Swaron SS:Missing Life...[Chap 11 Pg 70]

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

Aww cute nd lovey dovey update..
Loved it.

P.s. Pls dnt stop writing on swaron everyone leaving swaron writing ..

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Chapter 8B n 9
As usual I just loved the update.These two aww they are just adorable.
Sharon blush after remembering their small love making session n the way she hide her blush by buried her face in his chest was soo adorable.
Their convo was really cute.Its a dream to see swaron like this<3.
Swayam share his insecurities with sharon.N sharon's reaction show that she feel guilty for whatever she did with swayam.
Lol saree part was amusing.Now swayam have to update his Sharoncyclopedia every day..:pWell I would love to read about sharon wearing saree n swayam drooling over her in next few updates..:p
Loved it
Waiting for next part

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#333

both update were awesome one please update da next one
thanx for pm

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Wow Megs, itz ssooo romantic - u know, jab main tumhare updates padthi hun, iss SS ke, toh I always think ki kitna gentlely handle kia hai tumne in dono characters ko, I mean both of them u have immersed in luv and given them a mutual respect for each other's minutest feelings - so so wish ki yeh baat hame sach mein dekhne ko milti...this lovey-dovey SwaRon😳

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

AMAZING

i don't read swaron as often as kriyaansh bt i love dis one

SWARON were cute

update soon

Guyz do check out SMILEYSIMI'S SS kriyaansh swaron:u'll love it
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3329469

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poonam

@shan.ss

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

awesome ss

love it😃

update soon

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Hey di 🤗

Surprised!!!...you should be...even me to surprised...😆
Ohk so finally ...finally...finally m here to comment on this awesomely beautiful Fanfic!!!

Missing Life
as title says all...two souls madly in love...missing life in each others absence.

prt-1

Ohk...so here's fairytale starts😉...distance in love surely changes the person in love...true very true...and here its proving much more than that...the arrogant..egoistic...Diva turns o a love struck girl...ohhh...m so loving it...shorons this side is so rare to see ...thanks to you for giving us this HOPELESSLY MAD IN LOVE girl.

This was surely a fairytale for our majnu boy...whose journey starts from Mumbai to shimla ...to meet his LIFE...his LOVE!!!
Sharon planned everything splendidly...impressive.

I loved everything in this chap right from the beginning...her planning to meet him and spending some quality time alone!!!

you penned everything so well, i could visualize as if all happening in front of my eyes...awesome di.

prt-2

Swaron finally...finally in each others embrace...WOW!!!
two incomplete souls are complete in each others arms...perfectly picturized.

It was one of the best confession i have ever read...it was just superbly written no hurry ...everything is so pleasantly described ...and the kiss...awesome...kisse pata tha sharon swayum ko surprses nai shocks degi...hahaha...but all in aal it was amzing update...!!!

Luv u
Urs Oye😉😊

P.s- will give my comments soon on remaining update😛...have to go now!!

Edited by OceanicRockStar - 12 years ago

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Afshan Yasmeen

@Afshan9

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

RES

UNRES

First of all a lovely kiss... muuuaaahhh... and lots of hugs...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 to my dear friend MEGHA...

I don't want to make our relation formal by saying SORRY or THANQ...

But indeed I'm feeling guilty for not commenting on your SwaRon FF: Missing Life earlier... And I understand what sort of feeling a writer may get after all his efforts are put on something and is least appreciated for the efforts... So here I'm commenting to your FF, hope U'll not feel sad after reading it...

As I got introduced to SwaRon Dreamland on IF through our common friend Deepika recently, until then I wasn't aware of the great writers and their write ups on SwaRon... It was through her and other common friends that I got introduced to U as a friend and U informed me about your write up, SwaRon FF: Missing Life...

It was mean of me that as U forwarded the link of your FF, I read it in one go but did not comment on it... The reason behind not commenting was that I wanted it to be big and Special as your work...

So hope I'm not distracting U or boring U from my silly talks...

And now coming to the post...

The violet color is my view on your write up and golden color is the extract from your write up which touched my heart most...

NOTE: The comment will be Chapter wise...

SwaRon define the TRUE, ETERNAL, PIOUS, DIVINE LOVE... No words can define the depth of SwaRon. It's my honor to be able to go through ur write up on SwaRon... Your story started at a point when Sharon left for Delhi after the DANCE CAMP, and now it's 2 months since she went.

U described a new side of SwaRon through the FF... Loved it to the core...

CHAPTER 1:

This chapter completely portrayed Swayam's impatience to meet his LOVE, his LIFE, Sharon after 2 long months. The way U expressed his hidden desires of meeting Sharon eagerly was out of this world. It was mind blowing.

It is said distance makes your love grow. And in their case, it surely was proving to be true.

Definitely distance makes TRUE love grow. This distance plays a key role in deciding whether the emotion U feel for some other person is TRUE love or not. And indeed in SwaRon's case it proved that distance made the TRUE LOVE grow more and more between SwaRon.

Over this one month of staying away, Sharon never told him "missing you", rather she would always tell him "i'm missing life!"

Loved that finally Sharon accepted Swayam as her Life, and specified it in her mails too. These small gestures make a relation stronger by the passing time.

Two hearts were beating at supersonic speed. Both were dying to meet their life, their heartbeat.

A heart is incomplete without it's beats and vice verse.

All in all this chapter described the feelings of SwaRon clearly.

For now I commented on 1st chapter. Rest I'll edit very sooner..

Love Megha...❤️

Edited by Afshan9 - 12 years ago