Virman ff-Main hoon hi nahi iss duniya ki PART 13

I am a silent reader on this forum for about 2 months and read many os,ff,ss and felt to write one on our one and only Virman.

This would be a tragedy story but with love,friendship and hatred

I will decide later that it will be an ff or ss depending on the response from you guys

So are u ready?


PART 1 : PAGE 2  https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3250650?pn=2
Edited by rida001 - 9 years ago

interesting concept
continue soon

Yup!!

that great dear.very happy that you decided to write on virman.

interesting concept dear .continue soon .

virman power made u active lol

sounds interesting😃continue soon👍🏼

[QUOTE=uzmasable] virman power made u active lol[/QUOTE
will continue in two or three days

pls do continue...

Sorry guys for updating it too late  but was busy in school studies. Here is part 1 for this story.
Hope u all like it and please comment your suggestions and views.

1st part

'Maanvi kia kaam tha jo itni mujhay bulaya hai mein music compose kar raha tha na.'said Virat

'Wah kia zamana agaya hai yahan tamhara partner bore horaha hai aur tum wahan music compose kar rahay thay wah bhai wah'said irritated Maanvi

'Acha  Maanvi aao baitho aur batao kyun moon pholaya hua hai' Both sat on bed.

'Viraat di ki shaadi ko do hafte ho gai hain  aur tab se main bahut bore horahi'  Maanvi made sad face 'aur agar mein issi tarah baithi rahi toh laagta hai keh kuch hi dino mein mein iss kamre ki furniture ki tarah pari nazar aaogi phir khush rahna'

'Arey Maanvi itna bhi ghusa sehat ke liay acha nahi hota hai bhool gai kia keh when Viraat is here not to fear'

'Haan haan janti hu tum kitni bongiya marte ho mein kabse bore baithi hu na tum hotay ho na hi di woh toh apne sasural aur uske kaamoon mein itni busy hogai hain keh apni akloti behn ko hi bhool gai hain'  maanvi sad in a low voice

'Partner tum fikar maat karoon hum dono mil ker is boriyaat ko door bhagne ka plan banate hain theek hai'  suggested Viraat

'chalo tum keh hirahay ho toh maan lete hai'

'dramay kaam maanvi'

'phir chalo shuru ho jao '

'Kis liay?' Viraat was confused

'arey abhi toh kaha tha na sochna hai toh socho'

'Haan haan chalo sochtay hai'

Both then started thinking viraat was sitting while maanvi start moving left to right and right to left.

'IDEA' Maanvi  shouted

'Kya' said Viraat exitedly

'Kuch nahi bhool gai'

'Tum bhi na itna chillanay kia zaroorat thi mere dimag mein bhi jo idea araha tha who bhi chala gai'

Maanvi started laughing 'tumhare dimag mein idea hahaha  acha ab apni bakwaas band karo aur mujhe sochnay do'

Both started thinking again. Meanwhile maanvi felt headache she tried to ignore it. Viraat was not seeing her as he was lost in his thinking. Maanvi  again felt pain and held her head which also went unnoticed by him until maanvi accidently threw a vase on the floor while helding her head.Viraat saw her and went to her.

'Maanvi tum theek toh ho na aao baitho yahan  per' 

 Viraat made her sit and passed her a glass of water.Viraat then started to walk outside.

'kahan ja rahay ho viraat' said maanvi in low voice

'Maanvi mein doctor ko bulane ja raha hu tum idhar hi roku'

 When Viraat said this Maanvi become frightened and made an excuse that now she is okay but Viraat was not listening to her. She pleaded to him to not to call a doctor as it scares him. She tried until he said okay and made her sleep. But Viraat was not convinced so he decided to go and tell Bhai and Bhabhi about it.

Knock knock''.Jeevika opened the door

'arey viraat aao na koi kaam tha kia?'

'haan bhabhi pehlay yeh bataii keh bhai kahan hai?'

'haan viraat bol mein yahi hoon'  said Viren who was sitting on the chair doing some work on the laptop.

