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avika

@avika26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

i know i am taking tym but will comment soon...i am pthinking wat to comment

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missmystic

@missmystic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Fabulous update elena
So virat married manvi due to a bet
Great flashback and i loved the descriptions you used
Cant wait to read how the two fall for each other
Thanx for the pm :)

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Kirti

@kirti.taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

elena..yr i mean how...nhi yrr plzz...aj toh u have to tell me...frm where you got this level's writing skill...yr me toh becoming ur FAN..nhi nhi ...AIR CONDITIONER
yr firstly Humsafar..TTOML...VENICE...
n this mahoor toh just awsome yr...
n ya i also doesn't relate wid mahoor...manvi or mannu wud be appropriate...
n i like our viru's character n his sirname too...AKHTER...
eagerly waiting for that part of falshback wen he realised his feelingd for mannu..
n m lil confused in d last 3 paragrphs...
i mean how n when he started to tok to her n wen tat bet took place???

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MaebyFunke

@MaebyFunke

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

I read all the parts in one go and it was brilliant. Your story sucked me in, it flowed really well! Virat's attitude and Manvi's cold treatment...Interesting! And his reason for marrying her, ego is playing its role here.

I have kissed you before and I don't plan on stopping now because we are married', I was like that's the spirit man lol.

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SS4MaNan

@SS4MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Dear Elena

hey im new to dis forum.new in sense ive been for a while but im not dat of a intractive person.two days ago i came across u work n trust me ive almost read all ur work on IF. now im so addicted to ur stories especially all ur os\ss\ff on VIRMAN. but im not able to access ur ATM,n,HUMSAFAR! i really wanna read those two.now da show sucks bigtime n trust me its only ur writing dat keeps virman alive for me.plese help me.plese plese pretty plese.show some mercy on dis poor soul.who is completely addicted to ur work 😭😭.

thanks to u ive started watching ZGH its very nice.😊😊

p.s ur TTOML is just simply awesome.👍🏼

p.s.s sorry im not dat expressive so kindly bare my lame post😒

Edited by sindhu4karanika - 12 years ago

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SNTG

@SNTG

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

elena r u going to update today...waitinggg

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: SNTG
elena r u going to update today...waitinggg

Will be updating on Sunday-

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Pyaasi Chudail

@PyaasiChudail69

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Plz chck the unres at pg 14

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avika

@avika26

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Oh yipee bt mera comment toh abhi baki h already read it 4 time pata nai or kitte bar padungi. .waise two obivious thing wanna knw. .when he said mein tumse mohbbat karta hu. .n flashback of der frndshp day. .n y virat frnds challenged him. .and like manvi pov on different point of past want virat pov too n he want her 4 life tym or nt? 4 nw des r my queries. .pls do rply. .n excited 4 next update