets up and prem too with his hand on head)


Heer- Kya hua? saar dard kar raha hai..??? kare ga hi na.. kal raat ko itni pee jo rakhi thi...!!!
ruko mein nimbu  pani leke aati hu...!!!

Heer moves bt prem is sitting there with confusion. He looks here and there and sees his clothes are all placed near by bed and he is in kurta.. which he don't remember when he changed...!!

Thinks himself - Mein yaha kyun aya.? and mere kapde kis ne badle|? kahi Heerrr ne toh...??? 😲

Heer comes - loh pani peelo.. aram milega...!!
Prem takes and drinks it and looks at Heer and says...

Prem- ( awkwardly) Mein..!!! yaha..!! kaise..!!!
Heer-  tum khud aaye thyyy... yaad nai hai kya.. ( talking to him by making messes up room)
Prem- aur mere kapde..( slowly)
Heer- Bheg gaye thyyy issi liye badlna pada..!!
Prem- TUMNE  bADLE...!!! ( looking at Heer is big eyes, and looking at prem such expressions heer is falling for him even more.. and loving him)

 goes near to prem's face.. and slowly putting her hand around his Neck and  moving towards prem's cheek to his ear and prem is just standing Heer coming close to him by holding his breath. )

heer- HAH...!! ( wishpering) hamare bech ke fasle jo mith gaye kal raat ko... ( heer blushes and puts her head on his chest and hugs him... Prem is standing without hugging her in shock... after a while makes heer away from his body..)

Prem- Kyaaa...???? tum yeh.. Kya??? Nai.. yesa.. ... |( Prem feels Heer catching his collar of kurta and draging him to bathroom and closes the door..both are inside bathroom , prem sets heer's hand free from his color and says in anger) yeh kya kar rahi ho...?? chodo mujhe...!!! ( he is about to move but Heer comes in front and pushes him to wall of bathroom and goes near with loving eyes..)

Heer- chodne ke liye thodi pakad ke laye huu..aur yeh baat kal raat ko sochne chaheye thii tum ko... !!( winks at Prem 😉)

Prem irritation level increases - Heer tum...

Heer- Ssshhh...!!! ( puts her finger on his lips.. they both looks at each other's eyes..)

Diidddiii...!!! kaha hai aappp- Meher says...

Heer smiles looking at prem and says- bathroom mein huu meher..!!

Prem is scared hearing Meher voice and having sweat...

Thik hai di.. jaldi niche aaye...!! - meher...

Heer ( by smiling & wiping Prem sweat with her pallu)- haaa.. bass thodi deer...!!! ) prem is also looking at Heer now , lost in her touch..

meher Goes...

heer- Meher aa rahi thii kamre ki taraf.. thats why i dragged u to bathroom... !! Tumne Kya socha?

Prem ( trying to move from the corner of wall )- kuch nai... ( akwardly)

heer- ( pushing him back on wall again) jo tum soch rahe thyyy.. tum chaho toh woh hum pura kar sakte hai...!! ( smiles mischievously)

Prem ( again shockes hearing that )- leave me...!!! (prem moves out of the bathroom and after checking out no one in the corridor he runs to guest room and bath room, opens the Showers.. tries to remember wht happened in the night bt fails...!!! remembers all heer's behavior and  even gets more tensed..!! he gets down and sees ishan again there standing near heer and heer is talking to ishan with big smile on her face.. which makes prem angry again )

Heer sees Prem coming down and says.. - chale ishan...!!!
Prem looks at Heer...

Ishan - haa..!! chalo... aacha.. gaurav.. tum vi chalo hamare sath...

Prem- Mein..!! nai...

bauji- jawo na... jia ko vi kuch shopping kara do...

jia- haa.. chalo na...!!

Prem nods his head... and four of them moves..!!

They reaches to Shopping Mall.. bt Prem isnt happy looking at heer's and Ishan Frenship which they showed by joking in car by  laughing and talking about their old days..!!

heer and jia chooses some dresses while prem and ishan on Jens section. looking at some shirts... while Heer comes to ishan and says..

heer- IShan.. why dont u take this shirt...?? its very nice.. look... color will suit you..

Prem is now standing there hearing their caring caring talks with heavy heart..!!!

Ishan- Haa...!! bohut accha hai.. thik hai.. if u say.. i will...!!!

heer- Go and try once..!!

Ishan goes to trial room...


heer- tumre liye vi kuch select kardu... ( to prem )

Prem - ( angrily) no thanks... better u care for Ishan.. ur would to be husband...!! ( and moves from there)

heer smiles..!!!


Suddenly.. some Gundas comes and starts teasing Heer..


1st- Aree.. humare liye vi toh choose kardo na...!!

2nd- haa.. haa..!!!


heer is trying to move from there bt all comes and rounds her.. bt prem comes in front and says..

Prem- chod do issko...!!


1st- oh.. tum isske boy fren .. woh.. trail room me hone wala pati.. wahh..!! MAST HAI...|!!!


2nd- hume vi boyfren bana lo na...!!1


Prem becomes angry and starts bitting them.. Heer stands in corner looking at whole mazra.. and she is getting extremly tensed....

suddenly.. Prem feels pain in his back of HEAD... as some one HITS him with The Heavy stuffs...!! the scene around him starts rounding.. and by catching his head he falls.. down...
 and a back of him.. WE SEe a HAND WITH A STICK , smiling when Prem falls down...!!!


and the voice says... YEH LOH TUMARA PAISA...!!! gives to gundas... GOOD WORK...!!!


1st gunda..- thank you madam...!!!


They goes... and Here camara focuses on smiling FACE OF " HEERrr"


                                                          to be continued...

 


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