'bhai bhabhi mein aapko kuch batana chahta hoon per kisi pe faislay per aanay se pehlay  meri poori baat sunlejiye 'said viraat in a serious tone

Viren and Jeevika were a bit confused and  scared of what viraat was going to tell them.

'Viraat ab bol bhi na'

'Asal mein baat hai keh aaj maanvi ''

'Aaj maanvi bahut bore ho rahi thi toh us ne socha keh ''

Everyone Viren,  Jeevika  and Viraat were shocked to see maanvi standing on the door.

'Kya aap log mujhe aisay kyun dekh rahay hain jaisay mein ne koi qatl kar  dia ho kisi ka'

'nahi mannu aisi baat nahi hai  who tu achanak se agai na toh sab chonk gai'

'arey choknay ki kya baat hai mein koi bhoot thori na ho aur na hi aap log bachay jo mujhe dekh kar dar jai gai'

Viren and jeevika were now relieved as there was no such problem but Viraat was not.

'Aik minute' Maanvi went behind Jeevika and said bhoo .  Jeevika became scared

'Matlab mein galat thi aap toh sahi  mein baachi ho jo itni  jaldi dar jati ho'

'mannu chup kar pata hai na mein teri..'

'Haan haan pata hai ap meri bari  behn ho aur baron ko darana nahi balke unka aashirwaad lena chahiya'

And Maanvi bent to take her blessings and again felt some headache but without noticing I by someone especially Viraat she managed to stand up.

'Maanvi kya  tu har waqt nautanki karti rehti hai'

'Maanvi tum batao tum kya keh rahi thi aur viraat tu kia keh raha tha' Viren asked

Viraat was about to say when maanvi held his hand stopping him to say anything  to them.

'Jeeju woh viraat aur mein ne socha keh jab se aap dono ki shaadi hui hai hum bahut bore horahay hain toh..

'toh kia tum dono ki shaadi kar dein' Viren said

'NAHI' Maanvi and Viraat screamed together.🤢

Both Jeevika and Viren saw them and smiled at them.😊

'Bhai lagta hai aap ham se pecha  chur wana chahtay ho issi liay hamein itni bari saza de rahAy ho'

'Jeeju shaadi ke baad   aapke dimag mein kuch zyada hi shaitanian agai hain wah meri di ka asar hai  akhir behn hain meri khoon ka rishta hai hamara kuch toh seekhay gi na' On this Jeevika  blushed .☺️

'acha mein yeh keh rahi thi keh hum bahut bore horahay hain toh  kahin bahar chaltay hain'

'kahin ka socha hai saali sahiba?'

'haan jeeju issi liay toh yyahan  aai hoon hum na shopping ke liay chalte hain kyun di'

Jeevika nodded in yes but viraat and Viren helplessly saw each other. Viraat  then assured him that he will do something.

'Maanvi mera khayal hai  yeh acha idea  nahi hai' Viraat said

'Kyun?' Maanvi making face

'dekho maanvi samjha karo bhai aur bhabhi ki abhi shaadi hui hai toh hamein unhe kisi romantic jagah per lekar jana chahiye na'

'viraat tum bhool gai di aur jiju ke saath hum bhi ja rahay hai aur remember hamari shaadi nahi hui hai toh hum wahan jakar kya karein gai anday bechay gai'

'agar romantic nahi toh kisi lake ya park chaltay hain wahan maza bhi aai ga'

'hum do saal ke bachay  hain kya keh hum lake per jakar swimming karein gai aur jholay jhalay gai'

'Maanvi mera matlab hum kahin chalte hain na jahan hum dheer saara maza karein'

'toh tumhara  matlab hai keh shopping pe hum maza nahi karein gai'

'Nahi'

'tumhay maza  aai ya na aai hum toh  shopping pe hi jai gai kyun di jiju'

'Haan mannu chalte hain aur waisay bhi shaadi ke baad mein shopping pe hi nahi gai'

'aur jiju aap?'

Viren helplessly saw viraat and said okay. Maanvi  showed thumbs down to viraat. All were now agree to go to shopping for some fun.

ISHQ E MAMNOON HAI PHIR BHI YEH DIL ISHQ KARNE SE DARTA NAHI...

Edited by rida001 - 11 years ago