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naina

@naina927

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

omg... so thats why virat married manvi...oops manal...

i am falling in love with this yaar... u are making me impatient to know what will happen next...

this virat is very different... very possessive at tyms, at times he is rude, at times sweet, at times irrestible... i am loving it... thanks for the upcoming pm... :) :)

really loved this ot the core...

'Yes, I made a bet with the guys to prove to them that you will fall in love with me in the next 30 days. Yes, it was stupid. Yes, I like you and no I will not let you go', he huskily replied. He had followed with the promise he made to her till now. She looked up at the clock hanging on the wall- a few more minutes and he would be home again. Treating her like a piece of furniture- wanting to possess her and break her down. 'That's why he married me because he couldn't take that a girl rejected him. He married me to break me down. That's why I am here- as Virat's Akhtar's legally wedded wife- his personal property. When he'll have enough of me- he'll disown me. He'll be back to show me my place'.

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SNTG

@SNTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

loved , loved , loved ur update...u r a fabulous writter, whenever i read it ,i feel it means i feel it real...u r doing an awesome job...do update quick.take care

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SNTG

@SNTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

and yes really liked the name manal too...but maanvi ki aadat hoo gayi hai.lol...u have started the story and u kept her name manal sooo,mannu is best will consider as maanvi.

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Huma

@Huma0301

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

at the begining i was really confused if it was a flashback or not bt the last paragraph knocked all the sense in me 😆n that made me feel dead sorry for manal - cnt believe virat did it all for a bet bt he's really falllen for her nw??? n maybe things myt get better between them gradually i love the way described manvi in one of the paragraphs n her ignoring virat is really good - really love manal's character in ehre she's quite bt strong in a way thanx a lot for the update n the pm 😊

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Aenna

@Aenna

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Wat shud i say yr ur update is just fabulousss...
. i mean as u show dere first meeting till now nd how manvi feels about virat
i mean she thinks he had married her only to use her.
i hope all her feelings for virat change nd she start luving him trusting him . nd i really wana no dat do virat really luv her. yeah i no fir all dis i hv to wait for future updates. plzzz update asap... 😊

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Nandita

@Nandita217

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Wow!! What an amazing update 😃
Its awesome!!! Cant wait to know that how love will blossom between them 😃
Its fabulous...do update soon!!

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Crazyvirmanfan

@Crazyvirmanfan

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

I was quite confused at the beginning of the flash back but then i skimmed through and towards the end understoof everything :) But really good chapter :) Virat and manvi's thinking are so different, i think virat genuinely won't leave manvi. Great work! :) Thanks for the pm :)

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Hi Elenor,

Beautiful update. Manal's memories of their first meeting were enchanting and captivating. They had a thing between them from the very first moment. Manal' denial of the breath taking presence of Virat intrigued him and attracted him to her.

On the other hand she herself was denying her own need and demand for him. She is delusional about him and her own desires. True that he made a wrong move by betting with his friends but I guess by now he was more than interested in her as he said,

'Yes, I made a bet with the guys to prove to them that you will fall in love with me in the next 30 days. Yes, it was stupid. Yes, I like you and no I will not let you go'.

I think she still misunderstood him as she thought that he married her to take revenge and break her down. She is misjudging him because of her personal experience.

You didn't Pm me but thank you for such a lovely update🤗.

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rida12ka4

@rida12ka4

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

👏amazing yaar and thanks for the pm i loved it pm me when u update next😃

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esha

@bunny007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

unres :)

omggg... what a dhamakedaar update 😉

wonderful once again elenor... loved it :) hmmm so this is the back story and this is the reason for virat marrying mannu 😛

'Yes, I made a bet with the guys to prove to them that you will fall in love with me in the next 30 days. Yes, it was stupid. Yes, I like you and no I will not let you go', he huskily replied.

guess he really loves her to get married to her and prove her wrong that he actually loves her... awww 😳 story is getting really interesting now elenor loving it... 😃

keep up the great work... 👏

Edited by hiri-luv-nishal - 12 years ago