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Posted: 12 years ago
Really fab update👏...heer wantedly injured prem😕😕...update asap cant be in suspense for long time...plz do it fast...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 13

Here Prem Opens the eyes..!!! HE is in hospital, with bandage in HEad. He sees Ishan in front of him.

Ishan- How are u feeling Now?

Prem tries to get up...!!!

Ishan- aaree... aram se...!! tum kamjor ho...!!!

Prem- No i m fine...!!!
heer and jia enters the room..!

Jia- gaurav.. u ok.. ( going near)
heer somewht feels bad seeing jia near him...!!

prem-Ya i m fine...!!!

they all goes to Home and when all asked they say the reality...!!

In night..!!!

Prem is resting on the room..!! heer comes with Soup in hand..!!!

heer- Yeh soup pee loh...!!!

Prem- No.. i wont have .. i m fine..!!

heer- zid maat karo...!! pee loh..!! jaldi se pee loh.. mujhe niche mehendi lagane jana hai..!! .. (pauses...) ISHAN KI NAAM Ki...???

Prem feels pain for sure... and says...\

Prem-Congratulations...!!! Better u nt waste time after me...!! go... tumare hath uutaule ho rahe honge to write his name on ur hand and with that hand erase my name from ur hand...!!

heer-( quickly ) WOH TOH KAR DIYA...????

Prem shocked to hear...!!!

heer- I mean...!! ummm..!! soup pee loh plese... kamzori ho jaye gi...!!!

Prem - meine kaha na,.. nai pee na...!!!

heer strongly turns prem face towards her with anger in eyes...

heer- Pee loh...!!!


she forwards the spoon to his mouth and He takes a sip looking at her eyes..and he completes the soup with heer's hand only..., prem slowly wipes Prem's mouth's corner and they are having continuous Eye lock...!!! Heer is wiping his mouth bt slowly slowly heading towards prem's lips.. and prem is holding her Breath...!! Their lips are inches Away... when suddenly a glass besides prem drops with prem's hand and they come in sense..!! Prem looks hear and There bt when HE sees heer again then Find she is staring at Him with tears in Eyes...!! then suddenly Heer Hugs Prem...!!! and Prem is there sitting there with closed eyes..!! heer slowly wispers... " I M SORRY" !! Prem hears it and little confused why she says so... bt before he could ask her.. she rans out of the Room..!!

Prem is staring at door with tears in eyes...!!!

Then Mean while... jia comes to the room fuming in anger..!!! Prem asks her whts the matter..??

Jia- kuch nai..???
Prem- bolo na? itne gusse me kyun ho?
Jia- woh heer samjh ti kya hai aapne aap ko?
Prem- ( shocked) KYA????? Tum yeh kya?
Jia- tumare liye woh soup kyun leke aayi.. kya dekhana chahati hai woh..??

Prem - Jia...????? Please stop...!!!

Jia-.. tume kuch nai pata Prem..?? tume pata hai.. tumare saar pe kisne maara???

Prem- Kisne.?

Jia- HEER NE?

Prem- JUst shut up jia? wht rubbish u are talking? tume pata hai kya kehe rahi ho???

Jia- haa..!! pata hai mujhe...?? kyun ki meine khud aapni aakho se dekha.. she hited u with stick and gave monye to that Guundas...!!!

Prem- ( shouts) - JIA? just shut up./. alright???? U better stay on ur limit..!!

jia brings tears in Eyes..!1 and moves from their crying..!!!

Prem in thought.. and out the room.. heer Hears Their Convo... and gets scared knowing JIA SAW HER HIITING PREm..!!!

Episod ends...!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
pls cont soon
eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update ...👏
waiting for the next update ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...

eagerly waiting for next😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is small update 😒
this jia is irritating 👎🏼
waiting for next one sanju. give it soon 😊 ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update😊😊 ... ab kahi is prem kahani mei jia na koi problem create kr de...😊
Edited by chhanchan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice storyy...
sie to read next updatee
plssdont make difference between heer and prem...
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 14

Heer Goes to Terrace where Jia is standing...

Heer- Jia...!!!

Jia turns around...

heer- dekho Jia... tum galat samjh rahi ho?

Jia- kya galat samjh rahi huu heer...??? Kya meine jo dekha woh galat tha? kya tumne prem ko nai maara?

Heer- haa...!! maara meine uusko.. lekin...

Jia- thats it... go and say this to Prem... he thinks i m lying him... chalo .. jake prem ko kaho ( catches heer hand and tries to drag her bt heer dont move and sets her hand free.. )

heer- Jia.. stop It..!! And why do u care Prem isnt beleiving u? huh? kya farak padta hai tumko woh tumari baat mane ya na mane...?? yeh prem aur mere bech ki baat hai.. so u better dont interfair... baas yeho bolne aayi thi...

Jia- Ji nai...!!! ( heer stops from walking and looks behind ) Yeh mere aur prem ki bech ki baat hai... so u better clears this... and yes, mujhe farak padta hai... !!!! kyun ki mein usse pyar karti hu...

heer is shocked...!!!

Jia- pyar karti huu uss din se... jis din he saved my mother, i ove his siplicitty, i love his heart.. i love him. aur bhagwan ne uuse mere liye banaya hai heer.. kal ko tumari Ishan ke sath sadhi ho jaye gi.. uuske baad srif mein aur prem... Huim dono sath rahenge .. khus.. bohut khus...

