Swaron SS:Missing Life...[Chap 11 Pg 70]

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Deepika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

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Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago

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paro1311

@paro1311

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

awww this was a really sweet update... i like how u take care of small details which makes the whole scene more real and relatable!! its leaves a clear image while reading..😊

update soon!

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

hey megha...

first of all thank u for the pm..

and the story is amaziing... igenerally dont read ff's becozz they are so addictin.. and due to my schedule. it gets difficult...

but my dear.. you've written an awsome ff.. totally swaronish.. i loved each and every chap. ... its so romantic and sharon doing thingz and taking initiatives even makes it more special... as 've already read this.. it turns out that u've got a new reader.. and i'll surely try to keep up with your ff's... is it the only one or you have more?? and i'll surely comment after reading.. but point is whenevr i read.. so thanx.. dear

loads of love

aditi

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Awesome update
It was such a adorable update.As I said earlier I went in swaron land whenever I read the updates of this ss.
Aww They are soo freaking adorable.
Swayam playing with sharon's hair n then their brush romance lol.
Loved their povs in bathroom that how much content they feel to have them in each other life
Ah swayam must be looking hot in wet hair
"Sharon: u are such a baccha!
Swayam looked at her and cuddled
her.
Swayam: your baccha!"
Aww it was super duper cute
Loved it
Waiting for next part
Update it soon

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

mehha dii wonderfuly penned down, i loved it. Aw sharon is so thoughtful and their love so tender and pure. Staying togehter has brought them so close to each other.. you have got a beautiful way of playing with the words megha dii, superbly done, it is a treat to read your updates. jal;di next part update karo ji

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

lovely update!!
Sworon admirg each other..

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Megs sorry yaar thoda late hun...I luvd it as always, so much sensuality and ur narration is like watching a motion picture where every minute detail is taken note of - padhne se zyaada visual experience lagta hai...6b has a purely fairytale touch to it...I mean aisa lagaa its too gud to b true...😊 which is always welcome for SwaRon

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

Hey when r u planning to update

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Megha

@megsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: swaronamit
Hey when r u planning to update

hey!

abhi time haii 😊

60 likes hone baaki hai 😉

in the meanwhile read my new os - i can see through you 😊

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#270

These are that kind of update where you can not pick what you liked.. its kind more of a visual treat cause as you read , you visualise more😊 !!! so one can just enjoy reading it ...

Loved it completely ...😳

Happy to see a Happy and content swayam here . Finally sharon has come out of her shell and enjoying life at it is without any pretension !!!!