OS-And the award goes to...last part-pg14,nov.29 - Page 15

Originally posted by: gudmeet

It was hillarious dear

how do u get such mind blowing ideas dear

superb

the party decor, the menu and the temple scenes were amazing

i was laughing like a maniac reading abt the second serving of samosas.

 

how beautifully u connected all of them

u did not miss using their peculiar habits and even putul's tonsilitis

👏

 

and how dare maan of beauty say anything against the writings of my dear writer palindrome

 

and i somewhat agree with maan of mein tera hero

yes ur updates LOOKS like an essay

but only look wise not content wise

look wise because there are not enough space between dialogues of characters and when u change para ( i have told u earlier also )

 

and though u use simple words but the contents of ur writing are even better than some establisehed writers

 

though some writers use sophisticated words or phrases but for me all these are just outer beauty and the real beauty of any story is its content and how well u convey it to ur readers.

sometimes it happens that with too much nice words or complicated sentences , readers dont even understand what the writer is trying to say

but ur simple language conveys it so well

every body loves the innocence of a child more than the manipulative and complicated adults

u urself had very beautifully highlighted the importance of inner beauty over outer beauty in ur story BEAUTY

and i think all those comparisons of inner and outer beauty are applicable for ur writing skills

do u get what i am trying to say dear

pls stop underestimating ur writing skills dear

u have immense potential as writer

mere simple language or words can't mar the beauty of ur wonderful writing dear

 

 

 

Originally posted by: palindrome

First of all..

very glad to see you back..😊

I really missed you.....

Thank you so much for this encouraging comment..I completely understand what you said..In other way,whatever you said was "What" i have learned after joining IF...Words should touch reader's heart,it does not matter whether they are simple or sophisticated..

love you alot...😊

ps-i would take care of para thing in future...sorry for inconvenience...