new SS -Hamara pyar ka Desh updated Chp 49/ pg 95

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey aall,

So finally i tried something to write that i always till now imagine.. agar yesa hota toh kya hota in kis desh.. mere dil ke sare scene i have written to irritate u guys...

please tolerate ok. 😉 and yeah feel free to complain as i know here there are many excellenet writers and creators. 😛 😛 😊

so here it goes...
This starts from the point heer knows gaurav is her prem, and prem confess his identity infront of heer. Heer tries alot to convenience Prem but fails to stop him. prem forces heer to tell family that he is gaurav not Prem but when heer refuse to do so.. here comes the drama

Chapter 1

Prem - heer.. pls baat ko samjh ne ki kosis karo? tum kyun itna jidh kar rahi ho?

Heer- ( with tears ) mein samjh ne ki kosis karu? mein jidhi hu? tum khud ko kyun nai dekhte..??? agar tume jana hii tha ttoh aaye kyun? rishab ke sath meri sadhi rook ka so called mahanta dekhane ki kya jarurat thi..??? if u wanted me to move on then u should have let me move on with rishab?

Prem - ( shouts ) HEEERRR..!!! bakwas band karo apna...

Heeer - Kyun..?/ chub raha hai? thik hi toh kaha na? aaj nai toh kal mujhe rishab se pyar ho hii jata sath rehene ke baad... adat ban jata woh meri.. uske sath meri family hoti... bache hote...


Prem- ( shouts in anger by holding her to the shoulder and cornering her in the wall between his hands in wall ) I said SHUT UP...!!! nai aana chahata tha mein.. par woh aacha nai tha.. samjhi tum.. ??? woh tumko kavi khus nai rakhta.. torch er karta jindagi bhar... !! yeh sab jaane ke baad u expect me to leave u on ur haal...!!! HAhhh???? mein chaha ta hu tum kisi aache insan ke sath...


Heer- BAAASSS..!!! isseee aageee nai... ( in wide eyes with anger ) ( by crying )Accha hota agar yesa hii karte... kam se kaam aajj yeh dukh toh jel na padta.. ek baar bardast kar ke uuth chuki thi tumse hamesa ke liye duur hone ka Gham se.. samjha liya tha maine aapne aap ko? haar chuki thi.. maar chuki thii andar see... !!! paar aab.. mein tumse judai bardast nai kar sakti... nai rehe sakti tum se duur.. nai hoga phir se mujh se samjhota.. !!! NAi kar sakti... nai karsakti ( gets down to the floor in broken down state.. cries hard )


Prem - ( takes her from floor and hugs tight ) I love u heer.. i love u ( cries ) both hugs...

Aaageee.. kya hoga.. ?? if u guys are interested then.. do tell me... i will continue...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start ...👏
please continue ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great...u started new SS🥳
chapter-1 was fabulous...👏
want to read more...pls do cont soon👍🏼
add pls add me in ur PM list also..if have one😳
keep writing 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

wow great...u started new SS🥳
chapter-1 was fabulous...👏
want to read more...pls do cont soon👍🏼
add pls add me in ur PM list also..if have one😳
keep writing 🤗



Thanks Kiran.. but sorry.. i i will update only.. i m nt familiar with Pm process much. so..

and i am waiting for ur update of two FF.. soon please and PREMEER MORE PLEASE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohooo...someone finally showing her talent 😃 you must continue. we'll be able to know how much same imagination we all have 😳 all the best


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti



Thanks Kiran.. but sorry.. i i will update only.. i m nt familiar with Pm process much. so..

and i am waiting for ur update of two FF.. soon please and PREMEER MORE PLEASE

i'll try my best to update soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeermania

ohooo...someone finally showing her talent 😃 you must continue. we'll be able to know how much same imagination we all have 😳 all the best





Thanks Muna.. and thanks for Inspiring me to write.. hahahh.. after u I started.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow great start

i really love it 😳

plzzz continue

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awsum,plz plz plz countinue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG..u started a new ss...
good start sanju...
we are already aware abt ur imaginations through our fb..😉.now i cant wait to read more..
and should i say separately?? add me ur pm list..😈

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