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Posted: 12 years ago
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here goes the next chapter.

Chapter - 9.

In the night... Prem is standing near the window.. staring at moon. in time bet he keeps looking at watch which indicated 10 pm but still Heer hadn't arrived. He was feeling very low with the feeling that he can't even call HIS HEER with HAQ..!!! His thought is interrupt by the car down his house.
he looks down.

isHAN COMES out the car... and goes to passenger seat , opens the door, bends little bit.. and takes Heer on his arm... ( prem looking at it with surprised and confused look)

he takes her and moves inside the home..Prem quickly runs out of his room and stands near by stares when he sees.. Ishan entering to Heer's room carrying her in arm... and .. DHAKKK( door closed) PRem comes in sense.. he is now extremely tensed... he keeps standing there thinking, puzzled. and in pain..

He hears door opening sound.. and quick ly hides behind the pilliar... and sees..

Ishan- hahhaah...!!!!! uuhhhooo uuuhoo..!! hehehehe ..!!!

heer- (Laughing..!!!) Bohut hogaya...!! JAwo.. avii... good night..!!

Ishan- good night,,,!!! ( ishan leaves)

Prem looking at that scene with... ... ...😭 he becomes silent and moves towards terrace...!! tear drops down... !!!

he looks aside when he feels the swing being moving .. Heer is sitting besides her..!!

They look at each other for a while when prem gets up and goes little far away...

Heer ( by sitting only) - SOWYE NAI ABB TAK???

Prem- ( without turning ) nind nai aa rahi.. tum jawo.. thak gayi hogi na..???

Heer- nai..!! thaki nai...!! baas khuli hawa lene aaye thii yaha..

Prem- haaa..!!! bilkull.. khule aasman me jo ho aaj kal tum..!!!

Heer- kya???

Prem- kuch nai...( about to go down bt heer catched his hand, prem looks down his hand by feeling heer's catch)

Heer- Ishan se mile thyeee subha ko???

prem - ( in anger and lil louder voice) mujhe uuse milne ka sauk nai hai...!!1 nai hii uuske sath time spend karne ka sauk hai...!!!! mein jogging ke liye gaya tha... wohi aaya tha woh..!!!

Heer- aahca... ( clamly) woh... chahata hai ki sadhi iss hafte ke andar woh.. coz he will be going to london back

PREM IN SHOCK.. AND TENSED NOW...

Prem- Tum kya chahati ho?

heer gets up in tears - kyun? tume farak padta hai mere kuch chahane se..??

Prem- bilkul ..!! kyun wohi ho raha hai na.. jo tum chaha ti thii..??

Heer- (shouts ) PREM...!!111 yeh kya kehe rahe ho...?? tum hii chaha te thee na ki yeh sadhi ho...

Prem- ( shouts back) ha chaha ta tha...lekin issme tum jyada khus lagti ho.. because...u know him so well and he too.. so why to get late in getting married.. karlo sa

Heer becomes shock hearing that...!! tears starts flowing.

Heer- Thik hai...!! (wiping her tears) mein bauji se baat karti hyu... khatam kar hii dete hai inn sab ko...!!!! uuske baad tum aa jad...!!!

Prem closes his eyes in it and hot water from his eyes flows down... !!

Hers starts moving slowly.. whne prem notices she is walking un easily...!!! he goes near and ask " are u ok.." and sees bandage in heers feet and ask- yeh kya hua?

Heer lokks back him in anger- Haa.. thik hu... meri chinta karne ki jarurat nai hai...!!! she starts moving slowly.. bt suddenly she feels she is in air in prem's arm...

Prem looks straight her eyes and heer too dont misses to go deep down... slowly slowly prem starts moving and heer continuously looking at him with love and so do prem... Prem reaches heer's room.. puts her down in bed ( both are still lost in each others eyes) bt wen he stands to get up.. heer's bagles stucks in prem kurtha.

they have long eye staring., prem is undoing the toggle of her bangle and his kurtha.. then heer slowly starts touching Prem cheeks.. with her both hand.. Prem closes his eyes by sensing her touch.. he little aside his head and kisses her plam.. heer smiles on it.. then PREm catches her hand.. puts her bangle little asides and kisses on her wrist.. Heer takes big breath in it and starts blushing and smiling. prem goes little far by kissing near her elbow, her shoulder .. he roams his breath in heer's cheek which makes heer lost in dream world... she looks up prem and prem on her lips... prem slowly moves downward to touch th lips..Heer is lowering her eyes as prem moving towards her... they are now half inch far away wher they can feel each other hot and fast breathe in the uper lips... Here prem is just going to catch her lips The phone rings " tring tring." both of them comes in sense.. prem quickly gets up.. and Heer is just lying down with surprised eyes.. her hands are till in same position which she quickly puts down and gets up and sits in bed.. she keeps her hair aside the ears looking downward in akward.. prem is also akward.. looks here and there except heer and gets out of the room bt Stops before closing the Door when he hears " HAAA ISHAN" in heer's voice.. as she picks up the phone...!!!

He looks back to heer.. heer is also looking at him and says " soone hii jarahi thi.. good night"

Prem looks forward and comes out of room and closes the door .

he is standing there with little bit nervousness and pain as well. he slowly moves towards his room re calling the closest moment they had few min before..!!!


Episod ends..




Edited by luv.Harshiti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
awesome update sanju
loved premeer's lil romantic session
pls cont cont soon
thanx for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
lovely update ...👏
update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: kiran_28

awesome update sanju

loved premeer's lil romantic session
pls cont cont soon
thanx for the update



😭 😭 😭 i m dying for ur update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
amazig update ...loved it
please update soon ...
thanks for the update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti



😭 😭 😭 i m dying for ur update..

updated 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
wow awesum👏👏👏...ph scene was fab👏...this ishan fellow😡😡...next update asap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

amazig update ...loved it

premeer scene so romantic ...

please update soon ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Plss update ur ff plss
Waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90



premeer moment omg!! what to do about this ishaan? think something or may be you have thought already 😆 waiting to read more and more. well done 👏 ❤️

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