Then There.. JIA FEELS SLAP ON HER FACE...!!!

heer- ( in anger ) just shut Up.. Yhe khwab dekhna Baand kardo... COz prem Merta tha.. merta hai.. aur hamesa mera hii rahe ga... SAMJHi...!!!! and tumhe toh mein aavi iss ghar se nikal ti hu... (Catches her hand and drags her and keep saying ) mere prem pe buri nazar dalogi tum???? while they are moving... Jia is about to fall bt prem catches her and in a sec Heer Sees Jia in Prem's arm...

Prem ( in anger ) Yhe kya kar rahi ho Heer...!?? wht sort of behaviour is this?? Jia tum thik ho na...??

Jia- ( crying...) HEer is taking me out of house for no reason and even slapped me ( shows her red cheek)

prem- Tum yeh...?? Heer.. tum kaise?


heer- WHt? meri taraf kyun dekh rahe ho yese...??? Ask her? pucho uuse...?? iisne mujhe se kya kaha? how dare she talks to me like that yeh iss ghar mein nai rahe gi...??? (Tries to take Jia away from Prem's Grip which he is holding her shoulder.. )

Prem ( catches Heer's hand and pushes her away of Jia ) - Heerrr...??? ( shouts) band karo yeh sab... Why do u hav such problem with Hre?

heer- Iisne kaha ki...??

Jia- Haa.. meine Kaha ki... Heer ne tume Kal mara...??? She hitted u prem

Prem- Jia please... i said na... yeh sab bakwas maat karo...

Heer stands there with fear now..

Jia- Mien bakwas nai kar rahi hu... pucho iise... samne khadi hai tumari.. ask her.. if m lying...???

Prem looks at heer who is looking down ward with fear wala expression... Prem goes near and ask

Prem - Chup Kyun khadi ho..??? bolo jia se.. that she have mis understood... U cant hit me...?? bolo?

heer is silent and tears flowed... which made prem understand wht she meant... Prem is shattered with her that expression and silent..

Prem ( tear flows)- isska matlab? tumne... mujhe..??? ( puts his hand on his head) heer...!??? Kyun????

heer tries to move from there witout answering... bt Prem catchs her hand...

Prem- yese Nai... Pehele mere sawal ka jawab do... Kyun Maara Mujhe..?? ( in anger.. grabs her shoulder and brings her near )

heer - ( crying, scared and hardly voice is coming out ) - woh.. woh... Galti se lag gaya...!!!

Prem- JHOOOT ( shouts.. )

heer- Nai .. sach hai,...

Prem- Toh khawo meri kasam.. srif galti se laga...!!!

heers looks at Prem with BIG teary eyes and pulls her hand out of his head... Prem is shattered now... tears are flwoing from his eyes...

Prem- Tumne.. Mujhe...?? Kyun... KYun ?? ( shouts )

Jia- Mein bata ti hu.. Kyun ki woh tumse badla lena chahari thii coz tumne uusko chod diya...!! she felt u are hurting her.. so iss ka badla Heer ne yese liya.. tume gundo se peetwaya.. khud tumare saar pe waar kiya aur tume yesi halat me dekh ke.. bohut khusi mili iisko...?? aur aacha baane ke liye.. she is pretending to take care of U...?? Kyun HEER sahi kaha na.. meine...??

Heer- ( in ager ) just shut up. bakwas baand karo aapna... . yeh sab tumari waje se hua hai... U just go to heelll ... ( pushes Jia in anger and jia falls down...and shouts in pain..." aahhh ")

Prem - ( SHOUTS) HEERrr...!!! ( slaps Heer hard on CHEEK )

heer is about to fall o n floor with the slap bt is hold by strong arm of Ishan...!!!
Prem sees heer in ishan ARms...!!! heer is crying by hugging him.. and he is looking at Prem with anger in eyes... Ishan moves forward... and Grabs Prem's collar..???


Iishan- HOw dare u? how dare u slap ny Heer???

Prem ( gets even more angry hearing MY HEER )- Just leave me Ishan... !! u stay on ur limits...

Ishan- u will teach me limits who is hitting aGAL...

Prem- Just shit up.. Just stay away... i can do anything i want... She is Myyy... ( he pauses... ) ( heer looks at prem with tears _)

Ishan- SHE IS MY FINACEE AN WOULD TO BE WIFE... How dare U...??? ( ishan Hits Prem in Cheek with his fist)

Prem Gets Angy and Gets him back...

By seeing the fight Heer and Jia moves Forward and seperates them...

heer- Ishan.. chodo please... stoip it...
Isha- How dare he hits u...?? ( cups heer's face and wipes her tears.. ) u ok na...???

Prem is seeing their sweet romance with all pain of world with in him...

heer- Please chalo yaha se.. please... ( heer looks at Prem and Jia who are standing togehe and catched ishan hand and Goes down. IShan moving in anger by giving angry look to Prem )

Prem Kneels down in Pain ... and starts crying hard... in heart break..!!!

Jia tries to console Him bt that goes in vain since he is on the SEA of PAIN now...!!!!

KISSS DESH ME HAI MERA DIIilll... NAZRE DUNDHE SAHIlll...!!!!

Episod Ends...!!!

PS- Kuch jyada Dram ho gaya na aaj...!! eehhehhhehe.. forgive...!!

Edited by luv.Harshiti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lol...i was laughing all the time when i was reading ...dunno why?🤣...i think heer did all these to prove that he does nt have any disease...awesum update👏👏👏...next update asap...
Edited by Neha12345xxx - 12 years ago

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