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Wow it was lovely why dont u conttinue this i am sure manviii realising love and then confessing it would be lovely by the way its just a suggesion 😛

Superb work dear !!!!!
very nicely written ,
a big fan of your writings ,and its always a pleasure to read your works .
good job dear .

Hey, I love ZGH also. Nice to know that somebody also likes that show.
Now, coming to the OS, let me just say you have a god given talent when it comes to writing. I loved the imagery and how you keep the reader hungry for more. When I read any of your works (Guilty as charged of not commenting but I will go back and comment on the other works too) I always have to read them 2 or more times cause they are that good!
Anyways, keep writing this OS and all your other works because i will always read them!
Marissa
P.S Could you please give me the link for Venice.

Also could you please add me to your PM list. I would love to read your new pieces. Thank You! :)

Awesome OS...!Loved it, Specially Virat here and their names..m a muslim so like the selection of name here...since u have asked ATM or an adaptation of ZGH...i would go with ZGH...😃...Love all your stories..Thanks for the PM~!

hey elena...this time i would like to say how good it was... but struggling with words. it was wonderful...mmm...u asked me to choose between ZGH and ATM...i dont know about ZGH...i never heard before...If u write EHMMBH season2 i would love to read that one also...By this u can guess my answer...i like to read your stories...thanks for the pm and take care.

omggg... u watch zindagi gulzar hai too... omg me and ma cousins also love that show... its awsome...

I loved this Elena! But I could only imagine Zaroon and Kashaf and not VirMan here because the character sketch was of those two na 😆 I am watching the show and simply loving these two together. Couldn't connect VirMan to the roles though, kept seeing ZK and from Zaroon Kashaf pov, this was really reallyyy HOT!! ☺️☺️ Now how I wish paki shows were this bold *fans self* 😆 I can so imagine these two like this 😳 Anyway other then the scene that so obviously caught my attention, I really liked your understanding of the characters.. It was good reading about her feelings for him, I could relate that yes Kashaf would think like this only about him and he would be this bold around her.. Good work yaar! If you have written more on Zaroon and Kashaf do tell me!

Originally posted by: SongsOf_Silence

I loved this Elena! But I could only imagine Zaroon and Kashaf and not VirMan here because the character sketch was of those two na 😆 I am watching the show and simply loving these two together. Couldn't connect VirMan to the roles though, kept seeing ZK and from Zaroon Kashaf pov, this was really reallyyy HOT!! ☺️☺️ Now how I wish paki shows were this bold *fans self* 😆 I can so imagine these two like this 😳 Anyway other then the scene that so obviously caught my attention, I really liked your understanding of the characters.. It was good reading about her feelings for him, I could relate that yes Kashaf would think like this only about him and he would be this bold around her.. Good work yaar! If you have written more on Zaroon and Kashaf do tell me!

Hiba