"Tum Mujhe Yun bhula na paoge" NEW update part 6 , Nov 27 page 17 - Page 5

Posted: 2 years ago

part 4

So it was him who set up an appointment for her.

Posted: 2 years ago

hope you and your family are well

appreciate the update


Part 4

splendid update.... nicely written

at least Maan feels guilty for what he said

he also is restless but does not know why

her face haunts him

Maan was really mean to Geet and hurt her

oh no Geet had to go to the hospital

dadi's concerned is justified

glad that she insisted that Geet stay at KM

of cos Geet is worried about Maan

liked that dadi knows Geet is perfect for Maan

now Maan and Geet will be seeing each other frequently

will this bring them closer?

great that Maan told Pinky to be with Geet

update soon 

Posted: 2 years ago

Thank you so much for Updating


really appreciate it 


Part 4


Tensed and so Awesome Update


Maan now regrets his words spoken to Geet

about the unborn baby 

while Geet needs to concentrate more on her pregnancy and

stop stressing is more concerned about Maan's health 

so Dadi wants both Maan and Geet staying in KM

I do wonder what will be Maan's reactions 

Posted: 2 years ago
Originally posted by coderlady


part 2

She lost her first baby. Was it Maan's?

coderlady please read part 2 it will answer your questions 

Posted: 2 years ago

Pls carry on writing i cant wait to know about maan reaction when he knows hes going to be afather

Posted: 2 years ago

Hi there! 

do post Part 5, thanks 

Posted: 2 years ago

Interesting story, would like to read more.. 

Posted: 2 years ago

Hey HI, 

How are you?? 

Please continue this whenever possible. 

Posted: 2 years ago

Hello! Maaneetian, hope u all r doing great. I am really thankful to my lovely readers who waited for this story and the last love. I couldn't update earlier for I am suffering from post covid parosmia( smell altered disorder) this is really annoying and depressing and it's been a month and half now earlier I use to cry and could hardly eat though iam much better now a days.Hope I would get back my smell sense back to normal. 

If update are not regular please bear with me.

Over to you. Enjoy!


Part 5

A smile lingered her lips as she kept staring on the ceiling of the guest room laying on the bed.

 

She is in the KM not in the outhouse. Initially she had been against Dadima's order. She had seen Maan suffering. Her presence troubled him. Kept him agitated and she doesn't want to cause any pain to the person she loved the most.  Not to the person who back in the past had vowed to keep her happy. 

To see hatred in the same eye which once knew only to hold love for her had been torturous to her also. 

A lone tear rolled down her cheek but this time it accompanied the a joy too.

when Pinky called her to inform about her appointment at the hospital by Maan for Her. She couldn't help the sprouting hope to get back what had been lost to her. Her husband, her lover and his lost memory.

She not only decided to obliged by Dadima's wish to shift to KM but also went with Pinky to the gyny despite her visit to the doctor early that morning only. Could she deny his wish? Sometimes. But not when her man with a heart of gold, shone like a diamond from whichever angle she sees him.

He is the kohinoor diamond. He had accepted Another man's child earlier also and now too he is concerned about the baby who he think is illegitimate.

Geet's heart swells with pride and her heart stumbles and fell in love with Maan all over again.

"Baby you know how lucky you are to be part of your father" she caressed her flat stomach. "He is a real gem and you don't worry he loves you too. He was angry with me, that's why he called you…." Geet felt her throat clogged with tear. She couldn't speak further. WHAT an irony Maan has called their very legitimate child ,illegitimate.

 Even the knowledge that he has amnesia couldn't lessen the pain she felt when he spoke those poisonous words.

She couldn't sleep the entire night before. His words kept on playing in her mind like a tape recorder.

 It felt like she could hold back. She wailed and mourned all the unfairness babaji has done to her. All the losses she had. She mourned for every loss. For Darji, for her Mummy and papaji, for rajji, Tito and even for Brij.



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